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  • weheartpuck

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    There's so much sexual tension between them oh my goodness. This story gets better with every chapter so please keep updating! :)
    October 15th, 2012 at 04:18am
  • heyJAYhey

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    ahhh yay!! can't wait to see what she says?
    October 14th, 2012 at 09:05pm
  • dallasstar28

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    I hope she does live with him. I hope Hayden doesn't cause any trouble.
    October 14th, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    James is such a gentleman, I hope he can convince her to live with him Cool
    October 14th, 2012 at 05:49pm
  • Ladyfiaran

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    Wow, I understand a bit now but James is being such a gentleman. I hope he can help her figure out her compulsion Cool
    October 1st, 2012 at 10:51pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh, he's too nice. Can't wait for more!
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:48pm
  • alexismae;

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    I love this story! I can't wait to find out what happens between Alayna and James next!
    October 1st, 2012 at 06:14pm
  • fangirl1999

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    Interesting chapter. So maybe James will ask her to by his roomie to get her out of her unsafe neighborhood?
    October 1st, 2012 at 04:42pm
  • heyJAYhey

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    Love love love this story!!
    October 1st, 2012 at 02:27pm
  • dallasstar28

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    Her and James would make the cutest couple! Cant wait for next chapter
    October 1st, 2012 at 07:45am
  • ally...

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    I hoped for more bantering, but her inner monologue is just as good. Can't wait for more!
    October 1st, 2012 at 07:20am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    I love how James beats them up and is such a gentleman, I do wonder why she breaks into houses, though Cool
    September 21st, 2012 at 10:50pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Hmm...thank goodness for James! I just love him in this story.
    September 21st, 2012 at 08:52pm
  • ally...

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    Yay James for the save! Again, their bantering is spot on. They read so back and forth and I love it. James being stubborn is awesome and I like that neither are willing to give into the other. Can't wait for more!
    September 21st, 2012 at 06:37am
  • fangirl1999

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    I just found this story and read it all. Interesting start so far! I think it would have been better though if Neal asked if one of his teammates had sent her as a joke, not Ovechkin.
    September 21st, 2012 at 06:19am
  • daisylove

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    can't wait for more! i already love this story :)
    September 15th, 2012 at 09:12pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Oh shit.
    September 15th, 2012 at 07:45pm
  • lostandfrustrated

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    Loving this story! The way you manage to write Lainie's conversations with herself really brings out her hilarious personality and, I just wanted to say that since your first story, it is amazing how fantastically you have improved in the way your writing flows! (Not that there was anything wrong with 'Secretly'!)
    September 15th, 2012 at 07:00pm
  • weetziepigi

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    I randomly happened upon this story the other day, but I am LOVING it so far! So glad I found it!
    September 15th, 2012 at 05:18am
  • Ladyfiaran

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    I hope James doesn't actually call the cops, I think she has more of a compulsion rather than any criminal intent :O
    September 15th, 2012 at 04:57am
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