Fear Itself - Comments

@ theperfectpirate
LOL oh my goodness. in a few days, i'm starting a second draft with all the changes me and my eventual co-author, hannistic, made. i hope they're for the better. i mean. we think so. SO HEY, it's not totally over!

@ popular mechanics.
brb gonna go curl up and cry for a month I'm so upset by this because this is the single best thing ever and I'm obsessed with it and just gonna go sob sob sob and print it all out and make a book of it for myself only and write my own review and say its from new york times because its only for me and me only so no one else will see it and the review will say "BEST STORY EVER I CRIED WHEN IT ENDED SOB SOB SOB FIVE STARS" and run on sentence but i'm so sad and now i dont want to finish it.

@ theperfectpirate
IT IS, i finished it last night! (i'm probably just as depressed as everyone else, i don't know what to do with myself)

WAIT ITS OVER?!?!?!??! Obviously I didn't know that because I'm not at the end but ITS OVER?!?!?

@ theperfectpirate
: DDDD that's so sweet! hahaha. take your time! i'm not taking it down or anything. if you have any questions or comments or anything, please tell me or message me, whatever. i love getting feedback!

I'm so in love with you and this story and I'm still not caught up but I'm getting there.

@ Brooki3
We totally plan on sending the final copy to a publisher, once it's all done. Thank you!

I can't believe it's over. I remember the months spent reading this as soon as I got an email saying it was updated. Please do send this to a publisher. I think this story will take off. Especially with the way the government is becoming in America. I believe that it might touch the hearts of those people who want our democracy back. I love this story and I wish you the best of luck with it.

@ Sunshine Suicide
Thanks! I'm glad! : D

Awwww man. I adored the whole of this story :D

@ Hello I love you
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

In the next couple of days, I'll be starting a revised version with lots and lots of changes! Or Avery's story is being written as well, which will be an interesting perspective on the whole thing.

This was fucking amazing and I'm so sad it's over :(

@ popular mechanics.
That sounds amazing, actually. I can't wait to read it :)

@ Takoda
Maybe! I'm definitely posting a revised version of Fear Itself. People probably won't be interested in reading the same plot twice, but a lot of changes were made, and my eventual co-author, Hannistic, and I have a better grasp on the world in 2057 now than we did. So there'll be a lot of differences at the same time.

@ popular mechanics.
I hope you decide to post the sequel here, no matter if/when you decide to write it. :) And i figured as much, in regards to Tali and her father. :P

@ Takoda
Thank you so much! A lot of it is left open because eventually there will be a sequel. I don't know if it'll be any time soon, and I certainly don't know if it'll be posted here.

As for Tali and Nate, I think the fact that she let him live, even though she wants nothing to really do with them speaks volumes about her as a person and still makes sense for the strange, conflicted relationship they have. Definitely, if there's ever a sequel posted here, their relationship comes back full force. And the GFR is, well... I mean, you want to hope they succeed right? Hahaha, at least they have the support of the people.

@ Takoda
Thank you so much! A lot of it is left open because eventually there will be a sequel. I don't know if it'll be any time soon, and I certainly don't know if it'll be posted here.

As for Tali and Nate, I think the fact that she let him live, even though she wants nothing to really do with them speaks volumes about her as a person and still makes sense for the strange, conflicted relationship they have. Definitely, if there's ever a sequel posted here, their relationship comes back full force. And the GFR is, well... I mean, you want to hope they succeed right? Hahaha, at least they have the support of the people.

Literally, i smiled every time i got an email about an update. Please don't tell me it's over! D; like, what does Thalia do about her dad? How do they fix the government? So many unanswered questions to such lovely, terrific, heart-wrenching story! Very well done, by the way. I love it!! <3hi

@ kariajaderose
Avery is also a mom. he just refuses to accept that one.

Lol and Avery's bitch fit he had when he saw the two together hilarious- he's 24.. blah blah blah cradle robber blah blah blah not good enough XD