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WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?

OMG. I was kind of sort of (really fucking) happy when Daesung kissed her. WHY DID HE HAVE TO BE DRUNK?

GD needs to, like, back the fuck off.



Lulz. Still love him, though. c;

Haha, Seungri made a good move getting out of there after his commentary in the infirmary. Truth or not, I'm pretty sure Hyun Ae was going to smack him again if he said anything else. And it looks like Hyun Ae was saved from Seungri's teasing, although she probably didn't need much saving with her threat. xD Taeyang, if you don't know what the firewater is made out of, then why the heck are you drinking it? For all you know it could be lethal! Ahahaha, oh wow. Seungri's quite amusing when drunk it seems. I get the feeling there's something in Hyun Ae's past that's holding her back from returning Daesung's(or anyone's really) feelings.

I feel like the Aesung ship sailed pretty well this chapter, but it feels like the G-Yun(my ship name for them) sank a little. T_T Oh well, as always this was amazing. :)

I wrote a really awesome long comment for the last chapter but then I realized I never clicked submit...T_T so its been a while since I commented! I was actually shipping T.O.P and Hyun Ae as soon as he got into the story and when you said he was your original plan to be with Hyun Ae I squealed with joy! xD I mean he's a scary yet sexy badass and Hyun Ae is that one girl that could handle him. I imagined them having that relationship where instead of them arguing and she cries and I dunno runs to GD or seomthing she pushes him back because she's a strong women >3 But I see there's a lot of Daesung and Hyun Ae shippers...which I guess is fine too >< I actually think their relationship is very cute. I'm literally torn either way because I dont want to break poor dae's heart either.

I love this story to death though, I literally only come on mibba now to read this and your Yunho story. Which btw I love that you update so often unlike other authors who have great stories but disappear for months, come back, write one short chapter, then disappear again ;~; You...are amazing. Keep doing what you do bc I like.

I love this story...I can't wait to know what the whole deal is with Hyun Ae and the messed up government...

And TOP scares me. Just sayin'. XD
I love GD and his personality. I love it when his leader personality comes through exactly when it's needed, but otherwise he's fun loving. I think it's absolutely funny that the festival was his and Seungri's idea. XD

Lovely update, regardless of length!!

That was so adorable.



SO MANY SHIPS.

I'm so happy that Hyun Ae stood up to TOP! I hope Hyun Ae stays stong and doesn't let him get to her too and hopefully finds a way to keep him out of places he doesn't belong. Although I doubt even saying there was a quarantine in the medical wing would keep him away from her. I get the feeling TOP's pretty stubborn... I think it's cute that GD busted Hyun Ae working when she was supposed to be taking it easy, but didn't give her a hard time about it. It's very sweet of him really. Also, I love GD's ending comment about the festival and Hyun Ae's reaction to it. It's totally cute.

Thank you for the special thanks in the author's note. :) As always, I'm happy I could be of some assistance. I look forward to seeing what Hyun Ae and the others do next!

Ha she finally stood up to TOP, good on her, His reaction was curious. I do wonder what he's thinking.
The Summer Festival sounds wonderful, a night to just relax and celebrate. Also sounds like Hyun Ae has a bit of a 'thing' for GD! lol

Thanks too to Oceanid for the help you give, I am enjoying reading this a lot

ooooh TOP is so intense and hard, and kinda sexy. It's lovely you've made him an unlikable character (so far) too easy to write so everyone is nice and happy and friendly so fans aren't upset by someone being cast a a sort of bad guy but then the stories have less interest. The conflict between him and GD makes it so much more realistic. He is a hard man, but is there a different side beneath, and how far would he go to protect the colony?
GD cares a lot for her, but I think he's very curious to find out what her past holds, and Daesung is obviously a man with a mission but he can't push himself too far. There is so much about Hyun Ae that is still a mystery

GAAAHHH THE LOVE MYSTERY SHAPE IS SO INTENSE. I CAN'T EVEN!! STAHP. DON'T STAHP. YES. NO! GAAAAAHHH!

I'm really liking the idea of GD and Hyun...they seem to have great connection and relate closely with each other because of their similar background...but Daesung also has a lot of chemistry, as the two are so caring and nurturing...

I was surprised with the pop in by TOP... the man scares me here. So glad GD stepping when he did.

GUH! I thought Daesung was going to be the lover! But now with GD like this...IDK! And TOP being the love interest??

---eh, why not? She can BIGBANG them all. =P

GAAAHHH THE LOVE MYSTERY SHAPE IS SO INTENSE. I CAN'T EVEN!! STAHP. DON'T STAHP. YES. NO! GAAAAAHHH!

I'm really liking the idea of GD and Hyun...they seem to have great connection and relate closely with each other because of their similar background...but Daesung also has a lot of chemistry, as the two are so caring and nurturing...

I was surprised with the pop in by TOP... the man scares me here. So glad GD stepping when he did.

GUH! I thought Daesung was going to be the lover! But now with GD like this...IDK! And TOP being the love interest??

---eh, why not? She can BIGBANG them all. =P

Oh my god, my GD/Hyun shipper heart is going crazy right now. I tell you I will go down with this ship! I feel bad for Daesung, the strain of workiing to care for and to heal so many people must be a heavy burden. I get the feeling that it isn't just all the work he's doing that's made him so tired, but the way Hyun Ae's been avoiding him as well. The conversation between GD and Hyun Ae really showed his soft and caring side. It was nice to see comfort Hyun Ae and offer to be there for her if she needed him. Also, totally loving how GD went into absolute protective mode and called out T.O.P on the threat he made to Hyun Ae.

T.O.P. is a man in severe need of a blow job. Like, THAT WOULD MAKE HIM HAPPIER.



SHISUS.

But, I really hope Hyun Ae gets better! Maybe she'll share her feelings with Daesung? He's a cute. And I'm totally rooting for them now, since they're so cute together. SEE WHAT YOUR CHARACTERS DO TO MEH?

You describe the horror of the new intake so well, Hyun Ae is pushing herself to her limits and it's no wonder she just couldn't handle any more. Her reaction to the 'thing' she was told about, to avoid Daesung, was so real for a person hurt before and unsure how to trust.
The poor girl with no tongue, what horrors had she endured?!
GD is obviously taking an interest in Hyun Ae, and I'm glad he found her, she obviously still has many many scars inside.

Just one little thing too, hope you don't mind, but in the part about the tongueless girl you say "heart-shaped woman" I don't think it's what you mean.

I don't know why, but I sort of want to see the tongueless girl again. I thought she'd be a cool love interest for T.O.P. Lawd, it's late. I'm speaking nonsense.

And my senses...sense a Daesung and Hyun Ae moment coming real soon~. Yeah? c:

I can't help but feel bad for Daesung in this chapter, as Hyun Ae runs away (both literally and figuratively). It seems as if he really is at a loss for why she's 'avoiding' him... I feel so saddened by all the rescues and what they've gone through. It's no wonder they're so terrifed of everyone, even those who get them out of the bad place they're in. And poor Hyun Ae, having all those memories come back to hit her at once. I'm starting to worry that Hyun Ae's condition will only worsen if she remains surrounded by the rescues and that her helping in the infirmary is doing more harm to her than it's doing good to anyone else.

Gahhhhh..... poor Hyun Ae.
I really like and appreciate the realism that you put into the chapter...that its not over for the victims once theyb are rescued. That poor girl... I won't lie, her whole tongue less thing both freaked me out and intrigued me.

Oh! I forgot to mention this in the last comment I made...Daesung having a thing for Hyun Ae and she being clueless...gah, its cute!! and I hope Seungri is still alive... XD

But yea... im starting to think that GD will make this a love TRIANGLE............

Gosh, I had beennso bad about reaing my favorite stories... but it worked out slightly better cuz I got two chapters to read. XD.

Oooooo I wonder who the love interest is going to be... I had thought it was Daesung for sure, but now GD is looking to be a candidate... onto the next chapter!!

Bit late getting to read this one, I really love your dialogue, it's so natural. Seungri's teasing sounds just like people I know!

Bahaha, I adore how Seungri is so pleased with her ignorance towards Daesung's feelings. Her threat is quite amusing too. I think Daesung has a 'thing' for her too, but I can't really say I ship them completely yet because... well I ship her with a few people in this. I hope Daesung won't be too hard on Seungri? I mean, the poor guy's already in a world of hurt as is. I think GD was very sweet in his response to Hyun Ae's question and feel that it really shows just how much he cares about everyone.

Aw, bless Hyun Ae and her social ignorance. I also believe Daesung has a 'thing' for her. Although, I ship them, sometimes I kind of ship her and Seungri, especially with the last chapter but I swear, Aesung is my story otp. And also I still have to say that GD is a sweetie. I do hope he stays like that and doesn't have a dramatic character change or anything.