The Business of Being - Comments

._. IT SUBMIT BEFORE I WAS FINISHED.
As I was saying, Pete is skeevy and Ryan is sad and perfect and Brendon makes me want to cry and Spencer is just fab.

._. IT SUBMIT BEFORE I WAS FINISHED.
As I was saying, Pete is skeevy and Ryan is sad and perfect and Brendon makes me want to cry and Spencer is just fab.

RYAN ISN'T ALLOWED TO HAVE AIDS OKAY NO
he's my bby
WHY WOULD YOU GET ME ANGSTIN' SO QUICKLY SIGH
ryro lemme hold you~~
AND BRENDON
BRENDON URIE YOU NAUGHTY BOY YOU
SPENCER LOOK AT YOU SPENCE
BEIN' ALL FAB AND STUFF
I JUST WANT TO HUG EVERYONE HERE AND BE LIKE LET ME HOLD YOU
EXCEPT FOR PETE
EW NO PETE YOU NEED TO GO
~~JUST DINNER~~~
JUST DINNER MY BUTT OKAY
._.
BUT YEAH.

crying because ryan is my favorite person in the whole world oh my goodness
okay
let me compose myself before i read and proceed to FANGIRL ALL OVER THE DAMN PLACE OKAY

Bill. Ugh, I hate him.

The smut however, was good.
Poor Ryro though WHY? WHY? Ugh. Go away feels

WTF BILL. THAT SLUT.

RYAN. JUST LETTING PEOPLE TAKE ADVANTAGE OF YOU RYAN. WHY DO YOU DO THIS...

OH SPENCER. SPENCER SMITH IS A PERFECT HUMAN BEING

he’s long decided that he’ll die before he forgives himself.

That's so tragically beautiful. IT'S SO... PERFECT

Can't get over the emotion packed into this. Can't get over that unamused smirk Ryan's giving the camera in the top left corner. Brilliant chapter, of course. You're going to kill us all with feels, aren't you. Nope, that's not even a question.

THE. LAST. LINE. SO. EFFING. CUTE.

And I feel like none of my compliments would be new. So just THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AND I'M JEALOUS

It should feel different, but doesn't.

Brendon was Vegas

Ryan missed Brendon so much but he doesn't think he deserves him and Brendon just wants Ryan and now Ryan's got AIDS and... Forgive the summary. It all just hurts me so...

I love your style of writing, it brings a lot more meaning, despite the fact that you're not even writing long chapters. It just says much more than a long, descriptive chapter would, and not many people can really get that style just right. You should feel proud!

This. Is. Perfection.

Oh my goodness. How on earth do you convey so much personality and mood and EVERYTHING in so few words? Just everything about this chapter is ngf

WHA....

The anger in one little action is actually surprising. YOU HIT THAT HOOD BRENDON. RYAN'S A DOUCHE.

But he's not because he's sick now AND HE'S NOT SORRY OH MY LORD DOES THAT MEAN HE THINKS HE DESERVES IT MY HEART IS EXPLODING...

I'm gonna end up crying. I just know it

This is intense. I've got no other words for it. I wonder where its going/how you'll continue. Hope you've got plans.

Also wanted to say Ryan is SO FUCKING GORGEOUS in the pics in your layout. Very nice choice. When a "book" has a nice "cover" it makes me want to read it more, or at least adds to my enjoyment.

Wow, I hate you. What are you gonna do next, make him die? I SHOULD GET OUT OF THIS WHILE I CAN, BUT I CAN'T. THE FEELS ALREADY.

I hate you and your perfect short sentences.

It kind of confuses me but in a good way (whaat), so I hate you even more for that.

alright... i like this. i like it a lot. & i don't usually read slashes that aren't avenged sevenfold. in fact, it took me ages to get into slash at all. but i like your writing style. it's different & unique. it's kind of all over the place, but it works. it's like... one thing is happen & then something completely different & i'm confused bug that's what makes me keep reading. that's what made me subscribe. because i am DYING to know what is going on. i applaud you. because i rarely subscribe to anything that comment swap brings me to. :)

I don't really know what to say because this is just great in ways that I can't even even comprehend.