December 7th, 2012 at 11:33pm
The Business of Being - Comments
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"You're a fucking jerk," Brendon says, and it should sting but there have been worse things in the last month. Ryan just nods. That makes me so sad. You kill me.December 7th, 2012 at 11:13pm
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Your descriptions are both crude and beautiful. Totally stunning. And Brendon's reaction. It made me laugh a little. Actually, this whole scene just made me laugh because Brendon jerking off to Ryan and trying to smoke at the same time...it's a really amusing mental image. But completely tragic. CompletelyDecember 7th, 2012 at 03:38am
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Shit just got real. Why is Brendon trying to smoke while he jerks off? I thought he knew better! And now he's got a lungful of smoke. And Ryan with AIDS. Not his brightest day.December 6th, 2012 at 02:50pm
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RYAN HAS AIDS?! Way to stab me in the heart straight off. LIKE... NO... I MEAN... WHAADecember 3rd, 2012 at 05:28am
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This is already intense. And I'm still in shock you're doing a chaptered story.
Anyway, I really liked the first three lines with Pete (lol) it just sort of puts you right in the action. I don't even know, I already love it. More soon, yes?December 3rd, 2012 at 03:48am
I also like the lack of emotion in the Pete/Ryan scene. Hardly anyone gets the "just a fuck" feel right.