December 11th, 2014 at 04:13am
Ugh, I just love your writing, cuzzo. It's perfect. I love how different, yet very similar, the lead characters' lives are. You portrayed it beautifully!
I can't wait to see what happens!
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December 11th, 2014 at 04:13am
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This was really well written and I enjoyed reading it =)December 10th, 2014 at 02:23am
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This was really well written and I enjoyed reading it =)December 10th, 2014 at 02:23am
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....there's not even any chapters posted yet. O_O
Edit: Oh, okay. Haha. I was about to say, how can you see chapters already? xDMarch 11th, 2014 at 06:15am -
Oops.. I totally commented on the wrong story! I'm sorry!March 11th, 2014 at 05:36am
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i really like how's this story going! excited for more!July 9th, 2013 at 04:26am
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i really like how's this story going! excited for more!July 9th, 2013 at 04:26am
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Hi there! I'm from comment swap! First, I'd just like to say that I do enjoiy your layout because it is simple but unique. After the first chapter, I'm interested in continuing but I don't feel a strong need to. I only found one mistake, which is near the end. The sentence reads, "You can never take things seriously and be civil about anything, can you?" It should read, "You can never take things seriously OR be civil about anything, can you?" That's a minor problem and barely derails from the story at all. I am going to continue reading because I'm curious as to the back story between Kenzie and her father, however I think the opening could be more intriguing. This is a good start :)June 27th, 2013 at 06:50am
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Omg I just found your story and I am totally in love with it! Please update sooonnn!! I love it!!May 31st, 2013 at 11:10pm
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Amazing chapter
Update soonMay 18th, 2013 at 05:22am -
Amazing chapter
Update soonMay 18th, 2013 at 05:22am -
Great chapter
Updates soonApril 29th, 2013 at 05:47am -
Enjoying it so much, cant wait for the next update
April 22nd, 2013 at 09:37pm -
Great chapter
Update soonApril 19th, 2013 at 03:52am -
ummmmm WOW! i just read this story straight through this is AMAZING! please post more soon! I'm seriously addicted!April 15th, 2013 at 03:47am
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You needs to updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee soon. I know you just did, but still. I'm excited :)April 9th, 2013 at 02:28pm
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Update soon
I'm all bubbly in side just thinking what will happen
Great chapter :)April 9th, 2013 at 08:47am -
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I gotta say this story is pretty amazing so far. I haven't seen any errors so far in your story and it's very well written. Also I like how your words just flow together and just how your characters have devolped. I personally loved the description because it really pulled me in and made me wanna read your story and I actually like the layout you have right Now for you story. But anyways keep up the good work:)March 28th, 2013 at 01:34am
I can't wait to see what happens!