Yeaaaahhh! It's been updated. :D I think I'll be nice and go update Forget Me Not now.... :) But anyways, I loved this. :3 Can't wait to see what happens!
So I have a theory. She was molested, her mother refuses to believe it and she succeeds in spite of that. At least that's what I've got so far, or she just doesn't like her family. I wouldn't, who takes family pictures?
Haha, I'm sorry, the drug dealing just made me giggle. I've seen some people get extremely excited over drugs before and I find it hilarious. So, his story is he's got a drunken mother who's more like a child than a parent.
So I like your characters so far. They seem real and have similar situations to real people nowadays. Your writing is really good, like really really good. I like it. (:
I'm curious as to see what the destructive nature of Kenzie's family is. All it seemed to me was an annoying mom who wanted pictures and then maybe the dad was kind of an ass to his wife. I'm guessing there's some type of domestic violence going on there though but the wife doesn't really seem to put up with it and takes it out on her daughter? I don't know, just me guessing. Typically I am not a fan of stories that have abusive families just because you see that so often in stories but I read the first few chapters of this and I like the way you write. And Chris Hemsworth mmmm. :) I'm interested to see how these two come together and if they make each other's lives any better. Subscribiiing. XD