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  • wicked innocence

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    Gahhhhhh. I'm addicted x'D It's only been 8 hours and you're feeding my addiction. <3 I can't wait for moreee.
    February 18th, 2013 at 04:17am
  • wicked innocence

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    Wow WOOOT! I'm really loving this story babe! Can't wait for an update! :D <3
    February 17th, 2013 at 08:36pm
  • BrookieCookie490

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    I loved the update! Why do I have a feeling that those trees may be near a certain girls house?
    February 16th, 2013 at 04:57pm
  • wicked innocence

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    Yeaaaahhh! It's been updated. :D I think I'll be nice and go update Forget Me Not now.... :)
    But anyways, I loved this. :3 Can't wait to see what happens!
    February 16th, 2013 at 06:33am
  • Skylight Madness

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    So I have a theory. She was molested, her mother refuses to believe it and she succeeds in spite of that. At least that's what I've got so far, or she just doesn't like her family. I wouldn't, who takes family pictures?

    Haha, I'm sorry, the drug dealing just made me giggle. I've seen some people get extremely excited over drugs before and I find it hilarious. So, his story is he's got a drunken mother who's more like a child than a parent.

    So I like your characters so far. They seem real and have similar situations to real people nowadays. Your writing is really good, like really really good. I like it. (:
    February 14th, 2013 at 07:16pm
  • kili the dwarf

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    Donna is like a dragon lady isn't she lol.

    I'm still trying to figure out what exactly this story is going to be all about, but so far it's fairly interesting o me.

    It's nicely written as well and the banner and layut are pretty. I'll rec and sub.
    February 9th, 2013 at 12:49am
  • wicked innocence

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    @ kate austen.
    I know...jk. But seriously you're such an amazing writer I cannot wait to read more. So get to updating :P <3
    February 7th, 2013 at 08:48pm
  • strigoi.

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    @ Brokeh
    Yaay, thank youuu. You're a doll. ^_^.
    February 7th, 2013 at 08:28pm
  • wicked innocence

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    Subscribed :3 this was awesome Hun!
    February 7th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • silk tea.

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    I'm curious as to see what the destructive nature of Kenzie's family is. All it seemed to me was an annoying mom who wanted pictures and then maybe the dad was kind of an ass to his wife. I'm guessing there's some type of domestic violence going on there though but the wife doesn't really seem to put up with it and takes it out on her daughter? I don't know, just me guessing. Typically I am not a fan of stories that have abusive families just because you see that so often in stories but I read the first few chapters of this and I like the way you write. And Chris Hemsworth mmmm. :) I'm interested to see how these two come together and if they make each other's lives any better. Subscribiiing. XD
    February 7th, 2013 at 04:01am
  • Let It Fall

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    I really can't wait to see where this is going! :)
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:25am