Drown - Comments

This does not sit well with me, you driving in heavy snow. Having said this, you are Canadian so really you should be a dab hand at this malarky!! But there is something about this chapter that tells me that at the end of the next chapter I'mma be sitting here like this O.O

Please update soon :) I love ya!! x

erhgufdhgds do you even understand how amazing I think you're writing is? I loved every single second of this chapter. I'm sad that they're still fighting and I'm wondering what deep rooted thing could be wrapped underneath all that. Hahaha I can't even be optimistic, I know things get worse before they get better.
I wonder what the guys think of Brian's silence and how they handle it. Roll it off because he has his moments? I loved this so much and I'm so excited or more, so much more. Keep updating darling! <3

PISSY PANTS IS RIGHT, GOSH BRIAN STOP BEING SO PISSY
But hey he broke the unspoken vow of silence first MUWAHAHA

Oh Johnny, he's always such a little jerk, I love it. He's like a child sometimes. And I am enjoying friendship between him and Lyndsey because they are pretty much perfect. I feel like they unconsciously just teamed up on Brian. IN YOUR FACE PISSY PANTS.

I loved the update so very much. You already know how much I love this story and once again...IT'S FANTASTIC!! <3333

i have a feeling something bad is going to happen on their "little" trip to cvs....cant wait to see whats next :)

so apparently i'm not the only one who senses that something bad is about to happen. maybe we're wrong though...

hope brian gets that stick out of his ass soon and talks to her.

ICEY ROADS!
that sounds horribly frightening...driving on regular roads sort of already frightens me haha.

...I sense danger ahead...

Why does this chapter sound so ominous? I mean Lyndsey and Johnny are going to the store while it has started to snow and Brian is still acting like a complete asshole. Even the guys and gals can see the tension between the two. I look forward to the next update!

I seriously want to know what Brian's deal is! It doesn't make any sense for him to be so pissed, there must be something deeper going on. At least he showed he still cared about Lyndsey's safety there at the end, but she didn't really see it that way. I hope nothing happens to her and Johnny on his oh-so-important trip to get cigarettes...

Love this story so far, I can't wait for the next update!

So I cam here to read this bad boy again and realized that my comment didn't post the first time I read this. EXCUSE ME MIBBA! ..or it might have been because I was on my phone haha

first off...
ALRIGHT MR. PISSY PANTS, YOU NEED TO CHILL OUT.
AND GEEZE MOM, YOU SHILL OUT TOO.

My gosh, everyone in her life needs to chill out, eat some oreos, and drink some malibu because that's the life.

You already know how much I love this. I am a greedy ho after all ;)
and I keep reading it and falling in love even more. Seriously, your writing is absolutely amazing! I love it so much! <333

Pfft. Brian always has his knickers in a twist about something or other. He is a big girl!! Tee hee.

I, for one, already love it!! And I can't wait for more...even though I know I have to...because you're skipping off on holiday!! Selfish!! Tee hee. x

I love this already ^^
You're writing is amazing and I hope you update some more so that I can enjoy it further more =)

loving this! your "fluffy" stories are the greatest and you know it. please never hesitate to post any fluff that enters your lovely mind. you also know how much i love your writing, so i won't bore you with the same stuff i always say... (but it's so good!)

i was getting annoyed myself just reading the conversation between her and her mother. i think we all have someone like that in our lives... and it's so infuriating. really curious to know what is up with brian. it was like he was fine one second, and a completely different person the next. it wasn't just a mood change... it seemed more extreme than that. i can't wait for more! <3

also, HAVE AN AMAZING TIME IN VEGAS!

OH MY GOD.
I am in love with this already.
Who else loves pointless fluffy crap? *raises hand* Yep, that'd be this girl right here. xD

Seriously, though, you are really great at bringing your characters to life. I can already tell how strong of a personality that both Lyndsey and Brian are - it really comes through nicely in the writing. And her mother! Boy, what a real piece of work she is. I'd be more than mad every time I spoke to her if she questioned my decisions and badmouthed my fiance like that.

AND WHAT IS UP WITH BRIAN? BAD BRIAN! BAD! YOU RUINED LYNDSEY'S DAY!
I need to know right now what is up with him. I suspect cheating. But I hope I'm not right because he and Lyndsey seem so perfect together already that I don't want their relationship to be ruined.

Lastly, my favourite line came from Brian where he said, "Well, they said they'd see me later, but..." I just lol'ed so hard at that. He is such a dope. xD

LOVE THIS!

i LOVE it! what is wrong with brian though? you always do sneaky things like this woman! ive missed your writing. its so perfect!

Oh my goody goodness. I like it. I like it a lot.

Very excited for new stuff to be coming from you, my darling.

I wonder what crawled up his bum and died! Or maybe he just wants to spend the small vacation with Lindsey and not with the others since they are all going back to the studio. And the meeting that early seems to have annoyed Brian and didn't mean to snap at Lindsey. I look forward to the next update!

I loved this. You already knew that since I've been obsessing ever since you told me about this but oh my god. I love you're writing, it's easy to picture it my head and the characterization you manage to pull together in one small chapter? Amazing, completely amazing. I'm excited, as always, to read more of what you've written. Love pointless fluffy crap wifey. No need to thank me for the support babe, anytime <3
Keep it up darling, amazing. AMAZING

EXCITED, AM I! I just noticed the link to this on your profile and just HAD to check it out! Loving the layout and the banner. Leighton is a total babe. xD

I don't know what this is about but I cannot wait!

Ohhh another story with Brian that is coming out! I am very much excited for the first chapter!

Oh man you have no idea how excited I am for this!