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I WOULD LIKE MORE, PLEASE.
Chris Evans is just amazing and I really hope that Jackson's just this really nice guy because I like nice guys, okay? And it'd be a little cliche if he just suddenly with no warning at all turned into some kind of asshole because of Grace's inevitable little crush on Chris and his feelings for her. Gah. I hope things unravel soon! and I hope Jackson's not a dick about the pictures online, maybe he should buy her a puppy to make up for Helen taking Fudge away.

Not Fudge! Bad Helen!
But in walks Chris. He's there to save the day like a real life superhero.

Good riddance to bad rubbish! THAT'S YOU HELEN. But poor, poor Fudge. I don't want the little guy to go! I'm happy Chris showed up though, and those pictures taken of the two of them...I BET THEY MAKE A DARN CUTE COUPLE. And I think this comment, "You have to have good people around you. People you can trust and will keep you grounded." was totally aimed at Grace! Christopher, you smug, adorable shit! And now they're going out for drinks. Is this gonna be good or bad? I don't know but I'm so happy for an update! <3

Yay cuteness!

We finally got to see what's going on in Chris' head! He so has a thing for Grace and he knows it. YOU'RE IN DENIAL, BRO. The sooner he admits it to himself, the sooner he can figure out what to do about it...starting with getting that girl OUT of the friend-zone. Idiot. I'm glad I'm not the only one that doesn't trust Jackson. ZACK, YOU KNOW WHAT'S UP. Thanks for the update <333

he so does like her and he needs to accept it!!!

The Chris chapter was definitely needed and accepted into my welcoming arms. Now we know where he stands. Kind of. haha What a darling.

Sorry, buddy, that's what happens when you friendzone someone like you did Grace. She's trying to move on instead of pining over your ass. She doesn't owe you diddly if you only wanted friendship from her initially; why should she wait for you to maybe someday change your mind? Besides, does she even know that you dumped your now ex-gf?

i love it! great pov on chris...update soon.

I just want them to make out already. That would make my day. And don't think I failed to notice the WYN gif. He just has so many sexy moments in the movie that I can't even blame you lol =)

Wow I am so far behind on this. BE PREPARED FOR A LONG COMMENT BECAUSE OH MAN I JUST SAW A GREAT LINE FOR CHRIS'S HOUSE YES.

Chris's house was surprisingly normal. I guess I had been expecting something ludicrously over the top, with art deco paintings of his face on the walls and a TV that came out from behind a secret panel.
I'm actually offended that he doesn't have a tv that comes out from a secret panel haha

Our first kiss was already out of the way, so what did a bit of innocent hand-holding matter?
JUST YOU WAIT UNTIL CHRIS SEES YOU. HE'LL GET JEALOUS.

Because there was Jackson - and he was talking to Chris.

Oh shit.
That was my exact reaction. I was like OHHHHH SNAP WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN NOW

No, no, no. They can not start some kind of bromance. I am completely against the idea. It is unnatural.
HAHAHAHA! Oh lord the bromance would kill me. Poor Grace.

I said nothing more, pulled the balcony door shut behind me and left with Jackson.
GRACE. YOU HAD CHRIS EVANS ALONE ON A BALCONY AND YOU ARE LEAVING. I AM JUDGING YOU SO HARD.

OH MAN THIS JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER AND BETTER! The tension and everything. Ahh! I just lofe this! And now on to the next chapter!

"You're very chatty today. Actually I'm getting used to your short answers. They're pretty common these days."
GRACE. EVEN CHRIS IS FEELING YOU AREN'T FEELING RIGHT. GET IT TOGETHER.

"You can rely on Tara surely, and me."
I was reading this and was like "yeah you can rely on Chris, wink wink" and then I read this Firstly, Tara is a lunatic. and busted up laughing.

Suddenly his arms were around me and I did nothing to fight it. I just stood there and allowed myself to lean in to his chest ever slightly.
TENDER MOMENTS. Ugh. I just love this. It just shows how vulnerable Grace is. And she really needs to accept her feelings for Chris and get rid of Jackson even though he is a nice guy. He just isn't the RIGHT guy.

NEXT CHAPTA! This comment is getting long!:)

"I'll thank you to shut your mouth sir. Have you even seen Sharknado?"
HAHAHAHAHA THAT IS A QUALITY PIECE OF CINEMATIC GENIUS!
Saw that bad boy in the theaters!

giving me something else to focus on besides my unrequited like for Chris.
unrequited like? How about loooooove

"I've never made someone jealous before, it's oddly liberating."
I'm with you on that Grace.

Actually, I hadn't had sex with anyone in quite a long time. I'm talking cobweb territory here.
AHAHAHA OH MY GOD THIS IS PERFECT

Oh man this chapter was pure gold. It was so serious yet so hilarious at the same time! Jackson, oh Jackson I love you. You are such a sweet guy but I don't want you with Grace because Chris. But AH. I want you to have so much happiness.

Thanks Zero, I am so torn with my feelings! But I love this story so much oh my lord! <3

Loved the paragraph explaining the lack of intimacy. "cobweb territory"
Jackson's kind of a peach. It's going to get even more interesting.

Whoa whoa whoa. Are Grace and Jackson gonna do the dirty?! She's not ready for that! Is she? I don't think she is. And I hope she's not gonna do something she's not ready for just to prove to herself that her feelings for Chris are 'just a crush'. I mean, feeling like she can rely on Jackson is one thing. No need to rush things, Grace, you got this! ALSO. There is no way that Chris could ever be lame. I mean. Let's be serious.

hahah I THOUGHT GRACE WAS GOING TO SNAP OUT OF IT. oh geeeze. can't wait to see where you take her next!

I like how it was there normal hang, but off because of everything that has happened.

Also bringing up that Jackson had to be a serial killer, again, was the best thing about the chapter.

Firstly, Tara is a lunatic.

Perfect way to make me laugh. For serious. This chapter was cute, but I feel bad for Grace. This isn't her. I feel like she's trying to convince herself that she's happy with Jackson, but she's really not. And I think sooner or later Chris is going to pick up on that. I love the hug at the end though, he knows her so well. I love him. AND HIS FACE.

Great update!! :D

So I'm in love with this story. You are an amazing writer! These are just a few of my favorite parts:

"I tried to sound sure of myself, but I was doing an awesome job avoiding eye contact."

"It meant we weren't going to some fancy restaurant that served disturbing dishes, with a menu written in french to confuse the unsuspecting. That way you didn't know you had eaten snail entrails and a pony until it was too late to discreetly spit it out into a napkin."

"It's weird not knowing what to do with your arm/hand when someone's let go."

I am definitely subscribing and looking forward to the next update! I can't wait for her to finally be with Chris ;P

This has got to be one of my favorite chapters. You can feel the change in their... relationship. It's tense and almost like she's walking on eggshells. It's not all t-rex helping Chris out of a jam and hair and makeup anymore. It's taking a turn for the serious. Never mind the humorous comments I love so much. I think Chris needs to strap on a superhero suit(hello Johnny Storm) and save the day.

One word answers, wuh-oh. That is a definite sign that something is wrong, and Chris has already picked up on it. He's gonna bombard her with questions and I hope so, because I'd like to know what's going through her head. She's all sorts of confused between the two dudes, isn't she? I would be. They're both great but Chris Evans. CHRIS. FUHREAKING. EVANS. One look at that face and it's a done deal. But he has a ho-bag girlfriend. Ugh. ALL THE DRAMA. Love this update!

PERV BRIGADE, FTW.