Carry On - Comments

Brian is in denial...and Zack is onto something. Loved this. :)

Of course Brian doesn't see she isn't the same. He wants to go on like nothing has ever changed! I can't wait to read more!

Liking the fact that Zacky pays more attention to Brian's daughter than Brian does. I'm really liking this story in general.

I'm so frustrated with Brian. He's in his own bubble not seeing how badly it is for Liza that he's raising her "Hard".. When in fact he's just pushing her down and Zacky oh god. In a way he notices that she's numb but I think he believes it is for ocmpletely different reasons.

This story's captivated me so continue the frequent updates, please if its not too much to ask haha :D

This story is fantastic. As for the title, I like A Lonely Road. But I also like the current title too.

I love Liza's thoughts, but no one truly understands why she thinks the way she does and why she acts that way. Zacky does help and comfort her, but he doesn't understand and he doesn't try to either. I am intrigued how the phone conversation betwen her and Brian will go. I'm glad that she stood up for herself and honestly she shouldn't feel bad that she hurt him because she was only speaking the truth and how she feels.
I think you should keep the story title. I like the choices you had, but I think Carry On is the best because that is exactly what Liza is doing.
I hope that you update very soon! I can not wait for the next update.

I like Trigger the best out of them bencasue it goes alone with Liz'a's feelings and how she is broken and only a tripper sets her off. I just feel for her, yet I don't. Although I know what it's like to feel nothing at one point in time!

I like Trigger the best out of them bencasue it goes alone with Liz'a's feelings and how she is broken and only a tripper sets her off. I just feel for her, yet I don't. Although I know what it's like to feel nothing at one point in time!

I like A Lonely Road in a way cause it does describe Liza's situation as you say but Trigger feels the best somehow, since there's a bunch of twists in a way that seems to trigger her emotions and her dads... :)
Also great update- I think it sucks that nobody is realizing things, they're completely blind and oblivious to the fact even Zacky. They make Brian the victim when Brian's taking out his issues on Liza - update soon!!

@ BeenDownThatRoad
Thank you for commenting. You'll see the characters in the story develop more in the next few chapters. I think we all get to a point where we just want our parents to understand. Thank you.

@ sup.jessay
Trigger was going to be the original title but I didnt think it wold be clear enough to the reader. And thank you. That's exactly what this story is meant to be. This story has been my release for two years so I'm glad you see that in it. Thank you for commenting.

I think i really like Trigger a lot. Pulse is a strong second, just for the reason you wrote. i think it's wonderful that you're writing from this perspective. I feel like a lot of people can really connect with LIza and how they're feeling or have felt in their life. I remember sort of feeling like this when my dad used to get mad at me. i know some of the comments i said in my head were the same. definitely a thumbs up on this story. love it <3

Her somber thoughts break my heart. I hope she finds some kind of outlet where she can release some of the inner anguish she seems to be harboring. And really, if they keep telling her to remember that things aren't as bad as they seem, or that she should be happy because she has it so much better than others, she is going to self implode and they will all be shocked, they need to wise up and notice that she is struggling.

Well I hope people do comment more. I love this story. It makes me cringe, their relationship is so... Distant? I dunno how else to word it, they just do t seem to connect like they should. It's sad because Brian is just not seeing what the pressure is doing to her and she's starting to buckle and they all seem to think that because she's been raised In wealth that her problems arnoon existent and they she takes everything for granted... It's really shitty! Update soon:)

@ Mockingbird;;

You're welcome ! I'm happy I didn't overinterpret things. And I'm pleased that it helped you too.
So yeah, don't even thank me! I can't wait for the next chapters (take your time too :))

i loved the update..but i think brian tok things to far since him and the guys would always go out and party at her daughters age. But i understand that he is cares about her safety and all..
as for the title i dont really know, i feel like in a way it does go with the story but at the same time it doesn't..maybe you can go through some a7x songs and maybe itll help.. :)
anyways great update and hope you update soon :)

i loved the update..but i think brian tok things to far since him and the guys would always go out and party at her daughters age. But i understand that he is cares about her safety and all..
as for the title i dont really know, i feel like in a way it does go with the story but at the same time it doesn't..maybe you can go through some a7x songs and maybe itll help.. :)
anyways great update and hope you update soon :)

Didn't her dad and the rest of them do that kind of thig when they were younger? Like whoa why are they flipping out so much ?

I Loves The update, finally she spole up! Though i hate Brian and Matt for acting The way they do because they're making her feel useless and blame her for it :(

About the story name I have no clue, go with your gut on that one :)

@ Hatikva
This critic was wonderful. And it really helped. You're definitely catching on to what I'm trying to portray. I feel like i put a lot of deeper meanings into my writing, and I get self-concience when I feel that no one else understands. Yes, Liza is supposed to be overdramatic. It's what comes with being spoiled all her life, a teenager, and a woman. And yes she is very much like her father, which is why they fight a lot. More will be revealed soon, and you'll dive deeper in to Liz's mind. More about Matt and Zacky will come to in the fore coming chapters.

Thank you so much for your comment. It really did help a lot, and It's nice to see that some of the readers are on the same page as me. It's nice to see some criticism. So thank you :)