Lucifer's Angel - Comments

oooh its getting good :) cant wait to see where this goes update soon!

@ amabie.
Thank you! I appreciate it. :D

wow this story is awesome :) i liked how you drew me in even from the first chapter so sad yet so good! i like where this is going update soon!

@ Frozen December Moon
Haha, he's not too bad. :)

Nice update I can understand how they feel about that Roy guy. Seems like a jerk.

@ Firefly Alchemist.

It's okay :)

@ missinvisible2013
Aw, crap, I forgot to do that. Sorry!

@ Firefly Alchemist.

You can take me off the author list now :)

@ M_Courtney_R
Thank you! I appreciate it! And yes, killer tentacles are awesome. :D

Ooh, I'm definitely subscribing and reccing this!! I really do love it.

Now this is probably just my inner psychopath talking but I really love all the bloodshed and Killer Tentacles are like the greatest thing ever invented. I mean just imagine if they created a film about it 'Attack Of The Killer Tentacles!'
I love that you're being descriptive with your writing, both chapters are very well written. Like I said I'm definitely subscribing so I hope you update soon :)

Courtney

@ Grump Bunny
Thank you so much! I appreciate it! :D

I'll be sure to fix that. I didn't catch that.

Thank you for subbing. There will be a new chapter Thursday. :)

Wow, I am loving the wording you have. Especially the comparison to an instead of being a man, I think a lot of people actually have that kind of view when looking at people who are 'lower than them' or looking at people who are greater than.

She was obviously afraid. She had been ever she learned of Lucifer’s power

I think there should be a 'since' between ever and she.

:o Oh wow, what happened to Elizabeth sucked. That's brutal. Ouchie. I am so subscribing to this.

@ Yumho.
Hahahahaaaa, you'll see! I did say it seemed like James knew something we didn't. There's a reason, I promise.

Okay...quick question. He was going to give the jewel back to Lucifer, but then he gave it to Alec...why was that exactly?
Otherwise, great update! Love the bloodshed!
Mwhahahahahaha!

@ Frozen December Moon
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. :D

I love this, I think it could be a movie or television series. I also like that the Scorpion is a referencer to one of my favorite Megadeth songs.

@ xMandiblesx

@ Usako

@ Grotesque.

@ Frozen December Moon

@ Yumho.

There will be a new chapter up a little while after I get home tomorrow, just in case you're interested!

@ xMandiblesx
Thank you! :)

Aww his wife got killed! =( Well, what I like about this story is that it's going it's own direction and is original from at least anything I've read so far. I really wasn't expecting a tentacle of all things to come out of no where lol. You definitely capture the element of surprise!

@ Usako
Just look each chapter over for me, and then fix any errors, make it flow better. Maybe give some suggestions here and there on what could make it better.