The Unconventional - Comments

I am so inlove with this story! Everytime i see updates i get so excited and can't wait to read it :) more more more more more, i think we all want more ;)

My hearts no where near ready for this to be over!

I just read this whole thing today and I think I may have fallen in love with this story =) Hope you update soon!

i love drunk josh. he's so adorable

7 days...what's with this? :P Trying to make me go through withdrawal? Update soon or I'll be back to harass you :)

*Akiva

D: why you do this to us? the feels! i feel so sorry for Aiva, since they were having that conversation right in front of him :(

I feel like it is worth acknowledging your growth as an author during this story. The structure of each chapter becomes more potent, almost, and each piece really serves to develop the characters or move the.plot forward. That really puts this story apart from others I have read. Anywho, keep being excellent!

I think just about all of the chapter have made me cry whether it was because I was sad or happy. I don't know how many times I've said it but I just wanna give Akiva a hug. Everything is always working against him. :c And I cannot stand Ronen at all...

I do really think that you should stop putting akiva in situations like those, he should be happy too, goddammit.

This chapter left me crying and kind of empty.

This chapter just kinda stole a little piece of me and left a gap. (I swear I saw something floating away from me...) It's left me longing for something... Feeling almost hopeless and alone but not alone, still reaching out for someone or something to come and pull me out of the half-dug grave and help me fill it with dirt before we walk off into the distance and many long years together as the gap slowly fills back up bit by bit with that someone by my side... <3<3<3

aww, please don't cry kiva!

I really love you for this chapter, you know? Cause in many ways I seem to be the world's biggest disappointment, just cause I don't do what normal teenagers do. Then, when I try it, I'm not allowed, cause mom's like that. I can't even walk home alone in the evening (rapists and stuff... Mom watches too many news). And then all the doctors eye me like I'm some sad oddity.

Awwwh poor baby :( him and Josh are so awkwardly cute though!

I laughed so hard at the song-people comparisons.
"So when it’s finally off the radio and you feel like everyone else has gotten over it, you blast it in your room and scream the lyrics at the top of your lungs."
That really got me. I was just sooo done. XD

great chapter :) i know not a whole lot happened but i really loved the conversation between Ivan and Akiva

Josh is gonna be away for 2 weeks!? I wonder what's gonna happen with that...hmm. 3 days is okay but two would be better...or every day.. :P

AWH Josh needs to come back! I miss him already!

there was no drool face emoticon, but just so you know the intent was there :D i love how they're a proper couple now, its mega sweet. awaiting your next update! oh, and i saw the trailer, it was really good!