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  • rathlora

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    woah i so did not expect Eleanor to come out an defend her brother like that. that was so sweet, how they're there for each other when it really matters :) also, Akiva, you need to get your head out your butt
    June 5th, 2013 at 02:17am
  • wowfairy13

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    This story breaks my heart in a good way, I'm going through a ton of emotions right now. I think I'll get back to reality soon, let's hope. Update soon!
    That is the perfect way to put it.... Breaks my heart but in a good way.
    June 4th, 2013 at 08:38am
  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    The jury is still out on my ruling for how this sits with me.
    June 4th, 2013 at 06:30am
  • Kacen Shea

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    This story breaks my heart in a good way, I'm going through a ton of emotions right now. I think I'll get back to reality soon, let's hope. Update soon!
    June 4th, 2013 at 04:46am
  • Galaxy-Princess

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    OMGG...I love this story so much but it gives me feels and I'm not sure I can handle all the feels :) Can't wait for another update
    June 3rd, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • rathlora

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    omg what just happened!
    June 3rd, 2013 at 05:40pm
  • vinuushka

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    Hahaha, it's okey, i didn't need my heart anyway.
    June 3rd, 2013 at 01:46pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    RUIVBJN,KDB,VX HBG!!! ... fgilvhdjfnkc. Yeah, I think that pretty much sums it up for me.
    June 3rd, 2013 at 04:40am
  • wowfairy13

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    Omg Ronan go die in a hole. And I agree with your note about sex scenes and such. This story is perfectly balanced where there is just enough sexual tension that it feels strong enough to not need the intensity of smuttiness. Thanks for updating, I look forward to more!
    May 28th, 2013 at 06:37am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    I want to hit Ronen. Seriously.
    May 28th, 2013 at 04:32am
  • rathlora

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    ouch. jeez Ronen, homophobic much? anyway, i'm enjoying the built up, then all the smuttiness has more impact :D plus there's more room for drama ad stuff if you drag it out. p.s i so know what you mean about stories not going the way the way you planned. i'll just be typing and be like 'Hey! how come that happened?!' like it wrote itself...
    May 27th, 2013 at 11:59pm
  • Still Dreaming

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    Beyond excited now because of your authors note!
    May 27th, 2013 at 04:52pm
  • vinuushka

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    If only i could hit ronen, that stupid bastard <(｀^´)>
    May 27th, 2013 at 02:20pm
  • vinuushka

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    to be honest i like the way josh is, he feels so much more realistic. and i know how he feels, how hard to stand for yourself, and stuff like that. so i think you are doing a wonderful job.
    May 20th, 2013 at 09:04pm
  • dribblestheturtle

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    You're such a great author that I'm kind of at a loss of words. I love your characters and the story a lot. If this was a book, I'd buy it.
    May 18th, 2013 at 02:35pm
  • rathlora

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    uh huh, i totally see what your saying, i mean, book characters are supposed to make you feel. so even if Josh is totally infuriating sometimes, he is also a good character. wish i could fold paper planes. alas, the sacred powers of origami are beyond my reach
    May 17th, 2013 at 08:18pm
  • yurio

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    Oh my goodnes, I loved this chapter a lot. I mean Josh with the paper airplanes. I could envision that in my head and it's so adorable. haha. I'm so obsessed with this story like you have no idea.
    May 17th, 2013 at 05:30pm
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Cliché? No way! (I've been reading too much poetry...)
    Anyway, (Dang it! Not again. xp)
    This story is incredible and much more realistic compared to other stories.
    It's real life (drama), not television. And I'm glad for that.
    Real is relatable.
    May 17th, 2013 at 06:29am
  • rotten girl

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    It’s insane how addicted to this story I am. Josh is the cutest bundle of nerves ever. I can’t wait for more.
    May 15th, 2013 at 04:50pm
  • rathlora

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    come'on josh! he's totally trying now, step up your game! also i absolutely love the layout :) its like your reading underwater!
    May 15th, 2013 at 04:06pm
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