June 20th, 2013 at 01:34am
I agree, I quite enjoy author's notes. I understand what you mean about where to go from here. If it has any bearing, my thoughts were of how far Josh and Akiva have come not only in their relationship, but individual growth. An option you could explore would be to now move focus to the relationship between Akiva and Ronen. I say this because you have done a fantastic job of weaving this web of characters and now I think the missing piece you need is the two brothers.
Once again, you are one of the most stylisticly expressive writers I have encountered including published authors. I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next! <3
Addiction and anxiety seem to be fighting to overwhelm Josh. I am worried about him and the person he is becoming. He is definitely developing in botu good and bad ways.
I am so excited to keep reading :)