The Unconventional - Comments

Aw, I wish Josh would speak for himself and take up for Akiva sometimes. It makes me so sad that he doesn't. I mean I know he's scared to lose Ronen as a friend, but he should really speak up sometimes. And I love this layout by the way.

This story is incredible, take all the time you need as long as you keep up the great writing! Seriously, words can't describe how many lightyears ahead of any other competition your story is.... it is perfection :)

Josh needs to grow a pair and stick up for himself!!! love the story

I'm so glad you decided to post the playlist because everything I do, whether it be painting, writing, or even just homework has a soundtrack that inspired me :)

update again soon please, i wanna know what happens! :D

It's going to get worse?? Oh boy... So much anticipation...

Whenever I log on I check my subscription box praying that I see that little icon with the Polaroid on a line. I love this, I really like the insight into.Josh's own self reflection, and the.bond he has with his.sister. You are truly an amazing writer!

I really like this chapter. Poor Eleanor though, but your author's note scares me. I'm already crying and I don't even know what's gonna happen yet.

i love Josh, he's so nice. even if he is kind of a pushover

I love it! This story is just so good-Aggggh! Never end it!

I love it! This story is just so good-Aggggh! Never end it!

I LIKE IT SO MUCH

>.< meh, the blood THE BLOOD *passes out*

OMG his finger. :O that's all I can think about. omg... *face squinches up in grossed-out horror*

Oh my god I can't even.... my stomach is feeling like I'm on cloud nine or something dude I have tingles. Frickin tingles. This is so good, the rush is like... something cause I can't even think right now lololol

Awww~

i totally love how this is turning out :D

MORE PLEEEEASE -sobs-

Crying because chapter twenty two D;

Cute story. Love the conflict. Perfect teenage life.