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  • Lillyofthemoon

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    updaaate1!!!!!! <3
    November 14th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • Demolition.M.K.

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    ;~; why you no update??!!!
    September 10th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • sylarisahero

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    upppppdate!
    August 14th, 2012 at 04:02am
  • TheF!ck

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    You have to update! This is one of the best stories I've read
    July 9th, 2012 at 04:04pm
  • sylarisahero

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    please update :(
    June 14th, 2012 at 02:54am
  • ladispute

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    I really love this story, it's so cute and warm and fuzzy, yet already filled with angst.

    Can't wait for another update, keep up the good work! :)
    August 19th, 2011 at 05:57am
  • XrayPineapple

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    I had actually given up on this story, it's been like two and a half years since I even looked and I decided to randomly search it at work... and there are new perfectly amazing chapters, my deary!

    So of course I had to re-read it all and go on a spectacular emotional roller coaster once again, where you played so cruelly with my heart strings!

    I absolutely adore the musings of Mini Mikey, he is such a smart kid and breaks my heart every time he touches on something so fucking adult that a kid like him never needs know, live the myth of marriage doesn't last for ever and that horrible idea that a mother could strike their own child! Not to mention having to read about all the horrible atrocities that are befalling poor Frankie. No child deserves to go through that.

    I love the way you write your characters, even from the tiny snippets of information you drip feed us with we can see that they are such well rounded characters that exist entirely. You truly have an amazing talent, and I love it so!

    Keep on writing, and I'll always be here reading :D
    August 14th, 2011 at 12:33am
  • Jepharee Howard

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    This is just the cutest and most cute and amazing thing ever. I squeal every single time I see an update. And the Valentine's. Ah. Just, aaah. I hope they see each other again.
    You are an amazing writer, and this is just perfect.

    Update soon!
    August 8th, 2011 at 09:55pm
  • Kitty Lunatic

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    You, my dear, are amazing. I like how your starting out with them as kids. It makes me want to pick them up and squeeze them. Deff a subscriber. Update soon. We'll all be reading =^.^=
    August 2nd, 2011 at 07:24pm
  • FearTheWombat

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    I absolutely love this story but I think the plot is developing a bit too slow. Pick up the pace??? :D
    Of course its your decision on whether to do so or not. Either way good story.
    July 30th, 2011 at 06:19am
  • Ermin.

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    I give up trying to write anything that would be helpful to you in terms of suggestions on how to make your writing technique better... You write so beautifully. I love you.
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • marieway

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    This story is so freaking cute, I can't even. They need to be back together though, seriously <33 Update soon :)
    July 18th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • Iero My Hero.

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    *melts inside*

    I feel kind of strange and creepy for being so in love with Frank and Mikey, because
    1. They're kids.
    2. I love them for being so in love with each other.

    I WANT FRANK TO BE MY VALENTINE!

    Haha.
    PLEASE update soon! <333333
    July 16th, 2011 at 10:36am
  • Get Off My Lawn.

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    O.O I love this!!! it's so cute... very well done. touches the heart <3
    Frank and Mikey are so sweet. oh, goddamn it, Gerard is awful LOL
    this is amazing, keep up the awesome work!!!
    July 16th, 2011 at 05:07am
  • IluvItalianGuys

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    I'm not even going to lie... I got way too excited when I saw you updated... And then I got way too excited again when I saw the chapter was entitled "Valentine's Day"... But I really don't care hahaha(:

    So the fact that Frank asked Mikey to be his Valentine effectively made my heart melt into a gooey substance on the floor<33

    I don't even know what else to say without rambling like an idiot, so I'll just say that I loved this chapter and well pretty much this story as well. You're an amazing writer and I look forward to each update. Brava.(:
    July 15th, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • Get Off My Lawn.

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    Oh, goddamn it, you are so good at this!!!!!!!! I love it and how different this is. through a child's view we get so much innocence from Mikey but a mature and creepy lifestyle for Frank. goddamn it, we need more writers like you!!!
    very innocent, very child-like, and very mature. odd combination to write with, yes, but never the less, I love it and I will be back for more. :) keep it up.
    July 15th, 2011 at 01:22am
  • IluvItalianGuys

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    I told you Emily!!(:
    But yes, this is 100% precious and I love it!
    July 5th, 2011 at 01:40pm
  • Genre Defender

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    Hey; a friend of mine introduced me to this earlier today and I practically flew through it. This is really so fucking precious; I love it, and I hope you decide to continue writing it. Soon, please? <3
    July 2nd, 2011 at 09:16am
  • Jepharee Howard

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    I literally threw my hands up in the air when I seen this had been updated. And it was 1 o'clock in the morning.

    ANYWAY.
    That was so sad, I'm just sitting her like 'Oh my God woman if you were real I would kill you for hitting the child version of Frank Iero.'
    And two months? *cries*

    Update soon please! This is my favorite story on here c:
    June 5th, 2011 at 06:46pm
  • Iero My Hero.

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    That stupid bitch.
    How dare she hit poor little Frankie! I have never wanted to strangle a character this much before!
    RAGE, GAHHH!

    Also...
    TWO MONTHS?! MIKEY DOESN'T SEE FRANKIE FOR TWO MONTHS?!?!
    RAGE, GAHHH!

    Hahaha.
    Ahem.
    Angry comment, I know, but I really love this story.
    Please update soon!
    June 1st, 2011 at 08:25am