Play The Field. - Comments

No matter how long I go without keeping up with this story, when I finally do catch up, I'm still blown away at the talent you possess and share with us via every chapter.

You make me laugh, cry and oh, so very angry at Frank's mother. You broke my heart with this last chapter. Two months?! I couldn't imagine two days being separated from my childhood bestie. We got testy when our parents wouldn't let us out to play (we lived across the street from each other too). I just hope Frank will be okay, given his circumstances...and doesn't forget his bestie in Mikey! I adore their relationship.

Can't wait for the next bit! :)

Yes it was a short chapter, however , it was a very powerful chapter. I was very moved by this...
Frank disappearing... I would cry. Legitimately cry my eyes out if my best friend had been taken from me as a child. That is... if I had ever had a friend THAT close. But oh my goodness. So excited for what's next.
I love you, Kaitwin! :D

Yay you finally updated
its as good as I remember and I can't wait for you to post the next chapter

Hey I remember this story, ya its my favorite but unfortunately fun ghoul bow tie. thought it would be good to leave us all hanging for almost two months!
Please I'm begging you to write more soon this is my favorite story and I don't even like Frikeys

This is my favorite story write more soon please

Write more soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

I...just...wow.
This story is great.

When that kid threw Mikey to the ground and Gerard shouted, "You mother fucker!"...I laughed SO hard.
Frankie....jeez, my heart is split in half for the poor kid. I just want him to be happy with Mikey.

Please update this soon. It's so good.

Oh no. This chapter's end ;_;

Please never ever ever ever take that long to update again. D:
I adore this story, it's adorable.

Please don't hurt Frank again.
He is just too adorable. I literally almost felt Mikey's pain.
Please don't hurt Frank again ;_;

I love you.
That is all. :)

Awe this was so cute :) but when Frankie said his mum says he is a bad boy just broke my heart I to itty bitty pieces :(
And I want the cuteness to stay no depressing stuff cuz I hate reading about poor Frankie being mistreated and shit :(
I can't wait for more which I hope is soon cuz when I saw this was updated I wanted to do a cartwheel from happiness :)

*sigh* I'm so in lesbians with you...

First off, I love how you pull off cute without it being ridiculous and sugar coated. You make it work without making me want to gag, in fact, I just 'awwww' and giggle and I never giggle, so that's saying a lot.

And I love how you make the Ways. They're not the usual fucktard parents that the main character hates because, you know, it's a story about kids, so they have to hate their parents. All that angst and whatnot...

But then at the same time, you have Frank's mom, who's a cunt, but he still loves her and it doesn't seem overly dramatic or too Cinderella-esque. It all seems like it could actually happen, and it's just great. But at the same time, my heart definitely broke a little when Frank said that his mom told him that he was bad. Seriously. He's so adorable in real life and in this story. I feel like even as a kid, you've got his personality down.

And Frank and Mikey have dimension, even though they're just kids and nobody ever has that. It's usually baby talk that makes me gag, but seriously, I've never seen anyone write kids in a way that I like, but we all know that I fap to this so hardcore.

I was having such a horrible day today, but seeing this posted definitely made it a little bit better :). I hope you update regularly, I love this story so much.

Awwww. They're so lovely. And I think it's horribly realistic how Mikey has no idea what's going on.. :(
You're doing an amazing job.

Okay, so I was totally being a derp and being all 'eewwwww a story about sports. I'm a hipster derp who derp derp derps.' Basically, I saw anything relating to sports and was like 'ehhhh probably won't read it' but tonight, I needed to find good Frikey and I saw this and BAM. My god. This is fabulous (like all of your Frikey). I love the realism in that Frank doesn't rat out his mother. I love the slow-moving pace of this letting the story tell itself without just rushing into something. I love the multi-demensional characters (like Gerard and Joey having the ability to be both nice and douche-baggy). I pretty much just love this.

I think my favorite bit was when Mikey asked what a fag was. Lul. Innocence. So adorable.

I'm really digging this, and I'm one of your billion and six subscribers now. Way to be one of the only mibba authors that I passionately follow! You're basically the sex :D

I really like this story :D! Can't wait for more :3<3

So I freaking love everything about this story. Cannot wait for more - and hearing that you're excited for the later chapters just makes me even more excited for it :'D

But srsly. "Frank shrugged, attacking my Optimus Prime with his Megatron." LOL my mind went straight to the gutter lmao. Fml. :P

Loved the update tho, can't wait for more <3

So, I screamed... very loud...
But yeah. Onto the comment.

I almost wish there was more on Mikey's mind racing. What is... Never mind. You did elaborate. Haha. Already, you build suspense before Mikey asks questions about what really happened. I almost feel like Frank's reaction is a little too... less innocent. I know the kid has been through hell, but then again, he's still in 2nd grade and most kids that age don't really know how to keep secrets and tell things to everybody. However, the reaction after his out burst seems totally appropriate.

The rest of the chapter was perfectly child-like and I'm curious to know what Mikey's mom thinks. Does she secretly have this feeling that Frank is being beaten? Or what? I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

Finally, an update. XD

I love the way you've portrayed Mikey, he's so protective over Frank. I love this story so far.

I'm so happy you updated this, it's an amazing story. Definitely one of my favorites on here.
It's so cute, but sad as well. I love it.

I feel so sorry for Frank D: