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  • karly mcdonald

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    LOVING IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work cant wait for more chapters :)
    April 21st, 2013 at 04:24pm
  • hell-okitty03

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    Omg best chapter yet! You give really detailed descriptions i like it lololol...great chapter hope u keep updating
    April 21st, 2013 at 03:10pm
  • tezza

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    I actually can't even begin to describe how freakishly accurate this is in relation to feelings.. If that makes sense.
    Yes, you made up for it! haha. You never let me down!
    April 21st, 2013 at 02:23pm
  • ElloHarley

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    @ tezza
    So sorry. Its half written, promise. Be up tonight :)
    April 20th, 2013 at 05:16pm
  • tezza

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    Waiting so patiently for your next post... So... very... patiently...
    April 20th, 2013 at 04:21pm
  • tezza

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    Oh my gosh this is amazing. Poor Tobe though, left hanging hahah. I love it!
    April 18th, 2013 at 06:18am
  • been_waiting

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    DAYM THAT WAS GOOD!
    April 18th, 2013 at 02:32am
  • Codikins5

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    I love it!
    April 18th, 2013 at 02:15am
  • kshelton2011

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    Oh my goodness Eli is so adorable! Any other guy would have Hit that already XDD
    April 18th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • babybrandibear

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    I love this story too much. Update ASAP!<3
    April 17th, 2013 at 08:33pm
  • DePrEsSiOn_PoEm

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    Nyuuu~ More! It's so good.. please update</3
    April 17th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • graphicromantics

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    Girl.
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    Why do you do this to me.
    Tobe/Eli (Teli?) feels unfffff <3
    Update, pretty please!
    April 17th, 2013 at 04:11am
  • been_waiting

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    OMG I NEED MOREEEE
    April 17th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • kshelton2011

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    They are just so perfect for each other and I love it ((:
    April 17th, 2013 at 12:12am
  • PoetWithoutHerMuse

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    Okayy I'm way too emotionally invested in this story.... Love the chemistry between the two... Can't wait for an update
    April 16th, 2013 at 10:07pm
  • Zombiesloveme

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    Only on chapter 15 and I love this story, thank you for finally making a charcter who doesn't run away! THis is exactly what Iv'e been wanting! Great job so far! x
    April 16th, 2013 at 07:17pm
  • Muffins_cupcake

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    I'm like Tobe in so many ways, the bluntness, sarcasm, etc. We'd be great friends if she was real.

    Can't wait till the next update.
    April 16th, 2013 at 02:31pm
  • tezza

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    HAHAHAHHA my favorite part so far when he's saying if he's takes off his shirt, would she do him the same. oh my gosh hahahaha. You're so good at writing, and I absolutely love the characters you have created. please, never ever stop! :) You inspire me to keep writing, despite how little readers I have, you're the reason why I write!!
    April 16th, 2013 at 02:13pm
  • tezza

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    HAHAHAHHA my favorite part so far when he's saying if he's takes off his shirt, would she do him the same. oh my gosh hahahaha. You're so good at writing, and I absolutely love the characters you have created. please, never ever stop! :) You inspire me to keep writing, despite how little readers I have, you're the reason why I write!!
    April 16th, 2013 at 02:13pm
  • graphicromantics

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    blurhgfrblgh HOW DOES TOBE STAY SO CALM
    I would've flipped out by then.
    Like, no matter how hot/adorable/nice/sexy Eli is.
    How does she do it? :T

    Oh, and sexual content isn't a big deal for me.
    April 16th, 2013 at 12:32am
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