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  • okwhatever14

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    Please update again soon! I love the parts with Eli's POV...you should do them more often! It kind of captures what their both feeling.
    April 7th, 2013 at 12:29am
  • sydni.

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    Comment swap~

    I like the idea of the story. It's really different instead of a girl and guy screw around, there's actually a virgin in this story. My only complaint is the red font, kind of hurts my eyes to read, but otherwise, I really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work, I plan on subscribing!
    April 7th, 2013 at 12:05am
  • graphicromantics

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    This story is great! Keep up the amazing work.
    April 6th, 2013 at 05:45pm
  • tezza

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    Do Eli's point of view! I'm so curious! :3
    April 6th, 2013 at 02:37pm
  • kshelton2011

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    OH gosh this is getting pretty good ((: I can't wait for more ((: and have Eli fall in love with her ((:
    April 6th, 2013 at 02:31am
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear, I came to this story of yours thanks to the comment swap thingy. I have to say that I liked the second half of the summary which was about the guy. The first half that was about the girl was short and you repeat a few words which worked negatively since this is the summary. On to the first chapter, I found the story to be interesting and with a lot of potential. Keep up the great work and post often. :D ~Marian.
    April 4th, 2013 at 08:48pm
  • Lady.V.

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    Dear, I came to this story of yours thanks to the comment swap thingy. I have to say that I liked the second half of the summary which was about the guy. The first half that was about the girl was short and you repeat a few words which worked negatively since this is the summary. On to the first chapter, I found the story to be interesting and with a lot of potential. Keep up the great work and post often. :D ~Marian.
    April 4th, 2013 at 08:48pm
  • squidgyyo

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    I like this story already. I hate bonnie though.
    Update soon <3
    April 4th, 2013 at 06:17pm
  • Ccasimir

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    Are you gonna write more?! This is AMAZING!
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:27am
  • Ritalincola168

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    You have a great since of writing. I stumbled upon this story thanks to comment swap and glad I did. I love the image you included of Tobe. I love having images like that to read the story. Keep up the good work :D
    April 4th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • purplew4ve

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    This looks pretty awesome so far:-)
    April 3rd, 2013 at 06:23pm
  • purplew4ve

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    This looks pretty awesome so far:-)
    April 3rd, 2013 at 06:23pm
  • humanik

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    Very intriguing. I can not wait until you write more.
    April 3rd, 2013 at 12:03am
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