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  • The Lovecraft

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    Awesome! I just read the first chapter and I'm definitely hooked. I love that all the characters have a unique personality - down to their names which are, btw, so unique but realistic at the same time! Can't wait to read more.
    April 9th, 2013 at 08:37am
  • kshelton2011

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    Why doesn't just tell Tobe about the bet, and situation he is in? She would totally understand.
    April 9th, 2013 at 04:25am
  • TravelerSoul

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    You got me hooked on this like cocaine. The story is amazing and the plot is brilliant. I just hope we could skip the sorrow that comes with the truth, I don't want to see well read Tobe all sad and crushed but it's the love story clichè and I appreciate it. Good job mate, cheers.
    April 9th, 2013 at 12:50am
  • ElloHarley

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    @ floralee17
    Ridiculous, how so?
    April 8th, 2013 at 06:11pm
  • floralee17

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    this is getting so good and ridiculous! tobe is going to be devastated when she finds out.
    April 8th, 2013 at 06:02pm
  • Muffins_cupcake

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    Tobes and Eli are perfection. <3 why cant i have a cute relationship like that
    April 8th, 2013 at 04:38pm
  • sxra

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    this is really good, I like it :)
    April 8th, 2013 at 04:23pm
  • PamelaJaneF

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    Oh my god I just found this story and I'm so happy I did! It's great; I love your writing style :) I can't wait for your next update!
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:11pm
  • tezza

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    I'm waiting for the massive rumors about Toby and money to happen!

    To be honest, I think the one thing that bothers me is how quickly looked over the emotions between Eli and Toby are. Maybe a little more depth that makes me feel as if I'm also falling in love with Toby or Eli :3
    April 8th, 2013 at 03:02pm
  • unmade beds

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    i just found this story and love it so far, in my head i know exactly how i want it to play out so i cant wait to see where you take this.
    April 8th, 2013 at 01:12pm
  • PoetWithoutHerMuse

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    I'll admit I'm a silent reader.. I'm sorry!!
    I love October And Eli!!
    April 8th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • tezza

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    Nooo nonononono don't say that this will be the last chapter if you continue to have silent reader D: Don't break my heart like that. I've already fallen in love with Eli and Toby, you can't take them away from me hahah.

    Keep up the good work!
    April 8th, 2013 at 12:33am
  • elizasonfire

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    I love this story, please continue!
    April 7th, 2013 at 08:28pm
  • Muffins_cupcake

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    I'm definitely guilty of being a silent reader, but I do love this story. (:
    April 7th, 2013 at 08:27pm
  • d.Liz.motty

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    I've been a silent reader, but you deserve recognition. I LOVE this story.
    April 7th, 2013 at 08:14pm
  • ElloHarley

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    @ tezza very loyal reader, I thank you. And I can assure its soon but not that soon.
    April 7th, 2013 at 03:45pm
  • tezza

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    When will Toby find out she's just a bet!?!?!
    Definitely hooked. Fangirling over this xD
    April 7th, 2013 at 02:52pm
  • MidnightDream

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    I began reading it two days ago and im already hooked on it!!!! Great job!
    April 7th, 2013 at 06:49am
  • tezza

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    I LOVED chapter 8! Ohmygosh, keep up the awesome work! I'm getting so excited!
    April 7th, 2013 at 03:01am
  • IceDeath.

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    This is a cute story, and I honestly love it. Please update soon. I can't wait to read more!! =)
    April 7th, 2013 at 02:56am
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