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  • MMM26

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    GASP! Very Happy Wink
    February 28th, 2014 at 04:13pm
  • madds1234

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    AHHHH! I loved it!!
    February 28th, 2014 at 12:48pm
  • bxgurl95

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    I mean I don't know I'm not really worried because we know she loves him BUT I feel like she's be concerned that shes going to get divorced and right back into a marriage. Sheesh I don't know what she'll say.
    Thia chapter read differently that all of your other stories ... I'm not sure why It was still great and everything it just felt different.
    February 28th, 2014 at 08:48am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oh geez. She just got divorced. I have no clue what she'll say. Yes she was just doivoced but she also just had a serious scare. Can't wait for more! Update again soon!
    February 28th, 2014 at 07:09am
  • kendra-rae

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    I love Paul so happy he went and got her.❤️
    February 22nd, 2014 at 02:13pm
  • bxgurl95

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    Jesus what a ride! I really like how you did this chapter, I didn't expect that last part at all. Honestly, Paul is SO in love with her, there no they way of putting it and James understands that she doesn't love him anymore, it's about time. I completely understand where her mistrust is coming from, what he did was absolutely heartbreaking. I hope Paul tell James about Jason, they need to kick his ass collectively lol.
    February 20th, 2014 at 02:17pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    Thankfully Paul got to Clare in time, seriously can't believe Jason did turn out to be a douche. I think Clare is starting to realise why Paul did what he did and hopefully it will help realise where they stand.

    I just love this story! :)
    February 20th, 2014 at 09:53am
  • nanshil

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    I just about cried when Clare first kicked him out of her apartment. It was so gut wrenching. I totally feel for Paul, and Clare. Ahh so many emotions reading this chapter. ANND Jason, what a doucheface. I mean seriously, spiking her drink. She is never going to be with him, he needs to move on and let Clare be with Paul. Jason is almost as bad as Neal. But I did love this chapter as always. Can't wait to see where it goes next. Please update soon!!
    February 20th, 2014 at 03:40am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    I'm so glad he got to her in time. That obviously could've gone worse than it did. I'm glad she knows he's sorry and that he was wrong. I hope she feels the same way when she gets up.
    February 19th, 2014 at 03:44pm
  • WallFlower09

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    love the chapter!! im soo glad she didn't leave but now she has to see things from Paul's point of view...can't wait for the next chapter!
    February 19th, 2014 at 03:06pm
  • ktizzle1010

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    Great update!!! More soon please!
    February 19th, 2014 at 02:39pm
  • madds1234

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    What a chapter!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Clare has to see why Paul did that!
    February 19th, 2014 at 01:06pm
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    Whew!! What a roller coaster of emotions throughout the chapter!! Once again, Paul to the rescue!!! Can't wait for some fun in the next chapter!!!
    February 19th, 2014 at 12:25pm
  • MMM26

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    The whole chapter was romantic. The airport and then the bar, even though it didn't necessarily end well in one (airport) or was in the best circumstances (bar), any guy who does the stuff you have him do is a keeper. Keep it going!
    February 19th, 2014 at 08:35am
  • in.the.clouds

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    Nothing you write could be disappointing. I can't wait for more. :)
    February 19th, 2014 at 08:05am
  • kendra-rae

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    ❤️❤️
    February 18th, 2014 at 02:07pm
  • bxgurl95

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    OMG this is my favorite story, I'm going through withdrawal
    February 18th, 2014 at 03:39am
  • nanshil

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    Wow what another great chapter! I love this story so much. I can't wait for the next update to see what happens! Although, I feel like maybe neither of them should get her. They both hurt her pretty bad. Maybe she could end up with Tyler Seguin! I liked how this chapter focused on Paul's point of view, and how he's handle his decision, and learning that his actions have major consequences. Hopefully in the next chapter Paul will find Clare and they can live happily ever after! :)
    February 13th, 2014 at 06:57pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I can see why Paul was annoyed at himself for making the decision he did. Hopefully this is James coming to his senses and having that realization that him and Clare will never be like they used to be.
    I really hope that Paul fights for her now!
    February 13th, 2014 at 09:50am
  • madds1234

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    I CANT WAIT DOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
    February 13th, 2014 at 04:12am