Cliches and Compunction - Comments

Theo is there when I wake up the next morning.
^Needs to be fixed.
"Well, we were last night, but he wasn't there when I got up so."

Other then that MORE!! lol Amazing. I love that you have all of these updates! you make me all giddy inside. lol

Theo is there when I wake up the next morning.
^Needs to be fixed.
"Well, we were last night, but he wasn't there when I got up so."

Other then that MORE!! lol Amazing. I love that you have all of these updates! you make me all giddy inside. lol

Theos angry? Pooh this is going to be good, I feel like this has to do with either Sadie or Ivan. I really hate safie. She really pisses me off. Great update, post again soon (:

whyy. Theo pissed what happened.

@ Heynow1
Thank you so much, every piece of support means the world to me C:

This is so good! I love reading every update and I get so excited waiting for the next!

@ CptLollipop

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@ Write.with.Love
Yeah and Theo is going to call her out on that, I got me some big plans ;)

@ CptLollipop
It's fine. :) I'm not frustrated with her for not loving him; it's just the fact that she's not acknowledging his feelings that are so completely obvious. Like they keep telling her he loves her, but she ignores it. Then she kisses him, but says nothing can come of it. I just feel bad for Theo, but then feel bad for her because she's kinda pushing him away.

@ Write.with.Love
I'm sorry you're getting frustrated with Riley, I just don't want her to go from 'I hate you, I hate you, I hate you' to 'I love you, I love you, I love you' too fast. Plus it really hasn't been that long since she's started having feelings for Theo, it hasn't even been a week since her conversation with Darren.

Listening to slow Ed Sheeran and Beyonce songs while reading this was probably a mistake because all of the emotions showcased feel tenfold. Lol. Like, why is she so damn stubborn!? GaHHH! She definitely broke his heart with that kiss. I would say she's selfish, but that might be bit of a stretch.

@ AndreaKatelyn
Don't worry she'll call him on not spending the night but it won't be for a few chapters. We got some stuff to deal with too like Darren and Ally, and Kailash and Tyler, and Sadie, and Rileys parents, wow there's lot going on in this story, how did I get here?

I do love you for two updates in one day, I think Theo will make the right choice and choose Riley, I was hoping for a little more betweenriley and Theo, ancd that he would have actually spent the night and they would have really talked, but hey, maybe I'm hoping for things to happen to early on because I'm eager, update soon (:

Loved the new update, fantastic as always, I have a feeling Riley is going to GI back to Ivan and end up getting hurt by him, not just mentally, early on. I just got that feeling from him as a character, and Theo will, of course, come to the rescue lol love him <3 hate this new girl terribly

oooooooo :) can't wait.

Sadie*

Omg I almost died, I know a girl named die who soon exactly like that, I didn't exactly get along with her considering she tried to steal my boyfriend and wreck my relationship lol loved the update(: I'm very interested to see she this is going, can't wait for more!

@ CptLollipop
Okay sounds good(: I run in eastern time

@ AndreaKatelyn
Have half of the next chapter gonna try and finish it before I have to go to my job interview but if not it'll be up around 4-5ish (pacific time)

@ Albluerose
I'm sorry, I don't mean to kill you!
I very much appreciate your life!