Our food arriving offers a good excuse to just stay quiet and enjoy the slightest hint of a sun that peaked through the dark clouds. I dont know why I loved this line so much! But that date was a total disaster and those women were extremely rude! You should've saw me just cussing out the computer screen and slamming my face into my pillow! Lol. Ivan handled it horribly as well because not only was it unprofessional, but it was like he had NO boundaries. Smh. Theo-1 Ivan-0
@ CptLollipop Well obviously, Theo has some type of deep-seeded feelings for her. I'm hot and cold with him. But honestly, I don't know what o make of Ivan. Hopefully, he's not one of those male strippers with the STDs.
What the hell? What kind of logic is that? Frankly, I'm glad she's living with Tyler now even though I'm not really happy about the way it went down. *sigh* Can't wait for the NEXT update! =D
I'm so happy that you love it so much, and that I was able to elicit emotion, it really means the world to me. I usually like where my stories go but sometimes I worry I don't write with enough description or with too common of words for readers develop any attachment. I'll start working on the next chapter right now.
Gahhhh! I love this soooo much! The knot in my throat the entire chapter w/ Jasper was almost unbearable! This is only the 2nd story ever to elicit such emotion in me! Please continue. <3
Comment swap thread- "First I have to say that picture looks SO TASTY! It makes me want to go out and get one.
Now on to Theo, wow that was so wrong of him. I thought at first he was going to run into the lake; but no he goes butt naked and then strips her of her own clothing. Man, I would have punched him in the face! I like Tyler though, he's nice but its creepy the way he was standing at her door. But he is still pretty nice.
-by the way and Rec and subbed. -
The first chapter actually got my attention and I will now to continue to read.
"Good Morning Riley," My announced my arrival into the kitchen the way he had almost everyday. What is supposed to be after the (my) and before (announced).
OMG HE'S GAY!!!
Aww now that's great friendship! This chapter was amazing, now on to the next one.
I understand her pain with the punishment! Oh man who did she kiss and I now see Tyler in a whole different way, Gay Tyler.. I like the sound of that!
WHAT DOES THE NOTE SAY!
I cant wait for the next update. You wrote this in such grace, if that is the right word. I am glued.
I love this. I love the layout and the characters and I love your writing style. In reply to youe first A/N I'd be interested in seeing character profiles.
There were a few mistakes, though; make sure you proofread before publishing.
I dont know why I loved this line so much! But that date was a total disaster and those women were extremely rude! You should've saw me just cussing out the computer screen and slamming my face into my pillow! Lol. Ivan handled it horribly as well because not only was it unprofessional, but it was like he had NO boundaries. Smh.
Theo-1 Ivan-0