Damn This Wild Young Heart. - Comments

Bahhhhhhhhhhhhh. Best ending. Like, I know it's not the "official" ending since there's still an epilogue but, this was like the perfect way to finish his time in San Fran, for now at least. I kinda always knew he'd redeem himself but I didn't think he'd make her mad again before he did it. But that little shit really did it. Ugh. Can I have my own Harry now?

As much as I want them to have a cute long distance relationship, I know it can't happen.... YET! Well maybe I don't know :((( I know deep down Lola wants that cute long distance with that sexy piece of British croissant, it all depends what happens in the epilogue (which btw I don't know what I'm gonna do after this fic I just don't know anymore). UGHHH :((( when he approached her at the MoMA :((( I just all my feels are suppressed and I want to scream because perfect fic and perfect OTP :(((

let's NOT talk about how upset i am that she's crying.
fuckin harry styles gonna get it.

“Can we talk? Please? I need to explain myself and…” He trailed off, before holding up the paper bag in offering.”--I brought croissants.”
this little shit he did not bring croissants.

Harry’s eyes flashed. “You have no idea what I want.” He snarled. “Why does everyone act like they know what I want better than I do? You have no idea about anything because you won’t let me talk!”
i'm having hot flashes

I’d never been kicked out of anywhere in my entire life, let alone kicked out of my sanctuary. The immediate shame that I felt overshadowed however pissed I was at Harry.
i'm upset

her jabbing him in the ribs don't touch me don't look at me don't breathe near me
i'm v fragile right now

ugh i don't want "the most i'll probably get is friendship" or whatever no no no
where's my happily ever after i am upset

@ sandrashameless
I'm working on another story. I want to prewrite a bit to get it established but we shall certainly see!

WHY DID YOU DO THIS TOO ME?! I DIDN'T NEED THIS PERFECTION IN MY LIFE!
but seriously, the first half of this ripped my heart out.
if this is really over, i want another story from you asap thanks!

@ saratastic
I have another in the works! I'm really glad that you like this story though, it means so much to me. We've got a nice little epilogue to go and hopefully that'll be a satisfying ending.

I'm so upset I love these two characters so much and this story got me so hooked onto them and its over soon and that makes me so so so upset :( I can't wait for the epilogue and I wish there was more to this story so I could read more but I'm happy about this chapter because they made up and Harry didn't continue being a little fucker. Even though this Harry story is ending I hope you'll be making another :)

@ Zen Molek
I don't know about a sequel, but the epilogue will hopefully give you the same amount of feels.

@ skyelilly
I'm a sucker for a happy ending as well, but we shall see. And I have the plans for another story in the works!

I WISH YOU WOULD MAKE A SEQUEEEL.
that was way too cute, awww.

I can't wait for the epilogue, but I don't want this story to end! I really hope that you write something else because this was just damn amazing:) ps Can it be a happy ending? I 'm a sucker for those:)

Oh no :(
This is how you were gonna end it?! :((((
I WANT THEM TO STAY TOGETHER

Goodness, I can't believe I didn't read this earlier.

I read all ten chapters in one sitting because I literally could not stop myself. I have no self control. Your story is so unique and definitely one of a kind in regards to plot and I'm at a loss in trying to explain how much I liked it.

I can't wait to read the last few chapters, I'm sure they'll be brilliant.

@ cynicalqueen
Typo fixed! Those damn homonyms. Harry's reaction hurts a little bit, but there is some firm reasoning behind it, so we can't hate him. Yet.

@ blutsteinbattery.
Sorry for the negative feels, but I'm glad that you liked it!

@ kazilla5
Dakota and Niall being all flirty flirty. ;) Please don't jump out of the window! Then you won't get to read the ending!!! Also, Eliza/Harry & Perry/Dimples are like, my OTPs, so Hola being categorized with them is a huge freaking honor. :)

@ EVERLONG
He is trying to save the hurt. His heart is in the right place, if nothing else.

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the ending was not what I expected at all. Harry seemed so enthused when they were texting and when Lola and Dakota got there, but something obviously changed. I'm wondering if Dakota said something to him or if he was having the same thoughts as Lola about how it probably wouldn't work. I'm glad you didn't device to end it there because I was super upset for her and I want it to be resolved. wonderful chapter other than pulling on my heart stirrings! Haha

This is how I feel about the chapter. Don't get me wrong, I loved every little detail, but it was just so heart wrenching. I too wonder whether Dakota said something to him because he was all enthused at the beginning and then was so cold to her at the end. Although, you can't blame the guy either. I caught one little typo:

"I wanted to laugh at her, but I guess I didn’t have any right too."

Awww. That was rather heart wrenching, but I loved every word of it. (:

Oh my god, you can't do this but I understand where he's coming from? But that kiss that he diverted to his cheeks and what? I understand the paint Lola is going through and stop you're making my cry :((((( of this was the end I would've easily thrown myself out of my sisters apartment window :((((((( oh my god, ;((( I can't stop saying oh my god and typing sad faces because that's how I feel. But on the plus note, DAKOTA AND NIALL <3333 but reading this with the soundtrack you put, heightened the inevitable dour mood and thank you for that, really. I hope this story never gets accidentally put down because of mibba's stupid glitches, and I hope HOLA STAYS FOREVERRERR (favorite ship besides Eliza/Harry and Perry/Dimples)

I'm having heart palpitations. I mean I think I can understand what Harry's doing.... He's trying to save her the hurt right? I mean he seemed a little concerned or at least he wanted to discuss the tweets/pictures a bit further but didn't and then from then on things were a little awkward? But that near miss kiss.... GODDAMN. I'm done.

@ sylvia wrath
i knew you'd say that! i'm working on it!

I figure he just trying to save himself a little bit of heartache and there were other factors besides the glaringly obvious long distance and they just met.

@ Littleant
Harry's being a bit of a brat at the moment, yes, but he thinks he's doing the right thing. That's certainly debatable, but can't blame the boy for his heart being in the right place. I'm glad that you like it!