Damn This Wild Young Heart. - Comments

Sorry that was all I could say in that moment.

This story is good enough to the point where I'm just a bundle of emotions.

It was a good chapter overall, even though I wanted to smack Harry upside the head…but that's just a testament to how good your writing is.

Sorry that was all I could say in that moment.

This story is good enough to the point where I'm just a bundle of emotions.

It was a good chapter overall, even though I wanted to smack Harry upside the head…but that's just a testament to how good your writing is.

@ xmunch
You're on to something with the Dakota talk there, so keep onto that theory. Harry's thoughts are a bit similar to Lola's in a sense, but there are definitely some other factors coming into play that will be revealed earlier on. I know it seems a bit out of the blue at the end, but there are hairline fractures shown throughout. A resolution is coming, though, I promise.

@ sandrashameless
You know what could butter me up so I could sound less sorry/write faster?? An update of your Liam story. ;)

YOU DON'T SOUND TOO SORRY! i'm crying... well i would be if i had any feels left. such a cliff hanger!

the ending was not what I expected at all. Harry seemed so enthused when they were texting and when Lola and Dakota got there, but something obviously changed. I'm wondering if Dakota said something to him or if he was having the same thoughts as Lola about how it probably wouldn't work. I'm glad you didn't device to end it there because I was super upset for her and I want it to be resolved. wonderful chapter other than pulling on my heart stirrings! Haha

@ sandrashameless
I'm sorry! Really, I am!

@ formerlyknownas
also I am buying flashing signs and neon vests for proper warning before next chapter I promise.

@ Littleant
I...don't know how to interpret that? But things will get better! It's not the end! I promise!

how could you do this to meeeee! YOU POPPED MY PERFECT LOLA/HARRY BUBBLE!
but omg was it amazing

@ skyelilly
I can promise that clarity for Harry's actions will come in the next chapter. It will certainly change some things.

@ Krystal-Khaos
Writing it was giving me second-hand embarrassment I was squirming in my seat man oh man.

@ saratastic
If your heart can stick around for the next two chapters (I really hope that it can) you will get some explanations for what turd-head is doing and some clarity, so I hope you can stick it out that long!

…no…just no…

@ sylvia wrath
I needed more of a warning. A flashing sign might have done the trick.

Fuck, that's harsh. I feel so much second-hand embarrassment for Lola. :( Poor her.

whAT IS THIS MADNESS??? WHAT???? NO??????

okay first of all it was so cute when she was really excited to see him and i loved when she was interacting with louis and niall and the looks liam gave them at dinner and the fucking TEXTS OKAY WHAT IS THAT

AND THEN THE WAY THEY LOOKED AT EACH OTHER AT DINNER AND THE SMOLDER????
SMOOOOOOLLLDEERR!!! WHOA RE YOU WHO AMI

there is NO WAY THIS IS THE END NO NO NO NON NONONON they ahve to dskgjaklgjdsalgas
i have so many feeligns i practically CRIED AT THE END CAUSE I WAS SO UPSET

WHAT IS THIS TURD NAMED HARRY DOING???? gOD I WANNA SMACK HIS PERFECT HEAD SO HARD IT SPINS AROUND 10000 TIMES

okay no i can't accept this it's so well written and they're meant to BE TOGETHER WAH

please i can't do this i'm done i'm crying

i can't wait for more even though i think my heart can't handle it

Oh god that was awkward. It didn't go the way that I thought it was going to. I thought that she would get some shit from the lads or his management, but I want to know what changed with Harry. Yeah i get that she could just be a one night stand while he was on tour, but then why did he invite her to the show if he didn't want to see her again? That boy confuses me and I just want to hug Lola. I love the idea of Niall and Dakota. This and 1999 are ending soon, so I don't know what I'm going to do with my life anymore.

@ formerlyknownas
I mean, I DID warn you...

oh god. she turned on the phone.

I’d gotten a taste of him and now I wanted more.
she thirsty

Hurry up.
HE WANTS TO SEE HER SO BAD I'M HAVING HEART PALPITATIONS

this fucking winky face thing is killing me
or we could just not talk
i didn't mean it like that
i'm gonna set myself on fire

“I attempted to show him the highlights of San Francisco, but considering it was the middle of the night, most places were closed. He got a very brief version.”
and do we consider her bedroom a highlight of San Francisco, or.....?

“And delicious – do you see Niall’s arms? The things I would do to that boy, sweet mother of Mary, it’s probably not even legal.”
this speaks to me on an emotional level.

“I find you devilishly attractive. In fact, I feel unwell right now, that’s how much it’s getting to me.”
this too. right to my soul.

no. he. did. not.
oh god wHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME?
I GIVE YOU CUTE SICK CUDDLING AND YOU GIVE ME HEAD TURNING DURING A KISS AND CRYING LOLA.
I AM SO DISPLEASED. WILDLY SO.

Lola is hilarious on twitter, not going to lie. I agreed with Dakota throughout the entire chapter (it oddly reminded me of "The Nanny Diaries") but I felt bad for Lola because fans can be really brutal. The note was the sweetest thing ever, and even though it breaks my heart that there's 3 chapters left, I can't wait for the next chapter, =)

@ hearts;
That's a lot of really amazing adjectives and I am super sad that you liked it but also, no, don't cry!

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL PERFECT AMAZING EXCITING
and I cried like a little baby the whole time. Great update!

@ EVERLONG
Oh man, for a second I thought she was going to end it all too, but then I realized that I just couldn't do that to you guy!

@ balinski.
yay for new readers!! I'm so glad that you're enjoying it! :)