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  • ScoutNikhol

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    Just now on chapter 12 and I had to stop to say that this is one of the most well written stories I've read on this site in years. Thank you for giving me something that wasn't a headache with grammatical errors and a way to fast relationship progression....lol sorry for my grammar. I am on my phone.
    November 4th, 2013 at 06:27am
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    Just now on chapter 12 and I had to stop to say that this is one of the most well written stories I've read on this site in years. Thank you for giving me something that wasn't a headache with grammatical errors and a way to fast relationship progression....lol sorry for my grammar. I am on my phone.
    November 4th, 2013 at 06:27am
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    Sooo good!!! Can't wait for the sequel!
    November 4th, 2013 at 02:19am
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    Thanks so much!! Last chapter just posted! Sequel to come soon!
    November 4th, 2013 at 01:23am
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    Awww yay I'm so happy everything worked out!! Can't wait for more!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 04:54pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ Mrs. Shadows
    YAY! I finally finished my project so now I can reply to your wonderful comments!!!

    Fucking on the pool table? Yep, I went there! Brian just can’t get enough of her and he’s going to take her any way he can get her and whenever he wants. Pool table was just the most convenient surface that was closest to the door. LOL

    It seems as though a high sexual appetite runs in the family, huh? Yes Brian, Leah and Kristy are poking fun of the boys. It’s just too fun not to! Don’t worry about it Brian, just go ahead inside. And Brent, shut your face, you have no room to talk!

    OMG he is drop dead sexy for reals! Throw Matt in the mix and we can tag team both of them! Yes please!

    McKenna is quite happy about the fact that Leah will be sticking around! Of course Papa Gates has to throw some type of smartass remark in there. We know who Brian gets it from though.

    OH SHIT! Brian just got his ass handed to him on a silver platter! Don’t fuck with Leah, she goes right for the throat! Nice comeback Bri, you suck….. sorry.

    I don’t know about parents seeing the bending over of the car and the pummeling of the girlfriend, but public sex is TOTALLY hot. Hmmm….. I could work with that idea LOL I wrote the Viagra part in here before I did the other bit in the other story (obviously). I just thought it was a fun little shot that Leah could take at him.

    I’ve been eating ice cream like crazy the past few days because I’ve been PMSing like a bitch. The part of your brain that tells you it’s bad for you doesn’t kick in until it’s too late and then it makes you feel guilty as hell. Stupid brain……

    Brian’s such a sweet older brother. I wish my older brother was that sweet. We used to beat the crap out of each other when we were growing up.

    He’s such a tease!!! But it was oh so worth it! He’s trying so hard to make her realize her own self-worth, the best way to do that is with a distraction LOL

    Not gonna lie, had to take care of myself after I wrote that little part! (Even when I go back and read it LOL) Hmmmm more ideas…. Perhaps involving you, Matt, and a mirror…… My dirty mind is reeling with ideas.

    Yes McKenna, Brian is trying to sleep. Let him sleep so he doesn’t have to put any clothes on and we can picture him lying naked in bed with just a sheet thrown over him. MMMMMMmmmmmmm

    I totally wouldn’t mind having a full frontal nude image of the man stuck in my brain forever. I would never need porn again LOL

    Ugh, I hate that feeling too! I hate when I feel like someone’s watching me.

    Brian, you agreed to take care of McKenna, please don’t starve her to death. I’m pretty sure your Dad still likes her enough to keep her around.

    I’m so not a morning person either. That’s why my hospital days throw me off. I have to get up at like 4:30 in the morning. I would much rather be up all night. There’s nights that I don’t go to bed until 4 am just because I’m a night owl. I’m so going to be a second or third shift person when I graduate.

    Tsk, Tsk, McKenna. Now you’ve gone and done it! Brian is NOT a happy camper right now and I promise you’re not going to get out of this as easily as you think!

    You’re so sweet! I always feel like some of my chapters aren’t up to par though.

    You got lucky McKenna, and even though Brian yelled at you and went off on you about Jimmy I hope it was as effective as he wanted it to be. He’s right, times have changed since he’s been in that situation and he was a lot smarter about doing it when he did it. I think it was a smart move on Brian’s part to talk to her like he did. If you tell a kid/teenager to not do something like that they just want to do it even more. I think Lauren had a lot to do with it too. Hopefully McKenna straightens herself out!

    Duh, McKenna. Michelle’s a piece of shit.

    Go on and get some from yo man, Leah! You can never go wrong with a morning blow job, they can’t be in a bad mood if they wake up to that! HAHAHA! I’m so glad you liked the whole “Brian for blowjobs” spiel! I thought it was really funny too! It stemmed from a conversation that I had with my friends earlier that day about Clinton being the best president and I was like “yeah, he busted a nut every day so he was always happy and didn’t need to start any wars.” LOL

    Go ahead Brian, prove your point. Leah won’t mind I promise!!! Neither will Arianna or I.

    McKenna’s back to being the pain in the butt little sister again LOL. I don’t blame Brian for considering sleeping with other women before he kicked Michelle out, but I think it says a lot about him that he didn’t do it.

    Leah’s gonna have to side with Brian on this one McKenna. He does have a valid point even though he doesn’t necessarily have to be such an ass about it and keep dragging it out. He cares about you and loves you like crazy, he just wants what’s best for you in the end.

    Go Team Leah!! I feel like I need pompoms.

    Typical men thinking with their dicks instead of their brains LOL. I did some research to get all of those songs, most of them I knew and a lot of them are from the 90’s, some even from the 70’s-80’s. Gotta throw in the oldies like Marvin Gaye!

    Yeah Zack. Next time you go starting shit you better come prepared. Brian doesn’t like to lose at anything!

    Let it go already! Yes, Leah did find you a bit funny Brian, but you’re starting to get seriously annoying!

    Of course I had to make sure that Leah got payback for the little morning surprise she gave to Brian! They had some sweetness and some sexiness! I have experienced it before! My hubby’s not super into romance but every once in a while he pulls out all the stops!

    I won’t tell anyone you cried either Bri. (minus the 100 or so people who have read this chapter lol)

    Yes, you’re almost caught up to the most current chapter! Hoping to have more posted for this one soon.

    VEGAS BABY WOOOHOOOOO!!!!!!

    We should totally kidnap them and take them to Vegas with us. It would so be worth sitting in jail for hehehe

    Typical Brian, horny as ever and can’t keep his hands to himself! Even right after he finishes he’s already planning for when he’s coming for more! You can watch, I’m the one who creates Brian’s thoughts and he says it’s ok….. : )

    Gotta throw in the girl on girl action too! No doubt Brian and Matt thought it was hot. I bet Cora got spanked LOL Vegas trips can always get a little crazy! In fact, once I get one or two of my current stories finished I have a plan for a new Brian/OC story that may have some girl on girl and a crazy night in Vegas…..

    That’s right Bri, show her just how she gets to you! Maybe next time she’ll let you play too hehehe

    Brian is quite the dirty talker but he’s met his match with Miss Leah. She definitely keeps him on his toes.

    OF COURSE MICHELLE HAD TO SHOW UP!!

    Things just had ended too peacefully before! There was no way that was the end of Michelle when the divorce was finalized. She is so fake and such a stupid cunt whore and she deserves to die! (not in real life, of course. I’m sure she’s actually a pretty sweet person LOL I’m still jealous of the bitch though!)

    Michelle definitely got what she deserved, and if I was Leah I would have tackled that bitch to the ground and kept hitting her until someone stopped me or she was dead. Leah’s just so laid back and I couldn’t see her putting out the effort to go completely crazy on her. Plus I think it took more of a jab that way because Michelle thrives off of the drama and attention. Leah pretty much just put her in her place and made it clear that she belongs to Brian and Brian belongs to her and that’s just the way it is. I can neither confirm nor deny whether or not we will see Michelle again in the future.

    Thanks SoOOOOOO much for all of the comments and again, sorry I couldn’t reply to them any sooner! I’ve just been so busy the past couple of days and it’s crazy! Hope to catch up with you soon Girlie!
    October 24th, 2013 at 02:58am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    OH MY GOD!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH!!!! I WANT TO YELL SO BAD RIGHT NOW, WHICH I TECHNICALLY AM RIGHT NOW BUT YEAH THERE WILL BE PLENTY MORE WHERE THIS CAME FROM. I can't believe I'm almost caught up, just three more chapters to go and then maybe just maybe I can focus on writing. It's not very likely but whatevs. Alright, let's start from the beginning.

    Ohhhh it's time to party it up in Vegas!! Let's get this party started! Oh what I would give to be in Vegas, having fun and acting crazy with the guys of Avenged and their girls, well except Matt because he's mine, you got that Corra? Mine! lol.

    Here goes Brian and his horny ass lol. I love you Brian. Very hot quickie ;) Get it! Get it!

    “You know you’re getting fucked again tonight right? And I’m not talking just once, I’m talking every possible opportunity,” I said with a smirk as I looked her up and down in her short black satin cocktail party dress that had a single shoulder strap. The strap and bodice were adorned with silver jewels, and while the dress definitely flaunted what she had and did an amazing job at showing off her legs, it left just enough to the imagination.

    That's fine with me. Fuck her as many times as you want Brian, I don't mind as long as I get to watch the show hehe ;) Yep, I'm a pervert.

    Another few minutes went by and another round of shots had just taken place when we heard a shitload of guys start hooting and hollering so loud that you could hear them over the extremely loud music. I immediately made eye contact with Matt, knowing that our girlfriends had been scheming and we forced ourselves away from the group that had formed around us and started heading towards the commotion. Sure enough, Cora and Leah were up on one of the raised areas grinding on each other and laughing like crazy, egging on the crowd. Matt and I weren’t surprised because we knew that both of them were crazy, especially when they started drinking, but both of us were clearly in shock when they went in for the kiss. It started as a quick peck on the lips but when they elicited another loud response from the crowd they smirked and looked at each other with a laugh before going in for the kill. As I watched their tongues brush against each other in the sensual open-mouthed kiss, I felt my jeans instantly get tighter.

    “Holy shit,” Matt stated as we both just stared. “I can’t decide if I should be really pissed off or really turned on.”

    “Fuck that, it’s the hottest fucking thing I’ve ever seen,” I replied as I shifted my weight and attempted to adjust my hard-on without anyone noticing.

    “Is it weird that our girlfriends are making out with each other and we’re just standing here watching them instead of splitting them up?” He asked as he tried to pull a similar move to what I just had.

    “Not as long as they keep their clothes on,” I said as I swallowed the lump forming in my throat.

    “I like your thought process,” he said as we exchanged smiles. “After all, what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas, right?”

    “Exactly.”


    WELL GODDAMN! Mm, some girl on girl action, me likey Naughty So hot! And of course Brian and Matt are just standing there watching. You enjoying the show boys? lol. I would love if they were watching me make out with a girl, that would only turn me on more. Aww come on, why can't they take their clothes off, you know you wouldn't mind watching them touch each other, I know I wouldn't ;) I love that saying so much, "What happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas" That's what you guys get for not paying attention to your girls, you showed them girls :D

    Oh Brian! FUCK HER BRIAN! SHOW HER JUST HOW TURNED ON YOU WERE BY HER LITTLE STUNT! SHOW HER WHO THE FUCK SHE BELONGS TO. DAMN, THAT WAS HOT! FUCK HER NICE AND ROUGH, MM JUST LIKE THAT! LOL OK, I'LL STOP NOW.

    Moving on, “You don’t even have to say it, Babe. You have me by your side for the rest of the night,” I told her and she smiled. “Besides, Matt and I were talking about hitting up the tables back at Caesars and I’m going to need you as my good luck charm,” I smirked.

    “Why’s that? You think I’m going to blow on your dice,” she said seductively and I groaned as she turned to walk out of the room.

    “I’ll give you something to blow if you keep it up,” I told her as I pinched her ass and she jumped.

    “Promise?” She laughed and I growled and kissed just below her ear as I slipped my arm around her waist and we walked out of the room together. As we stepped out into the hallway, Matt and Cora came out of one of the other dark rooms and the four of us exchanged sheepish looks.

    “Hey,” I smirked, “what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas,” I said with a smile and we all started laughing, the tension immediately gone.


    Loved this! So dirty, just the way I like it haha ;)

    Oh damn, the hangover, sucks ass. I've never been hung over before so I wouldn't really know but I know it sucks ass lol.

    OH SHIT!! I KNEW IT! I KNEW MICHELLE WOULD BE SHOWING UP IN THIS CHAPTER! THIS BITCH DOESN'T KNOW WHEN TO GIVE UP APPARENTLY. GO GIVE HER A PIECE OF YOUR DAMN MIND ONCE AND FOR ALL BRIAN OR I COULD DO IT FOR YOU. OH I HAVE PLENTY OF THINGS TO SAY TO THAT CUNT, LET ME AT HER!

    OH MY GOD! YOU ARE PATHETIC MICHELLE GO HOME! HE DOESN'T WANT YOU ANYMORE BITCH, JUST GIVE IT UP ALREADY. YOU DON'T LOVE HIM, YOU ONLY WANT HIM FOR HIS MONEY, HE'S NOT GOING TO FALL FOR YOUR SHIT SO JUST FUCKING LEAVE AND GET A GODDAMN LIFE! PSH, SORRY MY ASS! BITCH PLEASE! YOU'RE NOT SORRY! ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS RIGHT NOW?! THIS BITCH IS CRYING! GOD, YOU ARE SO DRAMATIC AND FAKE MICHELLE! YOU ARE SO LUCKY THAT BRIAN IS A MAN AND HE IS TOO MUCH OF A GENTLEMEN TO PUNCH YOU IN THE FACE RIGHT NOW. LET ME AT THIS BITCH BRI, I'LL PUNCH HER FOR YOU!!! GOD, I HATE HER SO MUCH, PISSES ME THE FUCK OFF. YOU DON'T LOVE HIM AND YOU NEVER DID BITCH, IF YOU DID YOU WOULDN'T HAVE OPENED YOUR LEGS TO A WHOLE BUNCH OF DIFFERENT MEN, YOU FUCKING SLUT. I HAVE NO RESPECT FOR YOU, JUST GET THE FUCK OUT. PLEASE SOMEONE CALL SECURITY BEFORE I GO CRAZY ON THIS BITCH AND END UP STABBING HER.

    “Leah, meet my ex-wife who decided to show up and try to get me back. I shot her down, she was just leaving,” I said as I summed it all up in two sentences and glared at Michelle.

    “That must have been who I heard screaming like a banshee a few minutes ago,” Leah commented. “Excuse me, you’re in my way,” she said as she walked around Michelle and grabbed a beer out of the cooler. I heard my dad snicker from behind me and I turned and glared at him. I had no idea where this was going or what was going to happen.

    “I have something to say to you, stupid Cunt!” Michelle yelled at Leah as she walked over to her while Leah popped the cap off of her beer.

    “Should I sit down first? You look like you could be here for a while?” Leah asked and Cora started snickering along with my dad.

    “You’re a home-wrecking bitch!!” Michelle screamed and Leah sipped at her beer as she looked at her with an expression of boredom. “You’re a fucking pathetic excuse for a human being and you’re completely fucking worthless!” She tried to degrade her and Leah just stared at her and took another drink as the room started to fill with people who wanted to see what was going on. “You’ll never be as good as me! What Brian and I had was real and you can never compete with that!” Michelle yelled again as Matt showed up next to me, ready to help me break them up if we had to.

    “You finished yet? I have shit to do, so…….” Leah stated and a few laughs sounded from the audience that was gradually getting bigger.

    “You’re such a fucking bitch! Brian’s only with you because you’re easy, you’ll probably let just about anyone between your legs! That’s OK though, you can fucking have him. He never satisfied me in bed anyway, that’s why I had to find it somewhere else. You can have my sloppy seconds, Bitch!”

    “Oh, Sweetie, no….” Leah said with a smirk. “First of all, we both know that Brian is more than satisfying in bed. I mean, you probably don’t know it to the extent that I do because it takes two to tango and from what I hear you don’t dance very well. Secondly, he’s not your sloppy seconds, you were just the appetizer that left a bad taste in his mouth before he got to the main course,” Leah smiled sympathetically and Michelle’s jaw dropped as the room filled with more snickers and gasps.

    “That was pathetic! That’s the best you can come up with?” Michelle screamed and Leah just shrugged her shoulders and smiled. “Say something Bitch!”

    “I don’t really have anything else to say,” Leah said with a laugh. “I do have one question though,” she paused as she squinted her eyes at her, “what happened to your face? Did you get hit?” She questioned with a small look of concern.

    “What?!” Michelle yelled at her and looked at her in confusion. “No! What the fuck is wrong with you? Of course I didn’t get hit in the face!”

    “Oh,” Leah said as she looked over at me and shrugged her shoulders. She looked back at Michelle and cocked her arm back and punched Michelle square in the face and Michelle stumbled backwards and fell into a chair. “Fixed that problem,” she stated as she took another swig of the beer that she hadn’t even spilled a drop out of.

    “Did you just hit me?!” Michelle screamed as she stood back up and moved towards Leah again.

    “Yep, I’m supposed to tell you it was from your EX-husband,” Leah stated and Michelle took a swing at her but Leah dodged it and came right back and threw another one in her face. “And that one? That one’s from me, Bitch,” Leah stated as Michelle shrunk back towards the chair again as her eyes welled up with tears and Leah turned around and walked out with her own standing ovation.

    “Marry her. Marry her now,” my dad stated over my shoulder and I turned and tried to look annoyed but I couldn’t help smirking as he smiled widely and nodded.

    “Give it a rest, Old Man. All in due time,” I said with a smile as I patted him on the shoulder. “I’m going to go find Leah, make sure somebody calls security and gets Michelle out of here,” I said and he nodded before I walked out of the room.


    This whole part right here is pure awesomeness! I love how Leah was just like, "You're in my way" and then just pushed past her haha! I love how Leah was so casual and smartass during the whole thing, I LOVE YOU LEAH!! Oh my god and that last part about her saying, "What happened to your face? Did you get hit?" And then Michelle is all confused and then she punches her in the fucking face, just PURE GENIUS! GO LEAH! TAKE THAT BITCH! ONE FROM YOUR EX-HUSBAND, ONE FROM LEAH, AND ONE MORE FROM ME BITCH!! OH YEAH, SHE WENT THERE! YEAH, RUN AWAY LIKE THE PUSSY YOU ARE! LEAH IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN YOU IN SO MANY WAYS, FOR STARTERS SHE'S WAY PRETTIER. I loved the last part though, haha Papa Gates. Yes Brian, marry her now! You must after what she just did. We're all proud of you Leah, no need to feel bad, the bitch got what she deserved and you put her in her place. Hopefully that will be the last time we see that bitch or she's going to have to deal with me and I promise, she's not going to like it. She's messing with the wrong girl.

    Anyways, this chapter was super fantastic and I loved all of it! I still can't get over Leah punching her in the face, that made my night. Well, now I must go to bed because it's one in the morning and I'm tired. I hope to finish this story by tomorrow or in the next couple of days. Great job again. I loves you lady!
    October 23rd, 2013 at 08:58am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Another amazing chapter. How can you write such amazing chapters every single time? Haha.

    McKenna, stop being a smart ass and listen to your brother. Just because he's fucked up in the past doesn't mean that you should fuck up to. Like Brian said, learn from his mistakes and don't go making the same mistakes he did. You could have at least been smarter about it and gone somewhere that wasn't out after dark where you could easily get jumped and possibly raped and you wouldn't have been able to do anything about it. Plus, there is the possibility that you could be killed and no one wants that. Aww, it made me a little sad that he brought up Jimmy and his death but I think it was good for him to do that and hopefully it got through to her and made her realize the risks and consequences of what could happen. Not only that but she's 15 and shouldn't be doing that shit anyways. I bet it was mostly Lauren's fault. Like Brian said, she probably lied to her and possibly pressured her into doing it which isn't cool at all. She needs to stay away from her because she is obviously nothing but trouble. Yes, it's better to get caught by your parents because the worse thing that could happen is getting spanked, yelled at, and grounded but when it comes to the cops she would've been arrested and she would have screwed up the rest of her life and then she would really be sorry. I'm glad that Brian decided not to tell their parents, we don't need to stress them out but if she does it again, he should definitely tell them but hopefully she learned her lesson and won't do it again. I think Brian handled the situation really well, good job Brian, I'm proud of you :D Anyways sorry for the long paragraph lol.

    “Leah’s really awesome. She’s a lot nicer to me than Michelle ever was.”

    NO SHIT SHERLOCK!! LOL.

    “Everything’s alright, I handled the situation and I’m pretty sure I got through to her during our conversation. I also took her phone and her laptop and told her she has to be with one of us whenever she’s not in school for the rest of the week. It’s a long story, I’ll tell you tomorrow if you really want to know.”

    “It’s OK, I trust you,” she smiled. “I know you did what you thought was best, and I’m sure it will work itself out,” she said before we shared another kiss.

    “You’re going to freeze your ass off out here in that skimpy little thing,” I laughed and shook my head. “Go ahead back to bed, Baby, I know you’re really tired. I’m going to get in the shower in a few minutes and then I’m coming to bed too, alright?” I told her and she nodded. “I love you Leah,” I whispered before turning to kiss her again.

    “I love you too, Bri,” she smiled. “Don’t stress about your sister, I’m pretty sure whatever you said to her made more of an impact than what your parents would have said to her anyway. She really looks up to you and you’re really good to her, she’s lucky to have you.”

    “You think?” I asked and she nodded with a smile. “Thanks Baby, it means a lot to me that you feel that way,” I smiled back and we shared a few more kisses as she squeezed my shoulders again before she went back inside.


    I really hope you did Brian. I'm sure that what he said would have made more of an impact than their parents as well but we'll see.

    Mm, more morning blow jobs. Brian must be really happy about that haha ;) And sexy time, very hot. Mm get your morning fix of dick Leah, ride that shit! Whew! I just got done taking care of myself and then you have to go and get me going again. Why do I keep reading your stuff when I know it's going to get me all hot and bothered? Lol

    “Well good morning,” I whispered with a smirk.

    “It’s a very good morning,” she whispered back and smiled as she pulled me down for another kiss before I moved to lay down next to her and wrap my arm around her.

    “If every man in the world woke up to a blowjob in the morning, the world would be a better place,” I smirked and she laughed. “I’m serious, guaranteed we could have prevented at least a few wars if the first ladies of the world only gave more blowjobs.”

    “Oh really? So that’s the way to create world peace?”

    “Yep, the answers to the world’s problems lie within a few good blowjobs.”

    “You should totally run for president,” she said with a grin.

    “I should. I’ll hire people everywhere to hang up posters across the country that say ‘Brian for blowjobs’, it’s a guaranteed win.”

    “Are you going to run for the Democrats or the Republicans?” She laughed.

    “I’m going to start my own party,” I smirked. “The slogan will be ‘Our politicians won’t fuck you in the ass because we’re already completely satisfied’. I’ll bring back Clinton as my main advisor and I’ll let him keep Monica Lewinski under his desk,” I joked and we both busted up laughing.

    “There’s probably some truth to that statement,” she smiled. “He was the best president of our time.”

    “Exactly, and it was all because his mistress gave good head,” I said as we both broke into another laugh. “Alright,” I sighed and rubbed my face, “I guess I’m going to get up and feed my sister.”

    “Yeah, I’m going to go down and start cooking up the meat for the quesadillas and stuff for later.”


    OH. MY. GOD. LMFAO lmfao THAT IS PROBABLY THE FUNNIEST THING I'VE EVER READ IN MY FUCKING LIFE. I LITERALLY FELL ON THE FLOOR LAUGHING AT THIS. THIS WAS PURE GENIUS! I STILL DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT. *takes a moment to calm down*

    That’s right, I forgot the guys were coming over for the Lakers game. Well, then maybe I’ll just run out and get coffee and donuts. I’ll take McKenna with me if she’s up,” I told her as I pulled my boxers back on and stood up and stretched, making my shoulder pop.

    “Ooh,” Leah smirked at me, “listen to those joints creaking and cracking. You’re getting old, Bri.”

    “Don’t make me get back in that bed and fuck the shit out of you just to prove you wrong,” I laughed as I walked towards the closet.

    “Is that supposed to be a threat?” She smirked and I turned around and jumped back on the bed, wrapping my arms around her and playfully kissing her all over before digging my fingers into her sides making her squeal and laugh. “Stop! Don’t make me laugh that hard, I have to pee!” She yelled and I stopped as the laughter subsided. I looked down at her with a smile and kissed her softly.


    Just when I'm recovering from laughing at the other part, you have to make me laugh again, especially the last part. Mmm, fuck her Brian, prove your point ;)

    Oh god! Here we go again, McKenna asking all these questions lol. Damn, Brian considered sleeping with other women while he was still with Michelle. I don't blame him though, I mean she's a fucking bitch. You should of just done it Brian, I wouldn't of been mad at you. Then again, you shouldn't stoop down to her level so I guess it's good you didn't but I'm sure it was very tempting haha.

    “It smells amazing in here,” Brian smiled as he came back into the house with McKenna, placing the cups of coffee on the counter before giving me a quick kiss.

    “Thanks,” I smiled. “I just tried to call you,” I said as I picked his cell phone up off of the counter and handed it to him, “didn’t do much good considering your phone was under the bed,” I added and he smirked. “You know you’re almost out of beer, right?”

    “No,” he groaned before looking in the fridge, “shit, I guess I’ll have to go back out again then. Unless McKenna has some that she’s not sharing,” he stated as he looked over at her.

    “Shut up, Brian,” McKenna said as she glared at him and I lightly hit him on the arm.

    “Don’t be a dick,” I told him before figuring out which cup of coffee was mine.


    Oh Brian, stop being such a dick. Yeah she fucked up but that doesn't mean you have to be a dick about it.

    Haha, sorry McKenna but if you were expecting Leah to agree with you then you are sadly wrong. He is being a dick about it but it is because he cares about you and doesn't want anything to happen to you. Yes, he is a cocky, asshole sometimes but under that he is such a sweetheart who only wants to look out for you. Remember, he was once your age too so he knows what you're going through. Yes, Brian is a man and he could take care of himself if someone came at him wrong even drunk and you could do nothing and then you would be really sorry.

    “So you passed up a perfectly good opportunity to talk shit on me?” He joked, ignoring my question.

    “Cora, Angie, and Keira are all coming along with the guys today, we’ll talk about how small your penises are and how lame you are in the sack then,” I smirked as he slipped his arms around me.

    “You’re a bitch,” he stated with a cocky smile.


    Haha, Leah, you're so mean but I love you for getting under Brian's skin so ;)

    “Cheer up,” I laughed before leaning up to his ear and whispering, “you’re supposed to be in a good mood today. You woke up to a blowjob this morning, remember?” I smirked and tugged at his earlobe with my teeth.

    “Mmm,” he growled into my ear as one arm tightened around me and the other traveled to my ass and squeezed nice and hard. “I remember,” he whispered with a smirk and placed a few kisses on my neck, “trust me when I say that you’ll get yours later on tonight.”

    “I’m holding you to that,” I smiled and he kissed me playfully.


    Mm yes, you better repay the favor Brian or else ;)

    Lol of course the guys are thinking sexual lol, typical. I thought this game was very interesting but in the end, Brian was successful. I love how the songs were of a variety of genres. Most of those songs I've never heard of. I know, I'm sad haha.

    “Dude, how did you let him beat you at your own game?” Matt asked Zack with a smirk.

    “Shut up,” he laughed, “I hate you too.”

    “Would you like me to keep going?” Brian joked as he picked his beer back up and took a swig.

    “What the hell? How do you know all of these off the top of your head?” Cora questioned him with a laugh.


    Yeah Zacky, how could you let Brian beat you at your own game. I bet you could go on Brian, you perve you! I bet he listens to a whole bunch of sex songs while he jacks off hahahaha.

    “How convenient,” he remarked as he looked at McKenna and she ignored him.

    “Brian, now stop, that’s enough,” I said as I shot him a look, trying desperately to ignore the fact that I wanted to laugh at his evil smirk. I finished rinsing the last plate and then dried my hands before taking the remote from him and changing the song.

    “Come on Leah, you think it’s funny, don’t act like you don’t want to laugh,” he whispered in my ear.

    “Stop,” I told him again as I tried to push him away.

    “Then don’t smile,” he teased and it just made me want to laugh even more. “I swear to God, you better not fucking smile, because this is a serious situation and laughter and happiness is not allowed under any condition."

    “Shut up,” I smirked.

    “Hey!” He raised his voice. “I told you no fucking smiling, now stop it,” he said as seriously as he could and I couldn’t bite back the small laugh, “the only emotion allowed in this house is misery,” he said as his lips started to curl upwards.

    “Clearly,” McKenna mumbled as she stuck something in the microwave.

    “Look at that, it does talk,” Brian smirked.

    “Oh God, here we go,” I sighed as I rolled my eyes and walked away, grabbing the Packers blanket that was folded on the back of the chair in the living room and going outside to sit on the patio.


    Lol, I was smiling the whole way through this. You're such a dick Brian lol. I probably would've burst out laughing or at least smiled. Poor McKenna though. Those two and their bickering. Hurry up and get out of there while you still can Leah! Haha.

    Mm, yay! Time for that repayment ;) Mmm could you come help me out next Brian? Lol. Very hot sex scene. Aww they cried :'( You describe making love so well, have you experienced it yourself? I haven't yet sadly :( What a very touching and sweet ending. Double aww, even Brian cried lol.

    “You tell anyone that I cried during sex and I swear to God no one will ever find your body,” he said with a smirk.

    Haha Brian. I won't tell anyone...maybe hehe

    Great job, I loved this! I already know that the next chapter is going to be interesting just from the title. I have a feeling Michelle is going to make an appearance. Am I going to have to kill a bitch? lol. I'm going to go read and find out. I loves you.
    October 23rd, 2013 at 12:09am
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    OH MY GOD!! I LOVES THIS CHAPTER!! IT WAS FUNNY AND SEXY AND THE ENDING, JUST GAHHH!! I must hurry and do this comment so I can read the next chapter. I want to know what Brian talks to her about. Ok, let's do this.

    GAHH!! YOU HAVE TO START THE CHAPTER OFF WITH A SUPER HOT SEX SCENE. I SWEAR YOU ARE TRYING TO KILL ME! WAY TO GET ME GOING ALREADY...BLASHPHEMY! *mumbles under breath about how I'm going to have to go take care of myself later.*

    Damn, Brian is a horny fuck today, what's gotten into him? Not that I'm complaining, he can take me as many times as he wants lol ;)

    “Dude, you left Mom’s like an hour ago. How are you just now getting here?” Brent asked Brian as we all headed towards the front door.

    “We had to stop at home first, don’t fucking worry about me,” Brian said cockily with a smirk as the guys walked in front of us while Kristy and I brought up the back.

    “I see how it is, sex takes priority over your family,” Brent smirked at him.

    “I don’t understand why he’s making such a big deal about it,” Kristy mumbled under her breath so that only I could hear her. “He acts like we didn’t just fuck in the car,” she smirked as she rolled her eyes and we both started laughing. Brian turned around and glared at us.

    “What the fuck are you two laughing at?” He smirked.

    “Nothing, just keep walking,” I smirked back and he smiled and shook his head before pushing open the front door.


    Haha, this had me chuckling, especially the last part. Yeah Brian, just keep on walking and mind your business haha! You have no right to talk Brent, you are just as bad as Brian is, fucking in the car lol.

    “You two are just so cute together,” Suzy commented and I smiled shyly.

    “Cute is for bunny rabbits and teddy bears, I’m drop dead sexy,” Brian commented and we both laughed.


    Oh my god. Haha Brian, you are drop dead sexy, you're not lying about that ;) Please come to my bed and bring Matt with you, let's have a hot, kinky threesome. Yes please!

    “Well,” Brian said as he smirked over at me before looking back at her, “it wouldn’t just be you and me. I asked Leah to move in with me last week and she said yes, and we’re already in the process of getting her moved in.”

    “ARE YOU SERIOUS?” She yelled and smiled and Brian nodded. The next thing I knew, McKenna was practically flying over Brian to give me a hug and I smiled as I noticed Brian Sr. and Suzy exchanging smiles and nods of approval with Brian.

    “I take it that’s OK with you?” Brian asked McKenna as she continued to hang onto me.

    “Are you kidding? I’ve been waiting for this since the day I met her!” McKenna smiled at me.

    “You’re too sweet,” I smiled.

    “Just wait until you get to know her better, by the end of next week you’ll be begging Brian to send her away,” their dad laughed.


    Lol, at least McKenna is happy about it lol. Oh Papa Gates, you and your jokes lol.

    “So does that mean I can stay with them?” McKenna asked him. He looked over at Suzy and she smiled and shrugged her shoulders.

    “I guess, but Brian has every right to use medieval torture techniques if you don’t listen to him,” he smirked and she climbed off of Brian and I and ran over to give him a hug.

    “You’re the best Daddy in the entire world!” McKenna exclaimed and Brian rolled his eyes and shook his head.

    “Don’t be such a suck-up,” Brian told her. “I was around for 16 years before you, I’ll always be his favorite no matter what you say to him,” he smirked as McKenna picked up a throw pillow and chucked it at his head and missed.

    “I can’t believe you missed, his head’s so big it takes up the entire room,” I smirked and everybody but Brian laughed.

    “I don’t remember asking you for your opinion,” Brian said as he looked at me and cocked his eyebrow.

    “That’s funny, I don’t remember waiting for your permission to give it,” I joked.

    “Oh, SNAP!” McKenna shot at him and their dad and Suzy laughed.

    “You just shut your face!” Brian squinted his eyes and pointed at her.


    LOVED THIS!! Lol Brian. HAHA DAMN!! SHE TOLD YOU BRIAN!! BURN!! RIGHT IN FRONT OF YOUR FAMILY TOO BAHAHAHAHAHAHHA lmfao I love how he was just like, "You just shut your face." I laughed at that, I would totally say that too.

    “If you want to drive, you better find the keys,” he smiled even wider.

    “Are you really going to do this right now? In your dad’s driveway?” I questioned with a smirk.

    “I’m pretty sure I am, actually.”

    I tried to let out a sigh of fake frustration, but we both ended up just laughing. I sat my purse on the hood of his car before feeling around in his front pockets for his keys. He grabbed my hand and put it over the growing bulge in his jeans and I slapped him away, silently hoping that his dad and Suzy weren’t watching this charade from inside. I shoved my hand down in the pocket that I felt his keys in and quickly pulled them out. He turned and pinned me against the car, firmly grabbing my ass with both hands as he leaned in and kissed me deeply.

    “I love you Baby,” he said against my lips before kissing me again.

    “I love you too,” I smiled.

    “I’m so hard for you, Baby. I want to take you home and make love to you all night long,” he said softly as he trailed kisses down my neck.

    “What the fuck is your problem?” I laughed. “Did you take Viagra or something this morning?” I joked.

    “No,” he laughed, “I don’t know. I’ve just been in a really good mood all day, and every time the thought of you naked has crossed my mind today I sprang a boner. You would think after five times, I wouldn’t have much left in me, but I definitely do as you can clearly tell,” he smiled against my skin as he pushed his hips into me and my body started to respond to his. “I can tell you want it too, Baby.”

    “I do,” I smiled and kissed him, “just not in your parents’ driveway,” I added and he groaned before resting his forehead against mine.


    Mm that first part is so sexy. COME ON BRIAN! BEND HER OVER THE CAR AND PUMMEL INTO HER! DO IT! THAT WOULD BE SO FUCKING HOT! WHO CARES IF THE PARENTS SEE! Ok, I'll stop now. I know I shouldn't be encouraging them to do that but am I the only one who thinks it would be hot for them to fuck right then and there with their parents watching? It's probably just me because I'm a sick fuck but yeah. Anyways, haha I love how you added the Viagra in there. Oh Brian, you are such a perverted fuck but I love it! Let her take you guys home and you can fuck her all you want, for my enjoyment hehe and yours too but mostly mine Naughty haha!

    Mm, I want a sundae!! Nom! Nom! Nom! I would probably eat a whole bunch too and then wake up tomorrow feeling like a whale and be like, "Why the hell did I eat all that ice cream?" lol.

    “Aww, you’re so sweet to your little sister,” I said quietly with a smirk.

    “Yeah? Just don’t tell anyone what you just saw, it will ruin my reputation,” he joked and I smiled and rolled my eyes as I followed him into the dark bedroom and shut the door.


    Oh Brian, lol. It's so sweet that despite their bickering, they really do care for each other and I have no doubt Brian would do anything to protect her like the sweetheart he is <3

    Mm, more sexy time ;) BRIAN, STOP TEASING AND FUCK HER ALREADY!!! LOL.

    He smirked before standing up pulling his boxers off and offering me his hand. I was curious as to what he was up to, but took his hand anyway and he led me into the bathroom. The only light in the room came from a candle that was lit on the bathroom counter, and he stopped in front of the mirror and I looked up at him nervously. He knew I was extremely self-conscious about my body because of the scarring and my past. I couldn’t stand to look at myself in the mirror unless I was wearing clothes, and it quickly became known that he was out to change that. He placed his hands on my hips and turned me so that I was standing in front of him and facing the mirror as his hard, thick length rested against my ass. I turned my head and closed my eyes as I tried to bury my face into his neck and I felt his smile against my skin as he pressed his lips against my forehead.

    “Please don’t do this, I just want you to make love to me,” I whispered and he smiled again.

    “Trust me Baby, I’m going to take good care of you. Just open your eyes first and look at how beautiful you are. I want you to see what I see,” he whispered back and I swallowed nervously and shook my head.

    “I can’t,” I managed to get out as he started to lightly kiss and suck at my neck.

    “Yes you can. It’s just us, Baby. No one else in the world right now except you and me, and I want you to see how perfect you are,” he said as he slipped his arms around my waist.

    “Brian,” I tried to protest, but he ignored it and moved his hands to my breasts.

    “These are perfect,” he smiled as he brushed his lips against the back of my shoulder. “The way they feel, the way they taste, and the way that they fit in my hands,” he whispered as he started to play with my nipples and they instantly stiffened.


    Aww, this was so sweet. No need to be self conscious, you are perfect, like Brian said. Mm that last part though, whew!

    “Does that feel nice, Baby?” He asked and I nodded. “Open your eyes and watch me touch you, Leah,” he said again softly.

    I took a deep breath before forcing my eyes open and looking at my reflection out of the corner of my eye. I found that seeing our reflection with his hands all over me was actually kind of hot. He rolled my nipples between his calloused fingers and I moaned softly as the wetness between my legs intensified. I arched my back when he gently tugged and I let out a small gasp. He smirked against my skin and nibbled on my earlobe as I started to once again become putty in his hands while I watched his reflection in the mirror.

    He slowly started moving his hands down my body, his thumbs grazing along the skin of my sides as he tightened his hands. He gently brushed his fingers against my stomach before moving his hands down to my hips and resting them there as he kissed me lovingly. His fingers gently kneaded my flesh as he pulled my hips back into his, his rock hard cock pressing against me once again.

    “Do you see the look in your eyes right now?” He asked and I paid attention to my eyes and was shocked at what I saw. “This is the you that I see. I see the love in your eyes, the lust that’s running through your body. This is you completely raw and open to me, the real you that I’m insanely in love with,” he said before I turned my head to kiss him. His hands moved slightly lower to my thighs, pulling them apart as he nudged my feet apart with his.

    “Baby….” I whispered softly.

    “Touch yourself,” he whispered and my eyes met his in our reflection. “Touch yourself the way you want me to touch you. Watch and see how hot it looks when you give yourself pleasure, make sure you’re nice and ready for me because the first time I touch you is going to be when I completely bury myself inside of you.”

    He took one of my hands and guided it between my legs, cupping it over my sex before moving his hand back to my hip. I gently ran my middle finger along my wet opening and started to carefully circle my clit. I let out a small gasp at how turned on I was, immediately moving my finger back to my opening for fear that anymore stimulation to my clit would make me come. I moaned softly as I pushed my finger inside of myself and Brian’s dick twitched against my skin as he pressed himself against me even harder. My head fell back against his shoulder and I could feel his hot breath against my ear.

    “Is it my turn?” He whispered and I nodded, removing my finger from my depths and spreading myself open as I leaned forward slightly. “Watch,” he said softly as he nodded towards the mirror.

    I nodded and bit my lip as he positioned himself at my opening and filled me completely with one swift thrust. I had to fight the scream that wanted to come out as I felt fuller than ever before and watched our faces as he pulled back and thrust into me again. He had a look on his face of complete nirvana. I was so wet that you could hear our bodies meeting together with each thrust. I knew that I was going to come hard when I came, and I knew it wouldn’t take very long. He wasn’t even touching my clit and there was already moisture running down my thighs, as I looked at us and knew how hard I was going to come I felt an overwhelming need to be fucked senseless.

    “Fuck me, Brian,” I demanded softly and he grinned before brushing his lips against my neck.

    “How hard?” He growled in my ear.

    “Harder than you’ve ever fucked anyone in your life,” I told him seriously and his eyes filled with even more lust than before.

    “How fast?” He moaned as his hands dug into my hips.

    “As fast as you fucking can,” I stated and he looked at me with a smirk. “I’m fucking serious, I’m going to come so fucking hard, Baby.”

    “Oh yeah? Are you going to get me all wet Baby?” He growled and I nodded.

    He nudged my feet farther apart and worked himself into a better position between my legs before digging his fingers into my hips and looking into my eyes in our reflection. I nodded and his eyes went completely dark as he pulled me back and slammed into me harder than I could ever remember. I closed my eyes as he did it over and over again, each time my body shuttering as he hit me deeper than any man has ever been. I felt the muscles in my lower abdomen start to tighten as he pounded into me so fucking hard I couldn’t think straight. My legs started shaking and I pushed back against him as hard as I could as my body finally let go and shook violently as I came harder than ever before, completely soaking him as my body continued to convulse with each thrust. I completely lost control of myself as he kept going and all I could do was succumb to the waves of pleasure as they hit me in succession.

    ”FUCK!” He yelled as he reached his orgasm and pounded into me as he released everything he had.


    OH MY FUCKING GOD! I JUST, I CAN'T RIGHT NOW! THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT! LIKE, OH MY GOD! NOW I'M REALLY FUCKING HORNY! HOLY SHIT!!! THAT IS ONE OF THE HOTTEST THINGS EVER! Mm, staring at our reflections while Matt touches me and then touching myself right in front of him and then him fucking me fast and hard, watching our reflections in the mirror, I CAN'T TAKE IT!! FUCK!! LOL. NOW YOU'VE GONE AND DONE IT! PLUS THAT DIRTY TALK! AHHHH!!! *dies* SEE, NOW YOU'VE GONE AND KILLED ME! LOL. WHEW! THAT DIRTY MIND OF YOURS...

    Grr, go away McKenna, don't you see Brian is trying to sleep, sheesh! lol. I swear siblings are so annoying. I have two little sisters, so I know, believe me haha.

    She walked down to the bottom of the bed and started pulling on the blankets. I finally spoke up when they slid down to the middle of my back. “I would stop pulling on the blankets if I were you,” I said as I opened my eyes and she let out a small laugh. “I’m dead serious McKenna, unless you want the image of my bare ass engrained into your brain for the rest of your life, I seriously suggest that you stop.”

    “Oh God, you’re naked?” She said as she dropped the blankets and I immediately reached down and pulled them back up.

    “Yes, now go away,” I said as I closed my eyes again.


    Oh my god! Haha, I laughed so hard at this. I wouldn't mind having the image of your bare ass ingrained in my brain forever, or even the image of your cock ;) Mm, lemme see!

    I heard her moving around before the room got quiet and I immediately assumed that she had given up and left. Then I got that creepy feeling you get in the pit of your stomach when you know you’re being watched. I kept my eyes closed and tried to outlast her, hoping that she would give up and go back downstairs. It got to the point where I knew that almost five minutes had gone by and I couldn’t fucking stand it anymore. I opened my eyes and startled when I saw her face only an inch away from mine as she kneeled on the floor next to the bed and stared into my eyes.

    *shivers* I hate that so much, it's so creepy. You better get up Brian and give the damn girl what she wants so she'll go away haha.

    “You’re really grumpy when you wake up,” she commented.

    “I know, don’t take it personal,” I said and I gave her a small smirk before draping my arm over her shoulders.


    I'm hella grumpy when I wake up and I didn't get enough sleep. I'm a force to be reckoned with lol.

    Yay! They finally hired someone, that means more time with Brian ;)

    OH SHIT! MCKENNA GOT BUSTED! DAMN GIRL! YOU COULD'VE AT LEAST TRIED TO BE FUCKING SMART ABOUT IT! SMH, NAIVE CHILDREN LOL. DAMN, I NEVER THOUGH MCKENNA WOULD DO SUCH A THING SO THAT WAS AN INTERESTING SUPRISE. SHE IS PRETTY DAMN LUCKY THAT THE OFFICER IS HIS FRIEND OR SHE WOULD BE ARRESTED AND THEN SHE WOULD BE IN EVEN BIGGER TROUBLE. DAMN, NOW YOU'VE DONE IT GIRL, BRIAN IS HELLA PISSED, THAT IS NEVER A GOOD SIGN. HMM...I WONDER WHAT HE'S GOING TO TALK TO HER ABOUT. I MUST GO FIND OUT!

    YOU FUCKING TEASE WITH THAT ENDING! THIS WAS SO GOOD! LOVED IT SO MUCH! WELL NOW IF YOU'LL ECXUSE ME, I'VE GOT TO DO A LITTLE SOMETHIN SOMETHIN AND THEN READ THE NEXT CHAPTER. Great job as always my friend.
    October 22nd, 2013 at 08:07pm
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    Yes! Brian and Leah are finally getting some alone time away from everyone and everything else. I heard that Matt does own a cabin up in Big Bear somewhere…. Hmmmm??? I wouldn’t be opposed to a stalking adventure LOL

    LOL, the singing in the car/ Britney Spears part was fun to write. I saw an interview that they did once and it was quite clear how much Brian didn’t care for Ms. Spears. I can imagine him just throwing the ipod out the window or something because he would be so sick of it.

    Hot tubs are definitely fun!!! Especially when it’s cold/snowing!! I’ve never really been snowboarding officially but it seems like it would be fun. I’d like to try it sometime but that will have to wait until I graduate nursing school. Don’t want to have to postpone my graduation because I break a limb LOL. J/k that’s not really that funny if you think about it…….. SMH

    Brian, you would totally get tackled if you shoved a snowball down the back of my jacket and splattered it. Just sayin. If the opportunity ever arises and you do that I’m going to start fangirling for Zacky instead.

    What goes around comes around mothafucka!

    Don’t even get me started about sex songs. You want to throw your friends off in the car??? Put your iPod on shuffle and when Let’s Get It On by Marvin Gaye comes on blast it and sing it at the top of your lungs. You’ll find out that day who your true friends are LOL

    Oh yes, the divorce is officially finalized. Though your suspicions about it not being over may be correct….. The holidays are going to be quite memorable…… I believe they start off with a “bang” in the next chapter : )

    More sexy time of course! Ride that shit Leah! You go on and get some! You know what they say- Save a horse, ride a cowboy. Maybe we can convince Brian to dress up????

    Everything is more fun when you’re drunk! Except the day after, such as what I experienced all day yesterday….. But it was so worth it!

    I know, the trip should have been a bit longer, eh? They have some more exciting adventures that come up in the future though that will prove to be lots of fun.

    Yay! They’re finally moving in together! They’ve practically been for a while but at least now it will be official. I think it’s the right step at this point in the relationship.

    They do need to spend more time together. Leah needs to learn to let go a little bit. She has a bit of a complex from not having any control of her life the entire time she was growing up so now she feels like she needs to hold onto what she’s got. He knows she’s there for him and not his wallet. Hopefully she’ll learn to give in a bit more.

    I know, the irony of Mandy being pregnant an Brian asking Leah to move in with him at the same time LOL I know it’s a bit cheesy but it works well for both sides and I didn’t want to have to deal with Mandy having any resentment about Leah leaving her or Leah to have any resentment because Mandy needed to go or kick her out.

    There will be more of Jake in the future! He was kind of an extra character that is working his way into the storyline LOL He’s just fun!

    At least Leah is cutting back on her hours as soon as she can. It’s not quitting altogether but it still gives her more free time for Brian than what she had before.

    The trip to South Africa does turn out to be quite fun as you’ll see in the future LOL

    Oh yeah, shit’s about to go down with McKenna being in the house as you’ll discover. Hmmm…. What could it possibly be? Hehehe!

    Thanks again for the comment! Sorry I couldn’t reply sooner!!!
    October 22nd, 2013 at 04:56am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    This chapter was really great, as are all your chapters.

    Mm, it must have been nice for them to get away from everything for a whole week and just focus on spending time with each other. Come on Matt, let's go on vacation lol.

    “Ohhhh I have waited here for you, DON’T keep me waiting…….” She started singing at me and dancing in her seat like a dork.

    “Babe…” I laughed.

    “YOU MAKE ME WANNA LALA IN THE KITCHEN ON THE FLOOR……I’LL BE YOUR FRENCH MAID WHEN I MEET YOU AT THE DOOR……” She sang at the top of her lungs, busting into a laugh when I looked at her skeptically.

    “Seriously…. 32 gigs of storage on that thing and the best you can come up with is Ashley Simpson? You’re killing me Babe,” I told her, only half joking.

    “Uh, no!” She said with a valley girl accent. “I TOTALLY have Britney Spears up on this bitch,” she laughed as she started scrolling through the iPod again.

    “Leah, if you try to play Britney Spears in my car I might pull over and leave you on the side of the road,” I joked.

    “Oh yeah?” She questioned with a smirk. “Look! It’s ‘Hit Me Baby, One More Time’” she stated with a cheesy grin as she enthusiastically started tapping the screen of her iPod.

    “Baby….” I groaned before Alanis Morrisette’s ‘You Oughta Know’ started coming through the speakers. “Yes, thank you. This is at least tolerable,” I smirked.

    “Tolerable? I suggest you show some respect to Miss Morrisette. She was a game changer in the rock world.”

    “I do have respect for her, she was definitely one of the better artists that came out of the 90’s. I’m not sure if I would go with game changer though.”

    “Yeah, what would you know? You’re just a stupid metal head,” she laughed.

    “That hurts,” I said sarcastically as I turned onto one of the main roads that started going up the mountain.


    Haha, this part made me laugh, especially the part about Britney Spears haha. Oh and the last part, hahahahahha.

    Oooo there's a hot tub, me likey Naughty Let's get naughty in the hot tub! Lol. Snowboarding sounds fun as well but I would probably end up breaking my neck or worse if I even tried haha.

    I climbed out of the car and looked to make sure that Leah wasn’t watching me as I scooped up a handful of snow and balled it up in my hands. I heard her car door open and I held it behind my back with one hand as I turned to face her. She was facing in the opposite direction towards the cabin.

    “Hey Babe, help me get the bags out of the trunk and then we can check the place out,” I said as normally as possible as I popped the trunk open.

    She walked around the car and leaned over the trunk and I walked over next to her and pulled the collar of her jacket back, dropping the snowball in and patting her back so it flattened and splattered all over her back. She gasped and her whole body turned rigid as she slowly turned her head to look over at me. The expression on her face was completely priceless and I tried as hard as I could to bite back my laugh. She reached her arm back and shook the back of her jacket and I lost it when all of the melting snow slipped out.

    “You’re gonna die,” she stated firmly.


    Oh my god! Bahahahahaha, Brian you're so bad. You're going to get it now though.

    I watched her in amusement before she quickly ran around the other side of the car and scooped up some snow and balled it up. I ran back to my side of the car and made another snowball as we each stood on our respective sides of the car and stared each other down with smirks on our faces. We tried to fake each other out a few times, both of us laughing like idiots before she took off running around the other side of the cabin. I started running around it in the other direction and slowed down as I got to the back and slowly moved along the wall and peeked around the corner. She was peeking around the other corner looking back towards the front of the cabin and turned it slowly, giving me the perfect opportunity to quietly sneak up along the other wall. I slowly moved to peek around that corner and jumped when I came face to face with her.

    “Hi Brian,” she grinned before smashing her snowball on top of my head.

    I brushed it off and then wiped the melting snow out of my eyes as she stood there with an accomplished look on her face.


    Haha! Take that Brian! Payback!

    I smiled as I reached out and grabbed the front of her jacket and pulled her up against me, snaking my other hand under the back of her jacket and smashing my half-melted snowball against her lower back. She arched her back away from the cold, subsequently pressing her chest against me and thrusting her hips towards me. I pinned her against the side of the building and smirked before consuming her lips with mine. I immediately started to get hard and she reached her hand down, rubbing me through my jeans causing me to moan against her lips.

    “Baby, I’m getting pretty cold. Why don’t we get our stuff inside and then maybe you can warm me up,” she smirked and I kissed her again, tugging her bottom lip gently with my teeth.


    Ohhhh it's getting sexual ;) Let's get it on, awww baby, get it Brian! lol. I got that from the songs in real life videos. Love those videos!

    “I’m so glad we could get away,” I stated softly with a smile. “No cell phones, no obligations, and no stress, just us. This week is going to be great.”

    “Yeah, I’m excited about it too,” Leah smiled as she propped herself up and looked at me. “The past six months have been kind of a wild ride for both of us and it’s nice for everything to be settled and for us to be able to enjoy each other.”

    “Oh? So you’re saying you didn’t enjoy me before?” I joked and she laughed.

    “Yeah, that’s exactly what I’m trying to say,” she joked back. “No, you know what I mean. No more ex drama, no more hidden pasts, nothing else to focus on in our personal lives except each other.”

    “I know Baby,” I smiled as I wrapped my arm around her waist and she moved to straddle me. “It’s really nice to be happy around the holidays too, I don’t think I’ve actually enjoyed them in close to three years,” I reached up and tucked her hair behind her ear. “I’m pretty sure that this Christmas is going to be one of the best ones yet, just waking up next to you on Christmas morning is going to make it memorable,” I said truthfully and she smiled and bit her lip.

    “Want to know a secret?”

    “Sure,” I smirked.

    “I’ve never actually been in love during the holidays before. This is an entirely new experience for me,” she smiled shyly.

    “Well, then we’ll have to make sure that we make it memorable for the both of us,” I smiled, placing my hand on the back of her neck and pulling her down for a kiss.


    Yes, no more drama, there's been way too much. You guys deserve a break. I'm glad that the divorce has been finalized, so long bitch! I'm sure she isn't gone for good though, that would be too good to be true lol. I'm sure the holidays are going to be very memorable ;)

    Mmm, sexy time ;) Very very hot and sexy. Ride that cock Leah! I love the ride, it's one of my favorites ;) It gets me going every time. I love how you describe your sex scenes as well, I'm envious.

    “Save the drama for yo’ mama and take a fucking card,” I joked.

    “This could be my winning move,” she stated as she glared at me playfully out of the corner of her eye.

    “You’re so retarded,” I stated as I took a drink from the liquor bottle.

    “No, you’re retarded,” she stated back, “and your hat’s stupid,” she added as she knocked my fedora off of my head.

    “Did you just touch my hat?” I questioned her with a serious look on my face.

    “I did, and oh look, it fell on the floor,” she smirked as she leaned over to pick it up. “It’s mine now,” she smiled as she put it on her head and cocked it to the side. “Why were you even wearing it? Actually, why do you even have it with you? You going to wear it as you snowboard?”

    “I didn’t mean to bring it, it was in my car. I only put it on because I didn’t have time to fix my hair before we went to the store and I had sex hair, which was your fault by the way.”

    “Um… No… You started it when you pinned me up against the wall as soon as we got out of the car. Sex hair was totally your fault,” she informed me as she downed some more of her drink.

    “Leah,” I said and she looked at me questioningly, “are you going to take a card or are you going to forfeit the game and let me win?”

    “Oh yeah,” she smirked as she picked up the top card on the discard pile and threw her cards down with a grin. “I win!”

    “That was cheap,” I laughed as I tossed my remaining cards on the coffee table. “Get up, I need a fucking cigarette after that shit,” I laughed again as she climbed off of me, trying not to fall over.


    This whole thing had me laughing. Their drunk asses hahahahahaha.

    “This week has been so nice,” he said softly. “I needed to get away from everything, we both did.”

    “I know,” I smiled, “I almost don’t want to go back to face reality,” I said softly and he sighed and nuzzled against my cheek.

    “I seriously need to get one of these,” he smirked, “a few glasses of wine and an hour in this thing with you and I’m more relaxed than I’ve ever felt before.”


    It went by way too fast. I'm not ready for them to go back yet lol.

    Aww, Brian finally asked her to move in with him. I'm glad he's taking the next step. Plus, she's there most of the time anyways so you minus well.

    "I won’t. Think about it, we’ve pretty much been living together already and we can’t spend more than one night away from each other without wanting to be together again. You could cut your hours at work, I mean, hell, you could just work for yourself and make your own schedule. It would give us more time together, you would be able to spend more time on tour with us, and you wouldn’t have to work at the shop anymore. I’d say you could even quit working all together if I didn’t know that you loved your job so much.”

    “I wouldn’t mooch off of you, Bri,” I stated.

    “It wouldn’t be called mooching it would be called me taking care of you.”

    “Brian….” I sighed.

    “I know you’re independent, Baby. That’s one of the things that attracted me to you in the first place, and it’s one of the many reasons why I love you. I know you’re here for me and not for my money, but I love you and I want to take care of you. I want us to be happy and part of that is making you happy,” he said as he pressed his lips to mine again. I sat and thought it over for a minute before giving him an answer.

    “Okay.” I smiled and he kissed me.

    “Really?” He questioned with a grin and I nodded.


    Yes, cut off work, you guys need to spend more time together. It's good that you're independent but you need to let someone take care of you for once since you've been taking care of yourself pretty much all your life. Lay back and let Brian take the reins for a while and just relax. It's good you don't want him just for the money unlike his bitch of an ex it irks me so much.

    Awww, Mandy is pregnant. How convenient, now she has to move in with Brian hehehehehe. I'm glad that they're both happy about it.

    Haha, Jake you're such a dick and so nosy! I like him.

    I'm glad that he let her cut back on her hours. Less work more Bri ;)

    Ohhh a trip to South Africa. Sounds like fun, plus there's no rules ;) Yes! Let's do it!

    McKenna is stay with them huh? That should be interesting.

    Anyways, great job as always. I wonder what will be going on next. I guess there's only one way to find out.
    October 21st, 2013 at 08:30pm
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    LOL, don’t feel bad, I was beat last night too and went to bed earlier than I thought I would LOL

    Brian is definitely a lucky guy to have so many people around him that love him and would go out of their way to do something like that for him. It’s good Karma, he’s a good person so he gets it all back in return (minus his crazy bitch ex-wife)!

    I really liked the picture ideas too. I think it really showed how much Leah understood him and wanted to make him happy. She wanted to return the favor for how good he’s been to her.

    Soooo many ways to thank someone!! Thank you sex included! As you saw later on… one of your favorites…. KITCHEN SEX!!

    Of course I had to have Brian/Papa Gates banter here as well, it had been a while in this story LOL. Glad you like the bit about the underwear, I just remember when I was a kid and I would open a present like that and be like “DAFUQ?” It made me appreciate the things that matter in life now though, but it was still funny as a kid.

    I was going to write in a part about him going to visit Schecter and thanking them but I just didn’t have any way to fit it in the story where it felt right. There is a one-shot in the works though that has to do with his relationship with Schecter….. he definitely thanks someone…… hehehe

    Brian is starting to realize that Leah is the one that he should have been with all along. Too bad that their lives took them in separate paths for so long and they both had to endure so much pain.

    You gotta love Papa Gates’ inappropriate jokes! He’s such a dirty old man LOL

    Yay for getting dirty in the kitchen!! Miss Leah can be quite the tease too! What does she expect? You wave that little derrière around in front of him he’s going to want things from you! PS, this is at this point in the story for a reason LOL

    Glad you enjoyed that little scene…… Naughty Anal can be quite enjoyable if it’s done right at first…. So I’ve heard anyway…..Secret

    Again with the teasing…. Leah you naughty girl! I think Brian should punish you!!

    That’s right Michelle, you dumb cunt! You screwed yourself! She didn’t deserve anything at all, but this doesn’t necessarily mean that this is over…….

    Brian finally reached his breaking point! I don’t blame him for losing his patience, they’ve been together long enough now and the relationship is solid enough now that there shouldn’t be any secrets. Leah needs to be more secure with herself and have more faith in him. Let him be there for you the way you were there for him.

    She did run to try to clear her thoughts but of course Brian wouldn’t let her go that easily. He was worried about her!!

    Poor Leah just went through one catastrophe after another throughout her life. As if being neglected and unloved by your own parents isn’t enough her dad turned out to be a total piece of shit all the way around. Then when she finally ‘escapes’ its only into another equally shitty situation and she ultimately ends up right back where she started anyway and her dick father tries to rape her! I’m glad he’s dead too, he deserved to die.

    She definitely puts too much responsibility on herself for everything that happened in the past. She had to fend for herself when she still should have been able to lean on her parents for support and guidance. I think she did the right thing by getting the abortion too, in her situation it was the best thing to do. Her brother is a piece of shit for just sitting back for all of these years and never sticking up for her when he’s the only other one that knows the truth. Her mom should just go die too.

    It’s so great that Brian reacted to everything with nothing but love and support for her. He made her feel validated and like she was worth something. Maybe he can start to take it all away after all…..

    Thanks for the comment!! Glad you enjoyed it!!
    October 19th, 2013 at 02:40am
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    Ok, so I read this chapter last night but I was too tired to comment so here I am.

    Awww, it was so sweet of Leah, his mom, and Papa Gates to help fix up his house and Brian didn't have to do a single thing, that must feel nice. He didn't have to come home all stressed and have to figure out how he was going to replace everything, that shows that he has an amazing family and girlfriend. You're so lucky Brian.

    The first one I stopped at was of me when I was about 16 sitting on my surfboard in the water just beyond the impact zone. The next was of my brother just picking up a wave. The third was of McKenna riding a smaller wave with a grin on her face. The fourth and final one was of McKenna on her board in the water with me looking up at her as I stood chest deep in the water and was talking to her. I looked over at Leah and smiled before pulling her into a tight embrace and then kissing her deeply.

    I thought that was sweet <3

    “You are the most amazing, thoughtful, loving, unselfish person that I’ve ever met. I don’t even know where to start or how to thank you. Baby, you are the most incredible woman I could ever ask for, and I am so grateful for all of this. You have no idea how much all of this means to me, Leah. You really didn’t have to go to all of this trouble,” I told her honestly, kissing her deeply once again.

    “I didn’t do this because I had to, I did it because I wanted to. The look on your face makes it all worthwhile. I love you Bri, that’s a really big deal for me,” she pressed her lips to mine. “I wanted you to be able to come home from this tour and have your space to relax and get away. If you would have come home to all of the craziness it would have made you miserable, and I hate seeing you like that. You give me so much to be happy for and try so hard to put a smile on my face when I’m having a rough day, I just wanted to return the favor.” I caught her lips in another passionate kiss before sitting down on the edge of the bed and pulling her down next to me.

    “You’re amazing and I love you,” I smiled as I brushed some hair out of her face.

    “I love you too, and like I said, the time spent was well worth it,” she smiled back and I kissed her again before she pulled away and started yawning.

    “Let’s get some sleep, Baby. We’ll unpack everything later and I can properly thank you for everything once we’re better rested,” I smirked and she nodded and yawned again, both of us letting out a small laugh.


    Aww I thought this was sweet. How are you going to thank her Brian? Thank you sex maybe? Naughty

    “What?” He answered with a laugh as I heard him mumble something to someone about it being his pain in the ass son.

    “Hey,” I smiled, “you did a nice job, old man. Thanks for being so awesome,” I said with a small laugh.

    “Just making up for the time you were three and I disappointed you on Christmas with new underwear instead of the toys you wanted,” he joked.

    “You’re such an asshole,” I laughed. “Seriously though, thanks for doing that. I know you’re pretty busy right now and it means a lot that you would go out of your way to do it for me,” I admitted.

    “It was no problem, the guys from Schecter were really great. I just made a few phone calls and they pretty much took care of the rest.”

    “You’ll have to send me the guys’ names that you were in contact with so I can call them, maybe I’ll even take a trip up and thank them personally,” I said as I took another drag from my cigarette.

    “Sure, I have it written down at home, I’ll text it to you later tonight. What did you think of the rest of your place? I had a chance to walk around and check it out last week, I was pretty impressed.”


    Lol, I laughed at this. I love their banter so much, it never fails to make me smile. I bet Papa Gates was in the middle of fucking, haha I'm so dirty. Oh my god! The part about the underwear! Fucking classic! I think it would be sweet if Brian went and thanked them personally.

    “I know, I couldn’t fucking believe it. I still can’t believe it actually. Leah’s amazing, I had no idea that you guys did all of this and she kept quiet about it the entire time. I have to call Mom today too and thank her for her help.”

    “I’ll tell you what, Bri. I had the chance to spend some time with her while we were working on the house, the more I got to know her, the more I liked her. It’s a shame you didn’t meet her a few years ago because I think she’s perfect for you, I think you’ve definitely met the right one,” he informed me and I smiled.

    “I’m well aware of that, trust me,” I laughed. “Maybe once Michelle’s gone for good and things are still going this well with Leah, I’ll take the plunge again. I’m going to do it the right way if I do it again, the next time I get married is going to be the last.”

    “Well, for the record, I really don’t think you could go wrong with Leah. She really cares about you and you’ve been happier over the past few months than I’ve seen you in years.”

    “I get it, Dad,” I smirked. “You’re not telling me anything I don’t know from first-hand experience. When the time is right and we’re both in a place that we’re emotionally ready for it, I’m sure it will happen. It’s just not going to be in the near future.”

    “I agree with you wanting to wait, but just know that if you break her heart she’s fair game and I’ll go after her myself,” he joked.

    “Don’t make it weird,” I laughed.

    “I have to run, I’m in the middle of something, but stop by this weekend or something, I’m sure McKenna would enjoy the opportunity to make fun of you for one reason or another.”

    “There’s not a doubt in my mind,” I laughed. “I’ll talk to you later Dad, go stir up some trouble at the nursing home,” I joked.

    “Leave the comedy up to me, I’ll see you later.”


    It looks like you have your dad's approval as well and I'm sure your mom's as well. Hopefully she's the one, I have no doubt she is. Yes, we don't need you getting married anymore Brian or it's going to start getting ridiculous. WOAH! MR. HANER! LIKE BRIAN SAID, DON'T MAKE IT WEIRD! LOL. Yea, Brian gets it and he cares about her to, thanks for stating the obvious lol, gotta love him though. This made me laugh too. Again, love their banter.

    I laughed to myself as I hung up the phone, noticing Leah coming down the stairs in just her underwear and my t-shirt. I watched her move around my kitchen and grab something to drink as my body immediately craved her, once she bent down to pick something up off the floor and her sexy little ass peeked out from under the shirt I was practically running back inside the house. She was standing at the counter drinking her water and she cocked an eyebrow at me as I rounded the island in the kitchen and pressed myself up against her back as I placed my hands on her hips and tackled her neck with my lips and teeth.

    “What’s gotten into you?” She laughed.

    “If you expect to walk around my house half naked without some type of reaction, you’ve seriously got me confused with someone else,” I said softly as I pressed my hips into her. She pushed her ass back against me and smirked as she sat her glass to the side.

    “What do you got back there? Anything for me?” She asked as she bit her lip.

    “Trust me Baby, it’s all for you,” I told her as I pressed my hips into her again and she pushed back against me once more. “Keep teasing and I’m going to take you right here,” I whispered against her ear.

    “It that case, I guess I’m just going to tease away,” she whispered back seductively before wiggling her ass against me.


    Loved this! This was really sexy and it had me going! Mm keep on teasing him Leah until he bends you over and fucks you senseless.

    Mm that sex scene is so hot! Ohhhh Brian is considering anal huh? They totally should! I've never done anal before but like I said before I would totally do it for the first time with Matt if he asked even though he would tear me in half lol.

    “Fuck, Brian. I’m gonna come,” she cried out as she wrapped her hand around the back of my neck and pulled my lips back to hers. She slammed her hips back into mine before her body tensed and shook with pleasure.

    “Oh, Baby,” I moaned as her muscles clenched down on me and I started to come. “Shit, that feels so fucking good,” I whispered softly as she continued to thrust her hips back until I was completely spent.


    Fuck, that got me wet.

    I watched her with interest as she got a spoon and started eating it, noticing that I was watching and licking the spoon suggestively. She smirked at me and I laughed.

    “Yeah, keep tonguing that spoon like that and see what happens,” I joked.

    “A bit insatiable today, are we?” She smirked.

    “Insatiable is a word I started using to describe myself when I started seeing you,” I laughed and kissed her on the cheek before heading back over to the sofa.

    “So, in other words, I own you,” she smiled.

    “Not gonna lie, there’s some truth to that statement,” I said as I laid back on the sofa and flipped the TV back on. She leaned over the back of the sofa and smirked before kissing me and going up to take a shower.


    Leah, you're such a tease. Round two anyone? Haha! Leah owns you Brian! You are Leah's bitch, hehe tehe

    “I got a call from my lawyer today,” he started quietly, “he said that he sat down with Michelle’s lawyer and they were able to come to a settlement that’s giving her less than what I had originally pushed for minus the cost of replacing everything they destroyed.”

    “That’s good then, right? That means it’s almost over?” I asked.

    “Yeah, I’m going to go in tomorrow and sign all of the papers. My lawyer said that it won’t even have to go to court now, he can just take it to a judge to be finalized without a hearing and they can sign it off and it will be official. Hopefully by the end of next week I can officially say that I’m no longer married to her. Then it will just be me and you, Babe,” he smiled and I gave him a kiss.

    “I can’t wait,” I smiled and kissed him again.

    “Maybe down the road I can do it the right way with you,” he said softly.


    Finally! All ties between him and that bitch need to be broken once and for all! HAHA BITCH, YOU'RE GETTING LESS MONEY NOW! If you ask me, after what she did, she doesn't deserve diddly squat...stupid whore. Aww, that last part made me smile <3

    OH SHIT! DRAMA! I think Brian has been patient long enough Leah, it's time to fess up. You don't have to worry, Brian will still love you. I'm actually quite curious myself. Plus, you and Brian need to get married and have cute little babies <3 You guys are meant to be together, don't ruin it! It'll feel good to tell someone, take some of the weight off you and he can help you to move on and stop dwelling on it. Don't let him walk away! He is so sexy and sweet and perfect and he loves you, DON'T LET HIM WALK AWAY OR I'LL NEVER FORGIVE YOU!!!

    Yes, Brian has gone through a lot to and you've helped him a lot now it's time to let him help you.

    Uh oh! She ran out. I'm glad Brian came after her. YAY! SHE'S GOING TO TELL HIM!!

    Aww, poor Leah. It must suck not being wanted, being neglected. I can't even imagine. Not only that but she was abused and almost raped a whole bunch of times, wow, just wow. And she got punished by getting burns in her back, I just I can't. I can see why she's glad he's dead, hell, I'm glad he's fucking dead. Damn, then to make things worse, she goes and hangs out in bad crowds and gets pregnant and he beat her for it. This girl was definitely traumatized.

    It's ok Leah, like Brian said you did the right thing by getting the abortion. You were 15 and after everything you went through, your child didn't deserve to live a life like that. I can't believe her dad forced her brother to watch that and he didn't even say anything, that's just I don't even know, I'm pissed off. That bastard. I hate her family so much!

    NO IT IS NOT YOUR FAULT THAT THAT GIRL AND THE BABY DIED! IT'S GOOD THAT YOU FOUGHT HIM BECAUSE HE HAD NO RIGHT TO DO THAT TO YOU!! I'M GLAD HE'S GONE, ROT IN HELL BASTARD! I DO FEEL BAD FOR THE GIRL AND THE BABY THOUGH, THEY DIDN'T DESERVE TO DIE.

    OF COURSE HER BITCH OF A MOTHER DIDN'T BELIEVE HER, SHE DIDN'T EVEN WANT HER AND HER STUPID BROTHER IS A DICK WHO DIDN'T TELL THE TRUTH, HE IS JUST AS BAD AS HIS FATHER! REALLY? ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME RIGHT NOW? YOU ASK HER TO GO BACK SO YOU CAN TELL THEM THE TRUTH BUT THEN JUST STAND THERE AND WATCH HER GET YELLED AT AND BREAK YOUR PROMISE. YEP, I'M DONE WITH YOU, YOU CAN DIE. DON'T YOU BOTHER COMING HERE BECAUSE I WILL KILL YOU MYSELF. YOU HAVE SOME NERVE EVEN CALLING HER! STUPID FUCK! GRR I'M SO PISSED OFF! *takes a second to calm down*

    Ok, I'm better now. See Leah, Brian still loves you, his feelings for you didn't change, it brought you guys closer than ever before. He will always be there for you <3 Perfect ending too <3

    Now that that is out of the way, I know there is still more drama to come. Great chapter.
    October 18th, 2013 at 07:42pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    LOL, I FLIP OUT when someone calls me in the middle of the night! I’m like “somebody better be dead, you don’t even know.” Don’t fuck with me when I’m trying to sleep hahaha! Unless you’re Synyster Gates, then you can fuck (with) me all you want LOL

    Yeah, this bitch definitely needs to die! She’s a crazy stalker! Shit goes down later on… you’ll see my friend, you’ll see LOL

    Perhaps Michelle knows about Leah, perhaps not. Michelle’s just jealous period because Brian kicked her to the curb and he’s happy and she lost her status in society. Leah needs to watch her Back, but she’s also stronger willed than you would think.

    His house is pretty fucked up, it’s a good thing he’s a gazillionaire and can get it fixed quickly. It might take forever too. Poor Brian’s so far away too.

    That’s right Brian, don’t you dare give this bitch what she wants!! Don’t let her realize that she’s getting to you!! I want to kill that bitch too, trust me!!

    MMMM dirty thoughts about those fingers… Ugh.. I can’t take it!! So hot!!

    Yay! They finally confessed their feelings!! After all of this time it was only right for them to say it for the first time while they were face to face!!

    I want to see them live again too for the HTTK tour! I saw them at a summer festival before the album came out so they still had the old stage setup and stuff, but I was literally right in front between Matt and Brian the entire time… OMG… almost died of sexiness overload. Not to mention the heat coming from the stage between all of the hot guys and the pyro was enough to make you want to pass out LOL.

    Hmm… cuddles or Brian sex…… it’s close toss up!

    Way to screw up what you would have ended up settling for anyway Michelle. Now you’ll just be getting less.

    I promise you will get shower sex down the road in this story.. more than once….

    Yeah Brian, just fuck her the way she deserves to be fucked!! Punch Matt for making fun of you, he’ll stop and then you’ll hug it out later because you guys can’t stay mad at each other.

    Leah is quite the tease….. Of course Brian has to chase her down and try to prove his point. Try harder next time Brian, I bet you can make her scream!!

    So glad you enjoyed this chapter too!! I feel like this reply sucks but I’m tipsy and starting to get really tired lol. I’m sleeping in tomorrow and NO ONE will stop me hahaha!! Can’t wait to hear more feedback from you, but I totally understand if you’re writing! Thanks Girlie!
    October 18th, 2013 at 04:19am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Here I am once again to comment on the next chapter. Let's begin.

    First off, WHO IN THE HELL IS CALLING AT TWO IN THE FLIPPING MORNING?! DON'T YOU SEE SOME PEOPLE ARE TRYING TO SLEEP?! GRR... Oh, it's Brian *is instantly awake* hahaha.

    OH SHIT! SOMEONE TRIED TO BREAK INTO BRIAN'S HOUSE? This can't be good.

    I quickly drove over to his place and found three cop cars in the driveway and one of the cops was quick to approach me as soon as I got out of the car. He asked for my ID since Brian had apparently told them I was coming and checked it over closely before handing it back to me. I followed him over to his car and he picked up a notebook that had writing all over the page it was opened to.

    “The officers are still in the house and there’s a detective on the way to go over it and make sure we didn’t miss anything, but there’s a lot of property damage. It looks like there were at least four or five people involved. It’s hard to believe the amount of damage since we arrived within 15 minutes of the call, the person or people behind this must have really had a lot of pent up anger. Do you know of anyone who would have a personal vendetta against him?” He asked me and I thought for a minute.


    MICHELLE. THIS BITCH! FIRSTLY, HOW IN THE HELL DID THIS BITCH FIND OUT WHERE HE LIVED? SHE'S A PSYCHO DUDE! I WONDER WHO HER ACCOMPLICES WERE IN THIS, APPARENTLY A BUNCH OF PSYCHO PEOPLE AS WELL. NOW SHE'S DONE IT! WHERE'S THIS BITCH AT? I'VE GOT MY KNIFE, FIND HER AND I'M GOING TO CUT HER! WHEN I'M DONE WITH HER SHE'LL WANT TO KILL HERSELF! NO ONE MESSESE WITH MY BOY'S STUFF AND GETS AWAY WITH IT. HOLD MY EARRINGS, AND MY NECKLACE, AND MY WEAVE BECAUSE IT'S ABOUT TO GO DOWN. YOU'VE MESSED WITH THE WRONG GIRL, LET ME AT HER! I'M GOING TO RIP HER APART LIMB FROM LIMB. WHY YOU TRYING TO RUN BITCH, YOU A LITTLE PUSSY? GET BACK HERE AND FIGHT ME LIKE A WOMAN!!

    Ok, mini blow up done for now but seriously don't let me find that bitch. Hmmm...I wonder...does Michelle know about Leah? Maybe that's part of the reason why she did what she did. She got jealous that his focus wasn't entirely on her anymore so she rebelled and destroyed his house. If she does, then Leah does need to watch her back because this bitch is a psycho and who knows what she'll do next. This girl needs to be sent to a psyc ward or something because this girl obviously has problems.

    DAMN! His house is fucked up dude. That's going to cost a whole lot of money and probably take a while to fix every thing and replace it all. Poor Brian, why did you have to marry a psycho bitch? Hopefully they can find her, charge her, and get her some help because she obviously needs it.

    “Hey,” I answered softly.

    “How bad is it?” He asked.

    “It’s bad Baby. Really bad.”

    “Fuck!” He yelled and then punched a wall, by the sound of it. I jumped and closed my eyes. “That’s it, I’m telling them to cancel the rest of the fucking tour and I’m coming home. I can’t just leave it like that or risk something worse happening,” he stated a little more calmly and I opened my eyes and took a deep breath.

    “No, don’t cancel the tour,” I told him as I looked over at his mom. “The cops are here, they’re going to find out who did this, they’re already pretty sure it’s Michelle, and your mom and I will take care of the house. You said she liked attention, if that’s the case, you’re going to give her exactly what she wants by backing out of the tour,” I told him and his mom nodded in agreement. “Your mom thinks so too.”


    I agree with Leah 100% DON'T GIVE THAT BITCH WHAT SHE WANTS! Keep touring and doing what you're doing and let Leah handle it, you can count on her! Don't show her that what she did affected you because that just encourages her to keep doing what she's doing. I still want to kill that bitch though.

    YAY! IT'S FINALLY TIME FOR HER TO GO ON TOUR AND SEE HER MAN LIVE FOR THE FIRST TIME! HAVE FUN GIRL! MMM GET THOSE DIRTY THOUGHTS RACING AS YOU SEE THAT SEXY MAN WORK THAT GUITAR ;)

    “I love you,” he whispered. “I’ve known that I love you, but it didn’t feel right to tell you for the first time over the phone or on Skype.”

    “Dude! Let’s go!” Zack yelled as the intro to nightmare started playing, but Brian didn’t move.

    “I love you too,” I smiled and he grinned. He caught my lips in another kiss and I quickly pulled away. “I love you too, Babe. Now go or you’re going to be in trouble with your band.” He kissed me once more before running to catch up with the guys and go out on stage.


    Aww, they finally told each other they loved each other. WOOHOO! FIANLLY! Clap

    Yep, they're so much better live! I want to see them again so bad. My attention would be focused on Matt mostly the entire time with occasional glances at the other guys. I may or may not stare at the front of his jeans a lot of the time Shifty

    “Of all of the things I missed while we were apart, I missed having you in my arms the most,” he whispered softly and I pecked him on the lips.

    “Me too,” I smiled. “I mean, the list is miles long, but this definitely tops it. Although, there is something that comes in a close second,” I smirked and wiggled my eyebrows.

    “Mmm,” he growled softly in my ear, “a very close second,” he said as his hand slowly ran up my leg and over my hip and we shared a playful kiss.


    A very close second indeed hehe ;)

    “My lawyer called me today, actually. Apparently they were able to collect enough evidence to prove that she was one of the people who broke in. They were going to get her today and officially charge her and try to get the names of her accomplices. Either way, she completely fucked herself. My lawyer is going to set up a court date for the week after I get back and petition to get the divorce finalized without her cooperation. He said it should be easy now that she fucked up. There’s a good chance all of this will be over in a few weeks and we can just move forward together and leave all of the bullshit behind us.”

    “Good, because I can’t stand seeing you constantly torn up over it,” I told him honestly. “I hate that you’re so stressed out about it all of the time, you don’t deserve to deal with it.”

    “No, you don’t deserve to deal with it,” he said softly. “You shouldn’t have had to deal with taking care of the results of her actions when I’m gone and you shouldn’t have to deal with me having to focus my attention on her and the problems she’s creating.”

    “Well, it sounds like it’s almost over. Let’s try to forget about it until we get home, we’ll deal with it then and then we’ll move past it.”


    I KNEW IT! HAHA BITCH YOU FUCKED UP NOW!!! FINALLY TIME TO RELEASE YOURSELF FROM THAT BITCH ONCE AND FOR ALL! CHARGE THAT BITCH! Dance

    Mmm that shower scene, you fucking tease! SHOWER SEX PLEASE!!! GRR...FINE

    Yet another sexy sex scene, with some sexy dirty talk! Delicious!

    “I feel like I need another shower,” I said as I yawned.

    “Me too,” he smiled, “but were on the bus for the next two days, so you can bet your ass there will be plenty more sex tonight. Bus sex, if it happens, is usually as silent as possible and I don’t know if I’ll be able to keep you quiet,” he joked.

    “Is that a challenge?” I smirked and he laughed and shook his head.

    “Get some sleep while you can, Baby. It’s going to be a rare commodity for the rest of the night,” he said as he wagged his eyebrows and leaned in for a kiss.

    “You silly man, you’re the one that needs to worry about sleeping. Otherwise, I’m likely to wear your ass out seeing as though I’m younger than you hand have more stamina,” I laughed and he was immediately on top of me, claiming my mouth once again. He grinded his hips into me as I felt him starting to spring back to life.

    “Trust me Sweetheart, I have no problem with stamina,” he growled. “I was trying to play nice, but if you don’t want a break, I’ll keep you going until the sun comes up,” he said as he nipped at my neck.

    “I don’t think you have it in you,” I smirked and bit my lip.

    “Keep it up and you’re going to get it,” he whispered and nibbled on my earlobe.

    “Ooo, I’d like to see you try,” I laughed.

    “Don’t tempt me, it could get crazy in this room tonight.”

    “Hey Rock Star,” I smirked and he groaned as I pulled his hair until he lifted his head to look in my eyes. “Shut the fuck up and show me what you got. It’s been over two months, I don’t want to leave this room until I’ve been thoroughly fucked.”

    “Game on,” he growled before kissing me ferociously and then slamming into my wet heat once again.


    Loved this!

    Haha! Those animals, at it all night.

    Damn, I wonder what's got Matt so upset. Come here Mattie, I'll make you feel better. I love you <3

    My phone went off signaling a text message while we were talking, and I opened a picture of Leah in a sexy lingerie set and a seductive look on her face.

    Want to make good on the challenge of keeping me quiet?


    Mmm naughty, naughty Leah! Go get her Brian and fuck her senseless!

    “Challenge accepted, starting right now,” I whispered and she broke into a grin briefly before moving onto her back.

    It's on now! GO LEAH! LOL.

    More sexy smut, me likey Naughty


    “Shh, Baby,” I moaned softly as I thrust deeply, “fuck!” I cried out quietly as she bit down on my shoulder and my orgasm rolled through my body even stronger than before. Moments later I collapsed on top of her and we both panted heavily as she let out a soft laugh.

    “Sorry Babe,” she whispered and I couldn’t help but laugh.

    “For what? That was fucking hot,” I smiled as I lifted my head off of her shoulder and kissed her. I grabbed her cell phone that was lying next to the pillows and looked at the time. “We gotta go Baby, you’ve used me, abused me, and now I have to go perform in front of about 18,000 people.”

    “Life as a Rock Star’s girlfriend is so hard, I don’t know if I can handle these horrible demands,” she joked as I reached down and grabbed her clothing.

    “Shut. Up.” I laughed before kissing her playfully. “I love you Babe,” I told her before kissing her one last time.

    “I love you too,” she smiled. “By the way, I totally won, you were so much louder than me.”

    I couldn’t help but bust up laughing and she quickly joined in, both of us laughing our asses of all the way to the arena.


    LOL. Leah totally cheated lol but she won nonetheless haha TAKE THAT BRIAN! GIRLS RULE, BOYS DROOL!

    Perfect ending to yet another amazing chapter. I can't wait for what happens next. I'm going to take a quick shower, probably do a few other things and then maybe read some more, even though I should be writing.
    October 18th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    Yay! So I finally have time to reply to your comments! FYI, if you enjoy having a life at all seriously think about it if you ever consider going to nursing school LOL

    Don’t give up McKenna! You can do this girl! Brian had to fall lots of times too before he learned how to do it! Plus, now there’s Leah who can help you too! AND she keeps your brother in line!

    Brian gets an A+ in penile communications hahahaha!

    Yes, please behave yourself Mr. Gates. There are people all over the place. When we’re in private you can be as bad as you like though!!

    McKenna just gets nosier as the chapters go on…. But yes, typical sibling!

    OH YOU HAVE NO IDEA! MICHELLE IS A FUCKING PSYCHO!

    I understand Papa Gates too, but Brian is 30 years old and needs to deal with this on his own. Plus, Michelle’s a crazy ass bitch, you don’t want to get mixed up in that shit!

    I know, sitting on the beach with Brian would be a total dream come true! Except we totally wouldn’t be talking about how he was leaving to go on tour without me because I would want to see that display of sexiness every single night!

    Skinny dipping and fuck in the water????.............. May already be in the story but I plead the 5th!

    OMG he is perfect in every way!! He’s caring, compassionate, funny… the list goes on and on!! Not to mention the juicy cock and nice tushy too!!

    Of course Leah has to come up with something cocky to say to him!! She needs to stand her ground!!

    Time to meet Momma Gates, what will she think? LOL

    Leah’s brother is a douche…. We’ll find out more in the future so I’ll just leave it at that….

    Brian does deserve an explanation, but poor Leah is just so scared to reopen old wounds. When she finally reveals her past you’ll understand why it was so hard for her.

    I wish I had a Brian to confide in too!! I want one! I WANT ONE!!

    It’s a good thing that Brian’s family likes her! She’s had too much hurt in her past and she deserves some happiness without the interruption from angry friends/family. Brian has definitely moved on, this was just when he finally started to see an end to all of the drama and bullshit and realize that he could still be happy in life too.

    Leah and her funny jokes LOL

    True statement! A happy belly means a happy boy!! It’s that easy LOL (I wish… hahaha)

    Yes they danced! I wish Brian would dance with me like that!! Shit, and that sex! Yes PLEASE! Where do I sign up for some of that?!?!?!?

    Brian finally realizes that he loves her but it’s just not the right time to tell her. He has some battlescars from his past too, even though they might not be as bad as Leah’s. You’ll find out soon when they say it!!

    Yeah Brian, you cheat on me and I’ll shank you! Kicking your ass doesn’t even come close!! I totally would have gone with him too BTW LOL

    I know, really? Like ANYONE could ever forget you!! I saw you in concert a couple of months ago and I still can’t get over it… SMH

    The letter was super sweet! It comes in handy though…. Hehe

    Exactly, love DOES conquer all!! I would know this from experience LOL

    I’m craving ice cream like crazy right now, you don’t even know……. It’s just 15 feet away in my freezer….. I can resist the temptations sent from Satan himself…. I swear!! ***Hides in corner with entire half gallon of ice cream and giant spoon……….

    They do need to have phone sex! That would be eventful! I honestly haven’t ventured down that route yet…. Hmmmmm

    I LMAO when I wrote that because I could totally picture Zacky in a shopping cart Jackass style LOL He just needs a helmet!!

    ***drops giant spoon and repetitively bangs head against wall here

    Of course I had to reference Matt’s COD addiction!! I heard he can be pretty brutal to his opponents LOL

    I NEED to see baby pictures of Brian, esp around age 6 when he had his mishap with reenacting the Duran Duran video. PS I watched the video… I can only picture what he was doing….

    I wish I could see too! I want to compare then and now please!

    Leah, just adopt his family as your own, you’ll be better off and the all already love you!!

    Glad you liked these two chapters!! We should totally meet someday! I can’t blame you for bleh comments…. I’m so tired right now I’m barely functioning and I know this reply sucks ass too! But at least I got your story updated!! Thanks for reading this one too!!
    October 17th, 2013 at 03:39am
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Hello again beautiful. I have just read another wonderful chapter by you, as all your chapters are.

    Hmm...I wonder why her brother is calling her, considering she's not very close to her family. I wonder why she's so scared and angry, what did he do to her? Does Brian need to beat him up or shall I?

    Yes, I think Brian deserves an explanation. Come on Leah, let Brian help you.

    Wow, I really hate her brother. Putting all the blame on her because he doesn't want to be blamed, how very immature. And he knows how put the bursn there. So, he was there when it happened but didn't do anything about it? Just smh, I can see why you don't like him, and he calls himself a brother.

    “I’m here when you want to let it out, and even if I can’t be physically present I’m only a phone call away. I don’t care what time of day or night or if you just need to hear someone say everything will be OK.”

    “I don’t think it will ever be completely OK.”

    “You can count on me to try my hardest to prove you wrong,” I said with a small smile and her lips curved slightly. I pressed my lips to hers once more and held her tightly until she had calmed down.


    Aww, I wish I had you to confide in Brian and I have no doubt that you'll show her one day that everything will be ok.

    I'm glad that all of Brian's family seems to like her, it probably feels nice since she isn't all that close to her family. It's good that Brian is moving on, he doesn't need that bitch.

    “You’re so incredible,” I whispered and she turned her face to me with a smile so I could kiss her. “Thank you for helping me out tonight, I don’t know what I would have done without you.”

    “Well, you’d probably still be cleaning up when you could be getting laid,” she smirked and I kissed her again with a laugh.


    Haha! That is probably true.

    “Everyone was crazy about you too, I mean, probably not as crazy about you as I am, but still.”

    “That’s nice to hear, I enjoyed myself tonight too,” she smiled. “You have a really great group around you. I was never close with my family so it’s nice to be around one that actually functions once in a while.”

    “Well, I suggest you get used to it because I’m planning on keeping you in the group too,” I said before kissing her on the cheek.

    “Oh yeah?” She smirked and sipped at her wine.

    “Shit, after all of that amazing food that you cooked for tonight? My stomach would never forgive me if I let you go,” I joked.


    We all know that the way to a man's heart is through his stomach, lol.

    Awww, they danced. That's so romantic and having Brian singing in my ear, just too cute! My heart would sqeeze, I would have butterflies in my stomach, and I would be smiling like a fool. Mmm, not only that but you add some smut in there too, very hot smut by the way. Mmm, ride that cock, whew!

    Aww, Brian loves her and I know deep down that she loves him too. You cute little lovebirds <3 I wonder when they will tell each other that though.

    Now it's time to say goodbye, sadly :(

    “You better behave yourself, Rock Star. Or I might be forced to come kick your ass,” I joked and he laughed softly.

    “You have nothing to worry about, Baby. You’re the only woman I need,” he smiled and kissed me again. “It’s not too late to change your mind, you can still jump on that bus with me,” he smirked.


    Yeah, you better behave rock star. I'm trusting you to be a good boy while you're gone.

    “That is more tempting than you realize, but Mandy would kill me and I’m pretty sure my boss wouldn’t be too big on the idea,” I smiled.

    You already know that I would've been like "fuck everything, I'm going" lol.

    “Fine then, just leave me brokenhearted, now I have to go write a bunch of depressing music,” he smiled back and we shared another laugh before our lips brushed together. “I’ll call you later tonight when we’re back on the road for the night after we stop for dinner. Try not to forget about me while I’m gone,” he smirked.

    “Yeah, like that would ever happen,” I smiled with a small laugh.


    Haha, Brian shut up :D

    Aww that letter was so sweet. Brian has to trust her and love her a whole lot if he would willingly give her the key to his house after what happened with Michelle.

    “So you finally decide to go all in on a relationship, and the man you choose has a job that takes him away from home for months at a time,” she stated more than questioned.

    “I know, how ironic, right? The only man I can’t stand to be away from and our relationship has already turned into a long distance one less than a month in,” I laughed.

    “You’re lucky I love you, Leah. Otherwise I can’t promise I would put up with you when you go and make things so difficult,” she joked and we both laughed.


    That definitely sucks, but love conquers all, even distance!!

    Mmm I want to stuff my face with ice cream.

    OHH PHONE SEX! YES PLEASE!! LOL.

    “Just kind of getting the bus settled for the tour, we had quite the eventful trip to the grocery store after we ate dinner. Zack got stuck in a shopping cart, it’s a long story,” he sighed and I smirked.

    OMG LMAO!! The image of Zacky being stuck in the shopping cart...too funny. I bet people were looking at them like what the fuck lol.

    “Mandy and I watched chick flicks and tore through carton after carton of ice cream,” I replied, only half joking about the ice cream.

    “Sounds enthralling, I’m so sad I missed it,” he said sarcastically.

    “Hey! I don’t want to hear it! Ben and Jerry’s is better than Xanax.”

    “Yeah, and the only side effect is diabetes,” he laughed.

    “Don’t ruin it for me!” I laughed back.


    YEAH BRIAN, DON'T RUIN IT FOR ME! I LOVE ICE CREAM TOO MUCH TO STOP EATING IT!!

    We talked for about a half hour and it amazed me that we didn’t run out of things to say since we had just seen each other that morning. He muffled the receiver of the phone as Matt started talking to him and once he came back on he informed me that he was going to go get his ass handed to him in Call of Duty. We talked for a few more minutes before I heard Matt in the background again and Brian sighed with fake annoyance.

    “I guess I have to go, if I don’t he’s never going to shut the fuck up,” he joked and I heard a noise that sounded like someone being punched in the shoulder.

    “You boys have fun, try not to kill each other,” I joked.


    Lol, that's my Matt, The King of Call of Duty haha.

    It's time for her to spend time with Brian's mom, this should be eventful lol. Hahaha, baby pictures of Brian, awwww. I can so see her telling Leah embarassing stories about Brian, lol.

    You were sooo cute as a baby! WTF happened?

    Barely a minute went by before he texted me back.

    Oh God, I’d call and stop her if we weren’t getting ready to do sound check

    I laughed to myself before replying

    Too late, damage is already done. She already showed me the pictures of your winky

    I told his mom what I had texted him and we were both still rolling with laughter when I got the last message back from him.

    Don’t believe any stories she tells, she’s a big fat liar. Make sure you tell her I said that too since I know you’re both laughing at me right now. PS, Did you notice I was hung since birth?


    I laughed so hard at this. Mmm, I bet you were hung Brian I wish I could see ;) Lol I'm such a pervert.

    I'm glad she got to spend time with his mom and bond with her a little. His mom is really sweet. How about you just forget about your family and be apart of Brian's family instead, they'll take care of you. Everything will be ok Leah, you just have to believe it.

    Anyways, great chapter, I love you and your witty humor. We need to meet and hangout someday. That would be pretty awesome. This is another bleh comment :/ but just know that I loved it.
    October 16th, 2013 at 08:16pm
  • Angelina Shadows

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    Another splendid chapter, written by you lovely lady.

    Aww come on Mckenna you can do it!! It's ok girl, I have no idea how to surf either and I would probably fall over a million times too so don't feel bad, you're not alone.

    “Don’t you have other people to teach, you know, the ones that are paying you?” I joked as McKenna came back to us again.

    “Don’t let me step on your pride,” she laughed. “Besides, I’m not here for you anyway, I’m here for your poor sister who has to deal with you all day.”

    “I like you!” McKenna smiled at Leah. “Bri, I really like her,” McKenna laughed.

    “I’m sure you do,” I mumbled jokingly.


    Haha, she told him! LOL. At least you have your sister's approval even if it is only because she gets on you hehe :D

    Well...at least with Leah's help she made progress lol! It seems Leah is a better teacher than you hahaha.

    “See, you can do it,” Leah told her with a smile. “Just keep practicing and you’ll get there. Brian’s not a bad teacher, I think you were both just getting frustrated. If it gets to be too much, just take a break and go get a smoothie or something. You don’t want to get pissed at each other because you won’t want to listen to him and he might not communicate as clearly. He’s a man, so communication is hard for him in the first place,” Leah smirked and McKenna tried to hold back a laugh.

    “Ha ha ha, you’re just so funny,” I smirked at Leah.


    He may suck communicating from his mouth but he is good at communicating with his penis! Lmao!

    “OK,” she smiled and I pressed my lips to hers.

    “Mmm,” I groaned, “I missed those lips last night.”

    “Yeah? They missed you too,” she laughed. “Let’s face it though, if I would have come back over after work, your bedroom still wouldn’t be painted. It’s going to be hard enough to finish the edges tonight without you distracting me.”

    “Trust me, something’s going to be hard alright,” I smirked before catching her lips in a deep kiss and slipping a hand between her legs to rub her through her bikini bottoms. She smiled into the kiss and dropped one of her hands under the water to push my hand away.

    “Behave yourself,” she laughed. “I have to go to work, I’ll see you in a little while.” She briefly pressed her lips to mine again before swimming back towards the beach.


    Mmm someone's a little horny. Behave yourself Brian, they're people around, particularly your sister! We don't need her seeing that...AWKWARD!! LOL.

    Damn, she is getting all up in his business! GIRL HOW ABOUT YOU MIND YOUR DAMN BUSINESS AND STOP ASKING BRIAN ALL THESE QUESTIONS! YOU DON'T SEE HIM GOING AROUND ASKING ABOUT YOUR BOYFRIENDS, SHEESH...SIBLINGS LOL.

    OH SHIT! WHAT DID THIS BITCH CALL FOR? THIS BITCH IS A FUCKING STALKER! STAY THE HELL AWAY FROM BRIAN BITCH OR I WILL CUT YOU! I'M CRAZY! DON'T MESS WITH ME RIGHT NOW!

    “What do you think would happen if Michelle found out? Would she be pissed, even though she cheated on you?”

    WHO GIVES A FUCK WHAT SHE THINKS?! I FUCKING DON'T! IT'S BEEN OVER FOR AWHILE NOW SO IT DOESN'T MATTER WHAT SHE THINKS.

    “I heard Michelle called the other day asking for my address and phone number,” I said as I looked up at him.

    “Who told you that?” He asked.

    “It doesn’t matter. I want to know why you never told me.”

    “Brian,” he sighed, “look, you won’t understand until you become a parent, but you never stop trying to protect your children no matter how old they are.”


    I understand Papa Gates but that bitch is crazy and we don't need her taking all his money and ruining his life because she has no life.

    Mmm how I would love to sit on the beach with Brian...sigh

    I feel for you Leah, it upsets me every time Matt goes on tour, leaving me here, missing him hahahahaha. Yes, you should totally go with him, I'm sure you want to see him rock out on that guitar, watch those skilled fingers move up and down the fret board, get dirty thoughts in your mind until you're on the verge of insanity and then having your way with him in the bunks ;)

    Yes, let's swim! Darn! I was hoping they would go skinny dipping and fuck in the water but sex on the beach is ok. Mm, so open...my pussy is drooling now. Mmm such sexy smut. Matt, come fuck me on the beach please!

    “That was really beautiful,” I told him as I smiled and rested my head on his shoulder. “Is there anything about you that isn’t perfect?” I asked jokingly.

    RIGHT?! HE IS PERFECT IN EVERY WAY <3

    “Oh, please,” he laughed, “name one thing about me that is.”

    “Eh,” I shrugged, “you have a pretty nice ass,” I remarked and we both started laughing as he rested his hand on my leg and kissed me on the top of the head.


    I would've said, you have a nice cock, it's big and juicy hehe ;) but he has a nice ass too, I just wanna squeeze it!


    “Good, then hopefully you won’t forget about me when you go on tour and thousands of women are throwing themselves at your feet, tempting you with their half-naked bodies,” I joked.

    “Let me put it this way, women like that that tend to be around us are like rawhide bones to a dog. If we have nothing better they’ll work temporarily, but when there’s a top of the line prime rib waiting for us, without a doubt we go for quality instead of quantity. You get what I’m saying?” He smiled and kissed me.

    “So, basically I’m just a good piece of meat?” I joked and we shared another laugh.

    “You’re impossible,” he smirked, brushing his lips against mine one more time before his cell phone started to ring.


    Haha Leah!

    Ohhh she's going to meet Brian's mom! I don't blame you for being nervous girl but you can handle it. I'm sure she'll like you. I think it would be interesting if she didn't though lol.

    Anyways, great chapter. I feel like this comment was sucky, sorry about that :( Hopefully the next one is better. I loves you <3 I can't wait for my story, I'm going crazy!
    October 16th, 2013 at 12:53am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    THANKS! LOL

    Poor Leah does have a lot of physical scars as well as emotional. It is a shame that such beautiful art serves the purpose of covering up her ugly past.

    Brian is great with her! We’ll see how long his patience lasts though. He’s understanding but he is only human after all and he’s been hurt in the past too.

    YES! SEXY COCKINESS! It’s just not right if Brian isn’t cocky whatsoever. Leah does bring it all on herself, but what woman in their right mind wouldn’t?

    Seriously guys, clearly Brian is trying to get laid. LEAVE HIM ALONE!! Brian, just turn the phone off and ignore them. They’ll forgive you, I promise!

    UGH! STOP CALLING!! SUCH A PAIN IN THE ASS!!

    Calm down Matt, it’s not the end of the world, I swear to you!

    Really Bri? REALLY? Hot naked woman in your bed that you’re already hard for and you’re worried about the MEETING? WTF? You better hurry the fuck up and satisfy your woman’s needs!

    HAHAHA! Glad you liked the little shot I took at Johnny! Like I said, it’s just not a proper A7X story unless Johnny gets made fun of!

    Yes, don’t worry about the omelets! Eat her instead!! She’s much more satisfying!!

    YES!!! I knew you would like the kitchen sex!!! I knew it!!

    Yes Leah! Get him all wet! Do it! DO IT!!

    I’m sure Brian wouldn’t mind if you bragged about his abilities just a little bit! The man has an ego the size of the solar system!!

    Don’t fight it! Just go with it Leah! Who wouldn’t love this man?

    OMG I LOVE THIS GAME!! I play it with my friends all of the time! You can have so much fun with this! Especially when you’re on a caffeine high!

    That’s right guys. Girls rule, boys drool! Get over it!!!

    You better step up your game Matthew! Arianna isn’t going to put up with your shit!

    Of course SEXY TIME! Nice work Leah, but more importantly NICE WORK BRIAN!! Clearly you know how to work it!

    Thanks again for the comment! Sorry, I’m a little distracted right now LOL. I came up with an AMAZING idea for your story! Hopefully I’ll be able to get it all out the way I want to today! I’m sorry if this reply sucks! I was busting up the entire time I was reading your comment though! I love you!!

    Arms
    October 15th, 2013 at 10:37pm
  • Angelina Shadows

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    AWESOME CHAPTER! There were some parts that made me laugh but we'll get to those soon. Let's go back, back to the beginning lol sorry about that I was thinking about this song.

    Anyways, aww poor Leah. I'm guessing her father had something to do with those scars, that bastard. Ouch, cigarette burns hurt like hell, believe me I know from experience. Aww, the tattoo seems pretty too bad it's purprose was to hide the scars though :(

    It's sweet how Brian is so patient with her, not forcing her to tell him what happened right away. He understands that she isn't ready yet to bring up the old memories of her past just yet but I have no doubt she'll tell him when she's ready.

    “I don’t want our dynamic to change now that you know what you know. Last night was amazing, I’ve never felt so connected to someone else and I want the emotional bond and the trust that I’m gaining with you. I love this side of you and I don’t want it to go away, but I really need you to still be that cocky asshole that tried to pick me up with a line about sex wax sometimes too,” she smirked and I laughed softly.

    “Trust me, that guy’s not going anywhere. When I say shit like that it’s some kind of fucked up reflex, it’s like I have a quota of stupid shit that needs to come out of my mouth every day. I’m more worried about offending you than I am about becoming too soft,” I joked as the mood started to lighten up.

    “Yeah, well, in case you haven’t noticed, I’m kind of hard to offend. I have a tendency to be raunchier than most women,” she smirked as her hands moved down my back and squeezed my ass.

    “Now you’re in trouble, I hope you’re ready for what you just started,” I growled playfully into her ear before tackling her neck with kisses.


    I have no doubt about that, you're naturally a cocky bastard, there's no way you can just get rid of that, plus it's sexy ;) Mmm, she brought that upon herself, SEXY TIME! OH YES PLEASE!!

    WHO IN THE FUCK IS CALLING HIM RIGHT NOW?! DON'T YOU FUCKING REALIZE HE'S BUSY ABOUT TO FUCK, SO STOP CALLING!!

    Yes, just ignore it Brian, have your sexy little way with her ;)

    GODDAMMIT! WHAT DO YOU PEOPLE WANT! YOU'RE INTERRUPTING MY SEXY TIME!! JUST HURRY UP AND AND ANSWER THE DAMN PHONE SO YOU CAN GET BACK TO BUSINESS.

    “I swear to God, another band member better be dead if you’re blowing up my phone like this,” I answered without any formal greeting.

    DAMN RIGHT! INTERRUPTING MY SEXY TIME...JUST BLASPHEMY.

    MATT, I LOVE YOU BUT WHY IN THE MOTHERFUCKING HELL ARE YOU INTERRUPTING BRIAN'S SEXY TIME, GO ON, PISS OFF! LOL. Omg I'm cracking myself up! Lmao!

    “No, but I might decide to fucking knock you off if you’re not going to come to our scheduled meetings.” Fuck. “You were supposed to be here over a half an hour ago, are you coming or what?” That’s right, there was a band meeting this morning to go over the final arrangements for the tour.

    “My bad, Bro. I completely forgot about it,” I admitted before quietly pressing my lips to Leah’s.

    “So are you coming over to Zack’s place or what?”

    “I can’t, it would take me at least 45 minutes to get ready and get over there and I’m kind of busy this morning. Can you just Skype me in?”


    PSH FUCK THE MEETING, IT CAN WAIT! SEXY TIME PLEASE!!!

    “Busy? You’re fucking busy? I’m sorry, did this band get in the way of your life?” He kept going as I caught Leah’s lips in a slow lazy kiss. “Are you even fucking listening to me?” He practically yelled and Leah and I both smirked.

    NO, HE'S BUSY WITH HIS GIRL, WANTING SOME SEXY TIME BUT YOU'RE RUDELY INTERRUPTING!

    “Matt, are you going to Skype me in or not?” I asked with a sigh.

    “Only if it won’t inconvenience your day,” he snapped.


    GRR...FINE BUT MAKE IT QUICK, I'VE GOT A LADY BONER HERE!

    I gave Leah a few more kisses, “I completely forgot I had a meeting this morning, they’re going to Skype me but it shouldn’t take too long. I’m sorry.”

    “I understand,” she smiled and kissed me.

    “Don’t go anywhere. I’ll try to make it quick.”


    YOU BETTER MAKE IT QUICK! SHE'S NOT THE ONLY ONE WAITING ON YOU!! LOL.

    “What’s up, Slacker?” He smirked. “Too busy drowning in pussy to show up this morning?” He joked and I laughed.

    YES, WHICH AGAIN YOU ARE RUDELY INTERRUPTING! LET'S GET ON WITH IT ALREADY!!

    “Fuck yeah, I got a whole house full of bitches,” I smirked.

    “Matt just ran out to his car, he’s so fucking pissed at you, Dude.”

    “He’ll get over it.”


    AND I'M PISSED AT HIM FOR INTERRUPING SEXY TIME!

    “What’s wrong, Bro? Cora not putting out?” I asked, referring to his girlfriend. I took a drag from my cigarette, “Are we doing this or what?”

    “Why are you in such a hurry to get this over with? You got a naked girl in your bed or something?” Johnny laughed.

    “Maybe I do, maybe I don’t. Maybe I was trying to jack off as I thought about your mom,” I smirked and Johnny shook his head.

    “Alright, let’s get this going before you hurt Johnny’s feelings and he gets all pissy,” Zack interjected before carrying the laptop over to the kitchen and sitting it at the end of the table so I could see everyone.


    OMG! LMAO! I AM LAUGHING MY ASS OFF RIGHT NOW, FUCKING HILARIOUS!! LOVE IT!!!

    “You’re making this decision hard,” I smirked.

    “What decision?”

    “Eating that amazing looking omelet you just made, or having you for breakfast.”


    I vote on having HER for breakfast! FUCK THE OMLETTE'S LET'S HAVE SOME PUSSY FOR BREAKFAST, AFTER ALL IT'S SO MUCH SWEETER ;) Ok, I'll stop now.

    MMM sexual tension, BEND HER OVER THE TABLE AND FUCK THE SHIT OUT OF HER BRIAN, NO ONE'S STOPPING YOU!! JUST TAKE HER ALREADY!!

    OH MY GOD FINALLY! WHEW! THAT WAS SOME HOT SMUT RIGHT THERE!! I'M DEFINITELY GOING TO NEED TO GO TAKE CARE OF MYSELF!!

    Mmm yes, touch yourself and come nice and hard all over his cock, yes please!

    “Leah Baby, I can do things to you that you probably didn’t even know were possible.”

    OH BRIAN YOU ARE GETTING ME ALL RILED UP! I have no doubt that you can ;)

    I wouldn't mind laying around in the hammock with Brian all day or even Matt, I would probably never leave haha!

    “Aww, come on Leah, give me the dirty details!” She begged.

    Yes, Leah, give her all the dirty dets, you don't have to be afraid, maybe I'll tell her about it myself hehe ;)

    Aww, you are totally falling in love with Brian Leah, don't deny it. I mean, how can you not, IT'S FUCKING BRIAN!! LOL

    “Have you guys ever played that game where you make up stories for random people you see?” I asked. Brian and Matt looked at me like I was crazy.

    HELL YES! THAT GAME IS HELLA FUN!!


    “Ooo, I have,” Cora smiled. “Why, who are we watching?” She asked and I nodded over to the guy. “I bet he’s rich, but he’s one of those eco conservationist freaks that doesn’t like to pollute the atmosphere so he rides his bike every day.”

    “Yeah, he wants people to think he’s really healthy, but in reality he rides his bike on the lowest setting so he doesn’t have to work very hard. The whole pant leg in the sock thing is really just for show,” I smirked and noticed Brian and Matt were both smiling at this point.

    “He tells everyone he’s married and has two kids, a boy and a girl. He says his family is perfect and portrays himself as having the perfect life,” Cora laughed.

    “In reality though, he’s a 40 year old virgin who doesn’t have the first clue about how to approach women,” I added and we all started snickering and trying to hold in laughs.

    “And in five years, he’ll be the most active member in his church while leading a double life of being your average, every day serial killer,” she finished in a completely serious tone of voice and all four of us totally lost it.

    “How is it that you two are on the same track with this and we have never heard of it?” Matt laughed.

    “Because we’re fucking awesome,” I replied without hesitation before sipping my coffee.


    OMG, THIS WAS REALLY FUNNY, I WAS LAUGHING THE WHOLE TIME! HOW CAN YOU GUYS HAVE NOT PLAYED THAT GAME?! YEP YOU BOYS ARE LAME AND THE GIRLS ARE AWESOME!! :D

    Bri, I like her already. She’s a keeper, don’t fuck it up,” Cora told him as she shot daggers out of her eyes and I smirked before looking over at him.

    “Trust me, I’m not letting her go for as long as she’ll put up with me, and even then I’m still going to go after her,” he replied with a smile.

    “I think I just vomited in my mouth a little bit,” Matt joked with him.

    “Hey,” Cora punched Matt in the arm, “it’s romantic, why don’t you take some notes?” She laughed.


    I laughed at this too. Yeah Matt, I suggest you take some fucking notes because if you're going to be with me in the future you're going to have to learn how to be romantic haha!

    “Wipe that shit eating grin off of your face and get the stuff ready,” I smirked as I walked past him and ripped down the few pieces of tape that he had put around the doorframe. He grabbed me by the hip and spun me around, pinning me against the wall so that we were face to face.

    “You know, you’re really fucking hot when you have an attitude,” he said softly with a smile.

    “Yeah, what are you going to do about it?” I teased as I hooked my fingers in the belt loops of his shorts and pulled him flush against me.

    “I think I’m going to wait until tomorrow to start painting, something just came up in my schedule for tonight,” he said with a small laugh, pressing his quickly hardening length against me.

    “I see that,” I said as I leaned forward and brushed my lips along the base of his throat.

    “Mmm,” he moaned deeply, “those perfect lips of yours are enough to make a man go crazy.”

    “Oh, Mr. Haner,” I laughed playfully, “you have no fucking idea.”


    FUCK YEAH! MORE SEXY TIME, YES PLEASE!!

    Mmm blow job! That really had me going!! Then some hot smut, mmm take her Brian, fuck her hard! Damn, she squirted, I have yet to find a guy to make me squirt lol.

    Another amazing chapter, filled with delicious smut! Plus some funny moments, loved it!!! I'm really liking this story so far and I can't wait to see what happens next. I will tell you this again and probably a million times more, you are a great writer and I love you!!

    Ok, I'm done. Goodbye now Very Happy
    October 15th, 2013 at 08:38pm