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  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ fiction246
    Aww, thanks! Yeah, her brother definitely isn't good news. New chapter just posted! Thanks for the feedback!
    October 7th, 2013 at 04:45am
  • akmo4725

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    uh oh!!!! I wonder what is going to happen at this meeting!!!! And yay!!!!!! He proposed!!! I am so happy for them!! I can't wait to read the next update!!!
    October 7th, 2013 at 02:41am
  • pekigirl

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    yey anothet chapter!!! awww and they're getting married! that's so adorable :'3 and the 'string' ring was a good idea.
    I'd much rather have one of those with meaning behind than a piece of jewelery :) brian is cute.
    ohh and kinky moment in the shower. I liked the way you described it because it sounded very realistic and not like other stories where guys are rough and hard straightaway. That's almost rape for someone who hadn't tried that type of thing before. Brian was gentle and sweet and that way it made it more believable ;) damn, I just love the way you write, seriously :) Awesome!
    ouuh and brother returns.. I'm curious to see where this is headed :)
    great chapter as always and I'm looking forward to the next ^^
    October 6th, 2013 at 08:50am
  • prettypsyche

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    Yeah, I'm not buying her brother's story. I can't help but feel just a touch suspicious at the convenient timing of her mom's illness and her supposed apology. Tommy has proven in the past that he's a bit of a pussy when it comes to confrontation. Who's to know for sure if Mommy Dearest really does have cancer? And I'm pretty suspicious on how he found her address.
    October 6th, 2013 at 07:20am
  • fiction246

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    Yay :) I'm glad your back!!! I hate that her brother is here and I hope he doesn't try to stir up trouble!!! I just want her and Brian to be happy but I just feel like something is going to happen with tommy!!! Looking forward to more :D
    October 6th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • akmo4725

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    I am so happy Leah can see her future with Brian now!! That makes me so happy!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:44pm
  • fiction246

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    Absolutely loved this chapter :) their conversation at the end was just...I loved it :) hope you have a good few weeks. Looking forward to the next update!!!
    August 24th, 2013 at 02:05pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ H_DIZZLE

    Happy that you are enjoying the intimate moments, I try not to get too overly mushy with everything but I feel that it's a necessary part of the story. Thanks for reading and commenting!
    August 24th, 2013 at 06:19am
  • pogo5176

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    That was an amazing chapter. Loving the fact that they share so many intimate moments together and show each other how they feel. can't wait for the next update when ever it is, have fun with your husband when you can.
    August 24th, 2013 at 06:12am
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    @ synystergirl
    Thanks so much! We'll definitely make our short time worth it! Thanks for reading!
    August 24th, 2013 at 06:10am
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    Thanks for letting us know you won't be updating for a while - I'm so happy your husband is coming home!! Have a wonderful time and cherish every moment you have together. Hope to hear from you soon!!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:53am
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    @ akmo4725

    I'm really happy to hear that this was your favorite chapter, it's definitely one of mine! Michelle totally deserved to get hit in the face, and I only wish I had the balls that Leah does in this story Cool Leah's definitely starting to picture a future, more of that in the next chapter! Thanks for letting me know what you thought!!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:21am
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    @ fiction246

    Hahahaha! I'm so glad someone liked her comeback! I was worried that people would think it was juvenile and stupid, but I thought it was pretty good so I decided to throw it in. I had to throw in the bit about Cora and Leah because it only seemed realistic for them to occasionally get fed up with other women chasing after their men for their attention! Happy to hear that you all liked how I closed out the chapter as well!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:17am
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    @ mforaker

    She definitely put Michelle in her place! I'm pretty sure that will be the end of her, but you never know what could happen in the future :)

    @ prettypsyche

    I know, crazy how after all that she decides to show her face again! What a B!

    @ H_DIZZLE @ Sarahsmom01

    Glad you both enjoyed it!! Thanks so much for letting me know you liked it!!
    August 24th, 2013 at 05:13am
  • fiction246

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    wonderful chapter. that whole bit with Cora and Leah was hilarious!!! that's a way to get the guys attention alright. and that whole bit with Michelle - "you were just the appetizer that left a bad taste in his mouth before he got to the main course" - OH MY GOSH that was excellent!!! best comeback!!! and that very last sentence :) i love it!! looking forward to more!!!
    August 22nd, 2013 at 04:12am
  • akmo4725

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    Omg this was by far the best chapter yet!!!!! I loved it!! Punching Michelle in the face was classic and I can't wait to see what happens!!! Aww Leah can finally picture marriage!!!
    August 21st, 2013 at 11:16am
  • mforaker

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    I'm glad she put Michelle in her place and I do hope that's the end of her. Great chapter!!
    August 21st, 2013 at 04:01am
  • prettypsyche

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    What an amazing coincidence that Michelle wants Brian back the moment he's seeing someone else!
    August 21st, 2013 at 03:14am
  • pogo5176

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    That chapter was awesome
    August 21st, 2013 at 03:03am
  • Sarahsmom01

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    Absolutely LOVED this chapter.. that was amazing
    August 21st, 2013 at 03:00am