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  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ Ravenhair24
    I've never seen Safe Haven, but I'll have to check it out now LOL. I don't really have a specific person that I'm modeling Leah after, but I guess I would say Carrie Underwood-ish in looks with an attitude of Reese Witherspoon in Sweet Home Alabama crossed with a little bit of Rutina Wesley from True Blood. I'm just trying to make her my own, but if I had to pick people that's probably who I would go with. I know it probably doesn't make sense with those 3 people though LOL. I'm trying to stick with some of the qualities that Brian actually portrays in real life but throw a bunch of my own in too. I'm trying to make his character believable but keep the nostalgia of who most fans know him as LOL.
    July 7th, 2013 at 12:16am
  • LadyRaven

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    @ NeverWakeMeUp
    Yeah your version of Brian is one of my favorites so far! Most of the ones that I have read where he as had a tough breakup he always comes across as too wounded, and all the others he is written as a cocky SOB who is too vain for his own good. I think that you have done a good job making him cocky (but not too cocky), because he does come across as a cocky motherf***er in reality, as well as a realistic version of a man who has been through a tough breakup/divorce. Also you are right about him being a private person, in fact most of them are with the exception of Zacky who does most of the social media stuff. Who do you invision as Leah, because I keep seeing Julianne Hough from Safe Haven (maybe with longer hair). I'm just wondering?
    July 7th, 2013 at 12:05am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ Ravenhair24
    I'm so glad you liked it! I'm trying my best to not let Leah's past out too soon, I'm definitely planning on tying it into the story some more and it will definitely bring more tension farther into the relationship. I can only dream that this is the way he really is and let my mind wander with that LOL. Thanks so much for reading/commenting!
    July 6th, 2013 at 11:31pm
  • LadyRaven

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    Another great chapter! I'm really curious though about her past. Don't reveal it too soon as you are doing a great job of building the curiousity and suspense around her character. All I'm going to say is that I wish this version of Brian was real and he was mine *sighs* (I don't have a clue how the real Brian is in real life but if he is half as awesome as your version then that is the reason why he is my favorite with Zacky a very close second Smile).
    July 6th, 2013 at 11:21pm
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    @ Ravenhair24 Thanks for the comment! More just posted!!
    July 6th, 2013 at 09:59pm
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    @ Jennazz
    Thanks soo much for your feedback!!! I'm so glad you like it! Hoping that what I have in mind makes it just keep getting better!!
    July 6th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • Jennazz

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    Only one chapter and I already love this story (which doesn't happen very often). Please update soon =]
    July 3rd, 2013 at 10:29am
  • LadyRaven

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    LOVE IT!!! Can't wait to read more!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 06:14am