Changing Tides - Comments

  • The end of that chapter was just wow!!! And when Brian was yelling at McKenna!!! Awesome chapter :) looking forward to more!!!
    August 20th, 2013 at 01:39am
  • Way to go Mac hahaha omg this chapter and the love between Brian and Leah was amazing!! So well written!! Please update soon!!!
    August 20th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • They are so in love! I'm jealous!! He was pretty cool with McKenna, awesome big brother!!
    August 19th, 2013 at 10:47pm
  • @ fiction246

    I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! Thanks for reading and giving it a chance, more just posted!!

    @ pekigirl

    Glad you liked it and that you thought the chapter title fit. I was having a hard time coming up with a chapter title for that one, so I'm glad that you think it works. Thanks for reading and commenting!!
    August 19th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • ohhh I loved this chapter :p the title just fits so perectly with the chapter ahah
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:56pm
  • Just found this and I really like it so far :) looking forward to more!!! I really love Leah and I'm glad that Brian can make her happy :) hope it lasts!!
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:14pm
  • @ NeverWakeMeUp

    Yeah you are doing a great job of setting a pace that is steady for their relationship. I hate those stories where the two characters fall in love in like the second chapter after only iknowing each other for a day or two.

    What do you mean at least for now? There is more drama to come? I hate hearing that because I just wish that Brian would get a little break from all the crazy.

    Yeah I was wondering how long he was going to let her keep her secrets. I mean after being together for so long (close to six months) and saying "I love you" you would think that she would feel comfortable telling Brian about what happened.

    Yeah I love seeing Brian in big brother mode, and I'm glad that the next chapter will include more of that! I just enjoy getting to see that side of him. :)
    August 18th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • @ mforaker

    Welcome to the story! LOL

    First off, thanks for giving it a chance. I'm really glad you are enjoying it and I totally agree, every girl does wish they could find a guy like this Brian! We'll have to see if he stays on top of his game now! Thanks for reading and giving me your feedback!
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:17am
  • @ akmo4725

    Brian is definitely super protective of her, but I think they have an overall good relationship so we'll have to see what happens in the next chapter! I'm really glad you like Brian and Leah's relationship! They're definitely going good right now! Thanks for your feedback!
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:15am
  • @ synystergirl

    Yes! Miss McKenna definitely put herself in a tough position and put Brian in a tough position as well! We'll see what happens in the next chapter! Hope to have it up soon! Thanks for your feedback!
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:12am
  • @ Ravenhair24
    No need for apologies! I know life gets crazy sometimes LOL. I'm so glad that you're still into this story though! I'm trying to set a good pace for Leah and Brian's relationship, so it's relieving to know that it seems to be being received fairly well.

    The Michelle/Brian mess has worked itself out, at least for now......

    I debated how far to drag out Leah keeping her secrets, but it seemed like it was only right that Brian reached some sort of breaking point, after all, he is only human, and he's a man LOL

    I'm really glad that you liked the sex scene, trust me, I needed a cold shower after writing it! Hahaha! As far as Brian in the big brother role, there's definitely more to come of that in the next chapter as it's literally picking up exactly where this one left off. I almost included it in the last chapter, but the chapter would have been ridiculously long.

    It was great to hear from you! I always enjoy your feedback!!
    August 18th, 2013 at 02:11am
  • I started reading this this morning. Very well written. I love the emotion, and every girl wishes they could find a guy like Brian. Just hope he doesn't end up being a dick!
    August 17th, 2013 at 08:03pm
  • Haha oh way to go Mac!!!! I love how protective Brian is of her! And him and Leah are amazing together!! Update soon!!
    August 17th, 2013 at 04:50pm
  • uh oh - someone's in trouble now!!! Hurry and update please!!!
    August 17th, 2013 at 06:19am
  • Sorry it's been a while since I have commented, life got in the way. Let me start off by saying that I love the progress that Leah and Brian have made in not only their relationship but also their personal happiness. I'm totally loving this story!

    Since I missed two chapters of comments let me just say that I'm glad that everything worked out with the whole Michelle mess, and that they were able to get Brian's house somewhat back to it's orginal state. And I'm so glad that we finally found out what happened with Leah's past. It broke my heart to read about what happened to her and honestly for a second I was afraid she wouldn't tell Brian what happened.

    AND OMG! I would like to order one Brian to go please! I almost had to take a cold shower there after the whole mirror sex scene! XD Also I have told you this before but I love getting to see Brian play big brother and this chapter was no exception. I love how pissed off he got at his sister for doing the exact same thing he did when he was her age. It is rather comical.

    As always it was another great chapter! Keeo up the amazing work!
    August 17th, 2013 at 05:21am
  • @ akmo4725
    Thanks so much!! New chapter just posted and I'm already working on the next!!
    August 17th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • I really love this story!! I just started reading it today and totally fell in love!!!
    August 11th, 2013 at 07:45pm
  • Really great chapter - I'm glad it didn't take long for Leah to tell Brian what was going on. Hurry with the next update please!!!
    August 1st, 2013 at 06:13am
  • @ pekigirl
    I'm glad you liked it despite the fact that it made you cry LOL. The truth is finally out now and there's plenty more in store for the two of them. Thanks so much for reading!!
    July 31st, 2013 at 11:56pm
  • oh my god, I don't even know what to say. You made me cry with this chapter. It was so emotional and deep. I'm so glad Leah told brian everything. It was good to her and I hope they can keep building up their relationship with wach other.. god I love this story! :) great chapter
    July 31st, 2013 at 11:48pm