Far from Home. - Comments

I really loved this story. It made me cry when Lucy appeared to him while he was drunk and mentioned Jimmy. That me ball so hard!!

Loved this story - and I'm so glad you're going to do a sequel. Please keep us updated on the progress of it. Can't wait to read more!!

Loved it.

Loved it.

Loved it.

I'm glad you're doing a sequel. I can't wait to read it.

Aww, they've had another baby! That's so cute. And I totally agree with their choice to move back to Huntington, they really need a fresh start somewhere where they can have family support.

I'm surprised that he never told Emily of his past, what so ever. I mean, you might have mentioned it earlier, but I don't recall... so it's still surprising me. Haha. I'm glad she's taking it well, because it's a pretty big secret to have kept... especially about the part of him already being married before.

Aww, the meeting with his parents was adorable. I don't blame her for being so nervous, who knows if they'd be mad at Brian for taking off or blame her or something... but thankfully they aren't those kinds of people

Well, in my opinion, I think that's the perfect end to their story. I'm happy with this to be the last one... that's not to say if you decided to do another sequel I wouldn't read it, but I just feel it's all wrapped up neatly now that it really doesn't need another installment. But hey, it's up to you. If you're happy to keep writing about these characters, then go for it. Or if you wanna move on to another story, then do that. I'm happy either way

Sequel :)

I have to say a sequel. :) Find out what happens next for them.

I want a sequel! I had a tooth out today and it hurts like a bitch! A sequel to this FANTASTIC story would make me feel tons better . I have loved reading this and I want more .... Sorry if I'm being selfish, but I don't wanna stop reading this. I hope you decide on a sequel xx

Yes! A sequel! Beautiful ending.
But I'd like to see more and how everything has been in Huntington since he left.

And so, it ends. But happily! Oh happy day! I couldn't have asked or written anything better. You rock!

And a new little girl and a life back in Huntington! Yay! And a new little girl, too. That part I definitely didn't expect but I'm very happy that you chose it.

Personally I think a sequel or an epilogue would be just great. But then again, dreaming up what happens next sounds just perfectly right as well. So, for me, I'd say to leave it just like it is, it's perfect and beautiful. You did a great job!

I would like a sequel..I absolutely loved this story and I am so sad to have it end...one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time...

YES! Guilty on all counts! Fucker deserves to get raped and shanked in jail I tell you! Just hearing his recount on what he did... Oh that was just the most sickening part! Like Damsel said, he was so casual about it!

And that attorney! Oh, how he can live with himself representing scum like that... But then again, he seemed to side entirely with the guy. I don't doubt he may have tried something or two and gotten away with it. Fucking pieces of shit lawyers are!

Then Emily and Brian! Oh yay! They both came to their senses and they're not splitting up. I couldn't be happier! And life without parole is good too! Jimmy totally talked some sense into Brian, which I can only add is another good note of this beautiful story.

Last chapter tomorrow?! Nooooo! I don't want it to end! I love this story! But I realize that all good things come to an end but I will definitely miss it when it's over. Awesome job!

Milton’s confession was…sickening. I can’t believe how casual he’s telling the story; like he’s recounting his shopping list. I’m finding it hard to believe he has any real remorse for what he did to her. He’s a sick and twisted bastard who deserves to be thrown in jail and left to rot.

The defense attorney is a douche. Pathetic excuse for a lawyer…

Well, it’s about time Emily came to her senses! Haha. They’re meant for each other, even after this horrific time, they’re destined for each other.

Yay! They found him guilty! As he well should’ve been! Good jurors!

I’m a little disappointed there wasn’t capital punishment involved, but at least he’s gonna spend the rest of his life in prison. It’s the least he deserves. I’m glad that Brian has realized he has to just accept what has happened, as horrible as it may be, and sees that he just has to carry on and live his life. Not just for him, but for Emily too. Lucy may be gone, but she’ll never be forgotten.

Sad. Only one more chapter? But I’m looking forward to see how they end up!

Wow! I really didn't expect the scumbag to just confess like that. I thought he'd deny it and try to get away with it. I'm glad he got life although I would've preferred the death penalty. I thought the speech from Jimmy was amazing. It really made me smile actually. You're a really talented writer. I'm looking forward to the finally chapter although I don't actually want this to end.

This story is so sad and just disgusting! How could someone just do that?!! You're an amazing writer. I couldn't stop crying. I cried every chapter since Lucy's death.

I'm hoping that Brian and Emily can get through this together. They need each other. I'm really going to miss this when it finishes. I hope you can update again soon xx

Chapter 13

I’m sad to see that she hasn’t gone home. I mean, I get that she feels like she’d be better off in a way without Brian; that it’d be easier to cope… but I don’t see how that’s working out for her. She seems even more broken and just a shell of herself since she left him. It’s definitely not helping her

Well, it seems that Brian is doing just as bad as she is. They need each other to help get through this… it’s the love and support that they give each other that will make the process easier. Not staying away from one another. Sigh.

Here goes the Trial… I hope it’s not too drawn out, for their sake. And they get the guilty verdict that’s deserved. I feel for the couple, I couldn’t imagine having to sit there and hear about all the things their little girl was subjected to. I know they already know, but hearing it again, in court… would just make it so much more real. So sad.

Looking forward to more! But not looking forward to it ending!

Chapter 12

Well Brian is just a wreck, isn’t he? Poor guy. But as I said earlier, he should’ve just told her the truth. Sure, she would’ve been angry… but it’s not like she doesn’t want the guy who hurt her little girl brought to justice just as much as him. So she would’ve eventually come around and understood. Silly boy.

I’m glad that he got the confession he wanted. I hope there’s no issues with putting the guy away... but I’m stunned Brian restrained himself as well as he did. I’m glad he didn’t kill him, but I was a little surprised that he didn’t beat him up more than he did. I dunno if I could’ve restrained myself quite as well if it was me… but it shows how much he cares for Emily by not doing it.

I hope Emily decides to take Brian back. I mean, she’s gonna be reminded of the loss of her child every day whether she’s with Brian or not. She’ll see her daughter in the faces of other children, every time she sees something that Lucy loved or enjoyed in her short time… there’s no point in shutting out the man she loves, it’d just make it worse and even more difficult.