Far from Home. - Comments

Definitely in Brian's Point Of View, So we get an idea of how he's feeling about all of this.

well, I think this was a good chapter because like you said we were able to see how Emily was feeling. But now I think you should give us
a Brian's point of view.. only to keep the suspance of Lucy's state a little bit more xD

Oh, that’s a jump! Didn’t expect to fast forward four years. Haha.

Aww, Lucy seems adorable. And he proposed! I love that he did it so low key and personal. It really suits his character, and Emily’s… since she doesn’t strike me as the flashy, over-the-top kind of girl. It’s the perfect proposal for them, in their own little house. Perfect.

Aww, she’s pregnant again! That’s so sweet. I hope she has a boy this time, to even out their little family. It would make it perfect!

Uh-oh… Brian can’t find Lucy. That doesn’t bode well. I must admit, while they were having their little moment in the kitchen, I was thinking “Shouldn’t someone be keeping an eye on Lucy?” but then figured coz they live in a small town and she would hopefully taught to stay away from the water, that she’d be okay… apparently I was wrong :(

I sincerely hope they find her safe and well… but I don’t have a good feeling about it. I’m starting to think the thing Montana is famous for in 2010 is something to do with a child abduction… or pedophile. I sincerely hope not, but it seems that that’s the way this is heading… :(

Oh - please hurry and update soon!!!

this is getting more interesting!!! :) update soon!

Aww, Emily is cute dancing around with her baby bump. It’s nice to see she’s still got some moves even though she’s probably feeling like a whale. Hahaha.

Oh, Brian is playing with fire, insulting a pregnant woman! He obviously doesn’t care to have more children, does he? Pretty sure I’d castrate my partner if he insulting my singing while I was carrying his child… Hahaha.

"You could have seven heads, a Medusa face, ten eyes, three legs, no arms and I'd still love you. I promise, babe."

Well there’s quite an image… hahaha.

Huh… that was unexpected. Poor Emily, and poor Brian… I can’t imagine how terrifying it would be to be involved in a car accident, let alone when you’re seven months pregnant!

Aww, they had a little girl! How adorable. And I like her name, it’s very cute. I hope Emily recovers completely and there are no complications with little Lucy… especially since she’s arrived a lot earlier than anticipated.

Looking forward to more :)

Definitely one of my favorite stories ever!!!

Loved it. I almost cried along with Brian, the thought of him almost losing his child, really scared me a little bit.

I'm so glad they're both ok. They had a baby girl ... awwww

Please update again as soon as you can xx

@ Tuxedo Mask.
I'm not, I'm gonna stay quiet, JUST THE FEELS MAN.

@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline
Shhhhhhh, shhhhhh, shhhhh, Sheena, shhhhhh.
Don't spoil it ;)

Even though I know what's gonna happen, I'm still here nearly crying ;-;

Yay! A sequel!

Aww, she’s pregnant! How sweet! He’s finally got the grown up life he wanted, with a very different line of work. But even in just the first few paragraphs, you can see how happy they are. It’s awesome.

It was cute how they showered together and I honestly loved that it was completely innocent. It shows how in love they are and it’s refreshing to have an intimate scene that isn’t sexual. I really liked it.

As for what Montana is famous for… I haven’t a clue! I’m an Aussie, I’ve never been to the U.S so I could only venture a guess. And I also promise not to Google it… even though I’m very curious as to what it could possibly be! Maybe it’s has a music festival of some sort? Like country music or something? I dunno… I’m grasping at straws, here! Hahaha.

Looking forward to more!

I'm loving this so far . I wasn't really thinking about Googling Montana before reading this, but now my curiosity has been piqued. However .... I promise I won't as I don't want to ruin the story.

Looking forward to reading more. Please update again soon xx

Ps: does it have anything to do with UFOs? Left field, I know .... but still

that was so adorable ahah :')