Completely Undone - Comments

@ BlueDreams
No it wouldn't. The distance will take a toll on them and their patience.

@ teenagedream91
That's tru and having Tom far wouldn't really help, I think.

@ BlueDreams
It could get crazy even if she isn't as successful like having a book tour, the process of editing and writing it as well as management can be more than a handful.

@ teenagedream91
If she is really successful, yes! Tom will be out promoting and so on and she might be on the other side of the world.

@ BlueDreams
No sex isn't but intimacy is. Once getting the hang of being together and parting for the first time or second time it's harder. What comes with publishing? A book tour XD oh the things she is going to endure

@ teenagedream91
I know, it will be so sad and I think sex isn't playing a huge part, yet. It might in the future, it depends.

@ BlueDreams
Before anything like you said trust needs to be built and it was too soon for anything given that they will be traveling like crazy. Oh the distances they as going to have to endure.

@ teenagedream91
They are building their thrust yet, they have a way to walk yet.
And I'm glad she spoke out and said that she wanted to wait. It was the best.

@ BlueDreams
It is an important step and sharing how you feel is something really important when in a relationship. It was hard for her but finally letting it out cleared the air.
Intimacy in the sense of being yourself and sexually are important, the first one more than the second that comes later after trust. It all comes down to trust and in this chapter be basically had her see if she trusted him. She kin d of does.
He is proud of her writing and some might not be his style or taste but be admires her quality.
I know haha Tom was so close and speeding things up because of their distance made his mind just go for it. Almost happened but her mind got the best of her. She wasn't ready yet.

@ bxgurl95
Thank you!! They see hotter than I imagined it to be lol happens when you listen to music that is hot and steamy itself. You're right on point she doesn't question Tom's love for her it's an internal battle of what she should do or how to approach something like this. Tom understands given he knows what it felt like to be thrust into the spotlight and he wants her to be semi ready for it. No one can prepare for the media only experience can get you that far. Tom is a very patient man knowing this doesn't have labels so far and taking the time to know her or her body for this instance lol

I really have to pat Cinnie's back for finally being able to say things to Tom, it was an important step.
Finally intimacy! This is a really important key-point, for me.
Also, I am so happy to see Tom already being so proud of her and her writing, I know it matters to her.
I feel for Cinnie but poor Tom haha soooo close, yet so far dearest. They just need time and they'll eventually be intimate, hopefully.

The intimacy of that chapter was VERY hot. I'm so glad you updated! Woo hoo! She does worry a lot rightedly so and tom is so understanding and patient. But she shouldn't necessarily be afraid to be intimate. I don't think it's because she questions Tom's feelings, it's more of her internal struggle.

@ teenagedream91
I know haha

@ BlueDreams
I know right? She might have to fulfill that deal she mad with Tom when he offered to play the role.

@ teenagedream91
Uhh that sounds cool! Imagine Tom staring in that...

@ BlueDreams
She's not JK Rowling famous, but she has published a few books already and is going to go on tour for the one she published not too long ago. The one she is writing now is something completely different. She's getting there if she gets a movie deal which she might.

@ teenagedream91
Yes and well.. Is she famous because of her writing or is she still trying to publish her first? I am confused now that I think about it.

@ BlueDreams
All kind of things and it can only get worse if things take off.

@ teenagedream91
Yes and all shorts of things can be written about her.

@ BlueDreams
Very huge. Like it can destroy them if either of them are into the media and since Cinnie does research all the time with her writing she might get caught up in it if it does get out.