Completely Undone - Comments

@ BlueDreams
I'm pretty sure I wouldn't haha not this time. I always think about it whenever I write and make sure I have some level if I do to into that zone

@ teenagedream91
Haha and that can happen but I'm sure that it won't happen here :)

@ BlueDreams
They are and I won't stray away. One time I strayed away from the main couple and everyone was like what happened? Lol I was so invested in the other one I totally forgot the other one

@ teenagedream91
Well, Tom and Cinnie are the main couple so that's normal if you focus mainly on them.

@ BlueDreams
Definitely she will and I might add something for Ben and Paty if I remember. I'm horrible at remembering when I write. When I get into it I forget what I am suppose to write and just let go

@ teenagedream91
And I doooooooooooo. If Ben does the same for her or just the slight bit, she'll melt :3

@ BlueDreams
haha I would think so. When i was writing it I was thinking Paty might find this adorable xD
True, everyone is different and with different circumstances and level of committment it can work out if it's meant to.

@ teenagedream91
I think he's adorable but you know my style :3
I know and we all do but not all stories are the same and they can work out.

@ BlueDreams
Thank you XD I was worried that he was coming off like a sap, probably is, but I didn't think I could pull it off. I want this story to be romantic unlike my other stories. She is a lucky girl and I have to say that I find it cute that he was sweating bullets for her haha
I thought the slow dance would be something speical and ease Cinnie into being with him. She does have trust issues which is why she thinks the worst in everything. It's something she has to change in herself to soemthing more positive.
It might be not as dramatic as she would seem, but the stories she hears are always dramatic when it comes to long distance relationships.

@ bxgurl95
Thank you. I find these stories where people who were friends for quite some time or even years naturally get together and act like a normal couple. The thing is it would be weird for a while since it was in the friend zone for so long. also to add long distance to their relationship will be difficult to manage.

Their awkwardness is so cute. It's also very realistic. Coming from a long distance relationship from a friendship, they have to learn how to be with each other in person.

Tom is so UTTER CUTE in this story, he's just so happy because of Cinnie and he worries so much about the date and all the small details. Oh you lucky girl.
And they are slow dancing *melts* this story is going, not to kill me, but make my eyes sparkle. Dear Lord, I can tell!
I love that they are opposites when it comes to being straight forward positive or negative. And I also love their moment of getting to know each other again.
Well, long distance relationships can be difficult but maybe it won't be as hard or dramatic as Cinnie thinks :)

@ BlueDreams
Thanks for the reassurance, love.

@ teenagedream91
Oh darling, this story is much your own now so relax :)

@ BlueDreams
Thank you. I always worry when it's not work of my own or writing something different lol

@ teenagedream91
I'm excited :D
No, they both came off very natural to me.

@ BlueDreams
Thank you :) I'll be sure to ask you if I need help with any couple. I know it's going to be a terrific story. I got some plans added with what I have now for Cinnie and Tom. As for Paty and Ben, I'm winging it so far lol
Haha they do sound like fun and thank you :) I don't know if she came off that way or just weird. I can't tell when I'm the writer since this is one of my few rare cute stories lol since I wasn't thinking about aiming it like that.

@ teenagedream91
I am here to help in anything you need darling. Whether about Cinnie and Tom or Paty and Ben. Both dynamics are definitely interesting.
Yes, they sound like so much fun whether they're drunk or not.
It comes off cute and believe me... I'm like that too sometimes.

@ BlueDreams
It must be and I will write in detail when they get drunk again. It's obvious they will again lol. They turn into party animals when they are around each other. Tom is and I wanted to write a different kind of Tom than the ones I usually write. He's just so excited to have her there it's great to see him so chirpy and I can picture him being so happy that he doesn't really see some details about Cinnie. Thanks :) her reactions are based off me lol I do that usually with a guy I like. I get really awkward and weird. Comes off cute to some or so I hear XD
There will be funny moments if I think of any or if they naturally come to me. Having Paty being wild and bringing Cinnie out of her shell will be good too to have her a bit wild too. All of it will be fun to write for sure

@ BlueDreams
Thank you. It brings me great joy to write something like this and hopefully I can write something great for the both of us. I am thinking of having the two couples or Paty and Ben to be a little more centered than usual if I remember that is lol I'll have small scenes for them just like I did for Lucy and Chris for my TT story but going along with the story so it shows the progress between the two. That can provide a challenge within itself.