Completely Undone - Comments

Ohh haha Paty and Cinnie drunk together must be funny, I bet.
I just have to say that Tom is a happy birdy in this chapter haha He really is! He's just so happy to have her there and all to himself, it's so cute and Cinnie is very cute as well with her reactions.
And I can predict the funny moments with the three or four of them. I mean, Paty just threw things in the air and it was hilarious. Plus, some Ben and Tom action to look forward to. I'm excited!

@ teenagedream91
I'm excited to see the twists and turns you will bring to the original idea.
Oww love, I'm honoured. I'm glad that I can help you or lead you to new grounds, you do the same for me.

@ BlueDreams
Haha I'm already half way done with chapter one. I'm excited too! I was going to stop a little over half way last night but I kept going. It flowed out so naturally and Cinnie's behavior is an eye opener. Yes you are :) you always make it so easy for me to write something different.

Woooooooooooooot!
I'm so hysterically excited for this, honestly. And me? Your inspiration? Awwwwwwww *blushes* You flatter me too much darling!