Moonlight - Comments

Well that's really intense. Like wow. The simplicity of the phrasing is quite effective in regards to the intensity and then the detail that is woven in. Now I'm partially very confused, because I have no idea about what fandom/story this is considering. But it is still detailed and can make sense separate from that, which is really cool. Your sensory details and everything are huge. The focus on sense, especially on scent in the beginning, is quite effective. I do wish that this was entirely free of dialogue or had more dialogue, however. The one line of it is kind of disconcerting in regards to the rest of it. Otherwise, it has very good flow and the syntax is original and captivating. Great story, thanks for reccing it to me!

I just love the girly moment that Jin Ae and Raven had while Raven did her makeup. Just their little discussions and Raven having another woman to kind of relate to really seems to do her good. c:

But omg...that kiss. Nope, I got nothing to say except shipping Jinaven pretty hard now and I'm pretty sure you just turned Jin Ae into a bi...esbian? Just how Raven like had her back and everything was fantastic!!!

Fell behind again, whoops. Joon is horrendous and I hope his end is a painful one. Though I must admit, I do love when he's being talked about by other characters because the words they use to describe him amuse me. Raven & Jin Ae work so well together and I feel their personalities complement eachother. i also ship them, jinaven woo! & totally wish there was an AU where they were in a relationship (dating eachother) because I bet it'd be awesome

Ugh, Ravho FTW! I absolutely love together, why??? Dx Especially when Raven used his name and was like "it was a pleasure to meet you. c:"

Mwhahahaha! I'M READY FOR JINAVEN, BITCHES!

I just absolutely love Jinaven! <3 Their chemistry is amazing and I love how they can connect in one way or another. I'm excited to see what the plan is and what they're all thinking!!!

Omg, you just did Jin Ae so perfectly. AGAIN. GAHHHH. It was perfect. I feel so bad for Raven, always will. I love how you were able to kind of give Jin Ae and Raven a connection. That really turned the tables and made Raven seem a bit more human.

LOVE.

Master's dead, oh hell yes! >:D ... But now Lu Han's taken over and is working for Han Geng. Why did even start to think that maybe he wasn't as evil as I thought he was?

Yifan and Raven are so cute it hurts. + Tao walking in on them was hilarious. Oh, and I had to laugh at the Raven/Jin Ae interaction. xD

OMG. THE PART WHERE LUHAN KILLED MASTER TOTALLY TOOK ME BY SURPRISE. It was just like BOOM, dead Master.
And Luhan's working for Geng, fantastic. Double backstabbing douche bag. -.-

And Junsu being all sweet and defensive and wanting to find Raven...
Oh, there you go, Junsu! There's your missing girl flirting with your woman!

*returned to comment on latest chapter*

D: Road rash, owwie. Protective gear next time, Raven, please. Not that it probably would've helped a ton, but it would've probably made the road rash more minimal. & Yifan insists on carrying Raven to her room himself, how cute! & They kissed! <3

I hope they find Luhan and Kris destroys him.

Ugh, the pain Raven felt was just so unbearable; I feel so bad for her. :c

BUT KRAVEN MOMENT. YES. YES. YESSSSH. I SHIP THAT SHIT.
I love how he's all protective and trying his best to be comforting and sweet. And they kissed and I happy as can be!

Little Bird is just... Awesome. She scales a building, hurts herself trying to help a guy that doesn't deserve it can you sense the impending not nice comments about Lu Han coming?, gets hurt even more and then manages to brawl with Joon and U-know. Not only that, she gets in another fight with U-know on a motorcycle, gets hurt more i hope that jacket held up well because otherwise... She'll have a lot of healing to do and gets away by falling off the bridge and landing on a truck. Little Bird is such a badass, I swear.

I'm thoroughly convinced Lu Han is pure evil. Like, dude we get it, you're pissy for numerous reasons most of which you probably blame Yifan for. Well, get over it. I hope Little Bird kicks his ass. Also, who the heck was he taking to with that second call? Is he... working for Master somehow?

+ Changmin at the end was perfect. xD

Lu Han. Needs. to die....-.-
LIKE WHY WOULDN'T YOU CHECK FOR THE SILENCE, GODDAMMIT RAVEN. YOU IDIOT.

Dammit, Yunho. Stop. Just stop. You're hurting yourself!!

"No. Because if I can't have Jin Ae, you can't have Yifan." This just made me flail because psycho Yunho much.

GOOOOOOD.
Jin Ae's stopping at nothing and UKnow's stopping at nothing and Raven's just trying to get away and its all super intense, I can't!!!

Like the rawness of Ravho is making me feel too much! TOO MANY FUCKING FEELS.

"Why does this bitch constantly blow things up? This isn't like the movies, okay, my ear's are sensitive." Oh, Changmin.

ugh, the feels! Every time U-Know or Jin Ae come in I just get all freaked out and excited!!!

Lol, Kris is all jealous of UKnow. That's right, someone is interfering with Kraven. :3
Luhan needs to quit being a douche. -.-

ugh, the feels! Every time U-Know or Jin Ae come in I just get all freaked out and excited!!!

Lol, Kris is all jealous of UKnow. That's right, someone is interfering with Kraven. :3
Luhan needs to quit being a douche. -.-

Oh hey now, where has this beauty been hiding?


Seriously, how did I not know about this until now????
I've only read the first chapter so far, because I realized that I already had a lot I had to say! ALL good, of course! Then again, I probably should've realized how good this was going to be, when I saw the GIF bombs, courtesy of Miss Xia; over here...of course, I quickly realized that she was the smart one to know of this story and that in between bomb-age was potential spoilers so I didn't keep reading.

ANYWAYS, back to your story...

As I started to read, I was all like "Oh hey! UKnow is in here...he sounds conniving and likes games...that sounds familiar..."
And then I realized that this is linked to the UKnow, the CM UKnow, Xia;'s UKNOW!!!! Seriously, how did I not know about this story???

WOWZA, I love Little Bird, the sexy Femme Fatale!! She's sassy, I likey. Oh and now Jin Ae is mentioned...where the hell have I been, under a fracking rock?!?

GOD, the tension between two assassins...this is legit! It's both careful and raw, all tied together with the common line of distrust.
You are a master of painting the picture with words, do you know that? Man this was just the first chapter and I am thrilled out of my seat!

I am definitely subbing!! Here, take my rec!

I freaked out when I read this because I didn't think you were updating anymore and then it was on My Mibba saying it was updated 24 minutes ago(this was like, what, two hours ago??) and I FLIPPED.

Well, like I said. Ravho totally won me over for a while. Especially in "Just Once". Like, seriously! The feels though!



Yep, that's pretty much my feelings.
Joon was such a douche, ugh. I wanted to punch him back at his cocky arrogant dick-sack behavior.

That bonding time with their drinking...
That sex though.


And I thought the feels were bad then, BUT NO THE NEXT CHAPTER OKAY.
Raven asking if their parents were good people was really sad. Just that simple question would be tough to answer and her having the innocence to still ask such a thing. And the fact that she harmed herself too with Yunho being extremely worried about it really showed a human side to the both of them.

And let me express how I'm back on the Jinho ship...
Do you know how I'm leaving?" A pause, "I'm going to hand Jin Ae the gun. And I hope she catches me in the heart."

AND THEN HE STARTED CRYING WHEN HE SAID HE WANTED JIN AE SO BADLY. OMG.
I wish...I wish I said no. I wish I never agreed to Master and his wants. I wish I never did this for money or for shelter. I wish I could still rot on the streets, still die every night in the cold. I'd trade everything I have now for what I had then. Because maybe then...maybe even if I tried, maybe Jin Ae and I could have happened." That. That killed me inside.


And Yunho slept with Raven because she reminded him of Jin Ae.


EVERYTHING IN THAT SCENE WAS MEANT TO KILL ME, OMG. *sobs*

Luhan, you're a fucking douche. -.- Like, seriously. I think he's just horribly jealous because he knows Kraven exists and his chick died, BUT THAT SHOULDN'T MAKE HIM SUCH A MEANY HEAD. I was glad when Kris almost kicked his ass. I wish he would have totally!
I'm interested to see what Raven says about it. This outta be good...

The closest thing she experienced was with UKnow, and even their relationship was confusing and hard to come by. RAVHO FOR THE WIN. xD

"Who said I was?" She asked, a raise of her brows.

"Your eyes did." A soft whisper. Oh, look! KRAVEN FEELS. *throws self off cliff*

I loved this chapter with Kraven. Kris is opening up to her, despite his resistance and I love it! ;aldkf;asdfjk And hate it because she has to kill him and that thought keeps killing me inside. :c

Ugh, its so hard not to ship Kraven because I forget Raven's there to kill Kris. It makes me sad. I rather like this side of Kris; it shows they both have feelings and are rather human. But I'm sure its all going to end soon because that's how you do. ._.

Lol, Kris is jealous of Tao and Raven. Hoping their time will be coming soon? But I love Changmin and Jin Ae are just like "yolo" and treat Kyuhyun, Siwon, and Ryeowook like the trash they are. Seriously, I was cheering them on because they don't even care. xD

I felt disappointment along with Raven when Kris slammed the door in her face. I was really hoping he'd be appreciative of everything. Jealous douche. -.-

Raven and Tao make a good team. Woohoo, yep, definitely make a good team--dat kiss. c; But I just loved how their plan worked and they got everything together and saved a whole bunch of people! Including the Oh sisters!

Lmao, poor Changmin.