Moonlight - Comments

Raven and Tao make a good team. Woohoo, yep, definitely make a good team--dat kiss. c; But I just loved how their plan worked and they got everything together and saved a whole bunch of people! Including the Oh sisters!

Lmao, poor Changmin.

I fill so bad for UKnow and Raven. Like, you just see how much it hurts them and they do indeed feel just like any human being. Raven falling apart was so difficult to imagine because she's so hard on the outside.

I could almost hear him say "One of these days, I'll get you too". Goosebumps.

So Kris still doesn't trust Raven...I'm interested to see how this whole mission goes and what is to behold her. It'll be interesting, though I'm pretty sure Raven will do it all like a boss.

I absolutely loved the fight between Little Bird and UKnow. Like it was so perfect and UKnow's thoughts and actions were so easy to imagine and see. I just loved how human you made him, how much his attraction to Jin Ae made him. What happened between Kris and Geng, yikes! Things are going to go down there!
And what happened between Jin Ae and Little Bird, mwahahaha! How Little Bird threw things right back at Jin Ae, perf!
Loved this update!

Omg, Jin Ae. She's so perfect, I can't.

"Tell me that she's just a stripper that's going to help us remember Harry Lau from a very happy perspective."<--I LOL'ed at this.

Those four detectives are absolutely awesome together, not going to lie. xD And Kris totally comes in like a boss; I just love how he's all high mighty and awesome. c: And Little Bird's innocent little performance, love!

I want to know the accidental way she discovered Jin Ae.

Well, that escalated quickly. o.o Way to make an impression, Kris.
That was seriously intense. I like how they kinda already compliment each other. The chemistry is awesome!

Ugh, my feels.
JIN AEEEEEEE. CHANGMIN!!!!!! YOOCHUN!!!! JAEJOONG!!

I like how you incorporated some Velocity into this. I squealed.

And I just love Yunho and Raven's interactions. Its like, they're in alliance, but they're not at the same time. I love it!

Fantastic!!!!!! :D I just love how she's all seduction at its finest. Totally owned Lau like a boss. And blew up everything like a total awesome person! This Raven's a little more...confident? More sure of herself and even a little arrogant. Not quite arrogant, but boarderline, ya know? I like it. c;

So all I can really show to express my feels right now is . Like, seriously. Omg, I love this story line so much. Yunho is just my hero. Raven's a bit more vicious than usual. I like.

"You're a woman!"
Really, Yunho? Really? -.-

YUNHO YOU'RE SUCH A DOUCHE, WHY. WHY. STOP. ITS NOT COOL.

I like how he's so caring for her and then turns around into a 180 and is an absolute douche! Like, its so conflicting. I love. Why does he hurt her that way, then? Hm? Inquiring minds want to know!

I just want to punch him in the face. -.-

Yunho and Raven are so cute. I adore them!


Excuse me while I go murder Helena. Like seriously.

JUNSU'S BACK.

Alright, then I'll send this to Jin Ae."
"How old are you? Twelve?"
"Twenty six...actually." That poor, desperate little man.

You never know who might come along and take her away from you. Gee, I wonder. I just loved this line so much, I can't even.

OMG, ARE YOU ABOUT TO DO WHAT I THINK YOU'RE ABOUT TO DO??

YES, YOU DID. YOU MADE MIN RAVEN'S CAT. I HAD A FEELING FOR SOME REASON WHEN YOU MADE THE CAT BLACK. WHY AM I FREAKING OUT ABOUT THIS? WHY? BECAUSE ITS JUST AWESOME AND YEAH.

I'm freaking out over a cat. I'm so sorry.

Raven got swag. Just how you describe her pick-pocketing skills is fantastic, so smooth just like her movements are pictured in my head.
JUNSU AND JIN AE.

Omg, Junsu. Why are you so desperately forever alone?
But you got him perfect, like omg. Junsu's so sweet and friendly and totally made me go "aww" and stuff when he said that he was her friend whether she liked it or not.

I LOVED THIS.

Omg that was sad because Raven and her mom but also really intense because the whole time in the beginning I was just on the edge of my seat, waiting for the bad to happen and when the dogs were howling and stuff I was just like "liSTEN TO THE DOGS" and then the bomb and ugh. You write intense scenes like that really well

Also, I agree with what Kylee said. I read 'thunder' and 'rain' and I literally anticipated the men and not the weather

This is how KPop has ruined my way of thinking. I saw Thunder and Rain and the men popped into my head before the weather.

Oh my God. This was so intense and exciting and I had my nose like two inches from the screen because it was THAT awesome! I am very excited for this. Very. You have no idea. But seriously, this first chapter was descriptive with such amazing imagery. Gah, I jealous.