dudeeee I just love this story and the relationship between brian and the girls and with rachel as well! God! This is so gooooood! and I'm glad rachel's mom finally came around :) greaaat chapter lady :D
I smiled like an idiot all through the chapter. It's perfect, and you're right, it was WAY MORE exciting than the previous one! God, the part at te beginning when Rachel was having the contractions was AMAZING!! It made me laugh so hard because my mom tells me she was exactly like that when she was having me, hahaha. AMAZING!!! And I'll make sure to check you other story up!!! :D
@ pekigirl I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter! I had a lot of fun writing it! I'm hoping to have ALL of my stories updated within about a week, most of the next chapters for all of them are started and my last day of the semester is Thursday, so hopefully I'll make some progress after that LOL. Three boys are sure to create total chaos hahaha. I love Brian as a dad in this story! I'm so happy with the way his character is developing! Thanks for reading and commenting!
@ HanerJoy Luna is definitely starting to get brave as she starts to build her own identity. Hopefully Brian and Rachel can keep her in check though and keep her from getting too crazy! Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
@ eli666_ You're so sweet! The chapter is about halfway done but I haven't finished it just yet. Hopefully I'll have all of my stories updated by this time next week since my semester is over on Thursday. I also have been working on a new story Two Months that I put a few chapters up for. The next chapter for this one though will be super exciting!!!
Oh god, oh Jesus, OH LORD!!!! More exciting than this? Than all of the story?!! OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH THAT... I can't even explain. You make life look so good. I mean, I want my life to be exactly like that. Well, maybe not having my daughter pregnant as a teen... But anyway, you get the point. I love this. Keep writing as awesome as you do. You're my favorite writer.
hahahaha little Luna is turning devilish xD and Abbie please dream for more than a bmw lol I forgot about that one lol but I'm glad that even if she's moody she's helping her parents :) and I hope Luna doesn't get more sick. I can't wait for more :D this was amazing :D
aaaaaaahhhhhhhh aweesomeeee! I missed this story soooooo much! Brian daddy version is best shit ever ahaha He's just so good with them xD I laughed pretty hard when luna was whining like: daaaaddyyyyy and brian goes: luuunnaaaaaa ahahahaha that was funny! Aw I just missed this story too much for my own good ahah and three little boys are on the way daammn... they're all gonna go crazy for sure xD anyway great chapter and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
So I had a minute to get back to some reviews anyway LOL
@ HanerJoy
Thanks so much for your feedback! I could totally see Papa Gates saying that stuff in real life too. I would love to meet him as much as I would love to meet the guys from A7X, I think he would be so much fun in real life!
@ eli666_
You are TOO sweet! I'm so happy you liked this chapter again! I know, I would love their life too! Thanks for commenting!
@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline
Aww! Thank You!! I'm really glad you're enjoying this story. Thanks for reading!
OH. MY. GOD. I can say hands down that THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YOUVE EVER WRITTEN in my opinion of course. That part with the photo album made me cry; it was so beautiful and emotional. This story makes me want to have their life so bad. It's perfect in its own imperfect way. I can't wait till the next update, OMG!!!! OMG I don't want anything bad to happen D: And for the last time, WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER ❤️
This was beautiful because they still in love and more than ever, and Brian is finally like getting in time :) For a moment I got scared of what Abbie was going to do with all that money she asked, and it was so beautiful when they where seeing the photos :) I just hope she's ok :( they need to be okay!!!!!
PS: I totally see Papa Gates saying that to Brian in real life xD
Loved it!!!! As always! :D and there's always some part that brings tears to my eyes ahah god, woman! when they were seeing the pictures of all days and brian finally accepts addie's baby.. and she cries and they're all cute aww xD and teasing brian is always sexy :D god, I don't even know ahah just great!