Drowning in Our Own Debris - Comments

  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ blairanderson
    Things will still be going smoothly.... in the next chapter or so at least Wink Plenty more sarcasm in the new chapter too. Thanks for commenting!

    @ fantasygirltexas
    Addie definitely handled it better than expected! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the comment!

    @ synystergirl
    Thanks so much! You're too sweet! I appreciate the feedback! Next chapter being posted in a few minutes!

    @ HanerJoy
    Glad you liked the names for Brian and Rachel as grandparents! I didn't want them to be too old-sounding LOL. We'll see what becomes of little miss Luna. Thanks for the comment!

    @ rachthebat.
    Thanks so much! You're feedback is always appreciated and enjoyable! I'm glad you like their little family and Addie's name for the baby and for Rachel and Brian. Happy that you liked the part where Brian was walking with Logan and talking to him as well, I thought that was a little bit of warm and fuzzies in a chapter full of crazy LOL. Definitely more sarcasm to come! Glad you enjoyed it, posting next chapter soon! I still have to read your update to Summer Lovin too!

    @ pekigirl
    Definitely lots of little ones running around... But things will change soon! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!
    January 27th, 2014 at 03:02am
  • pekigirl

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    awww so many babies and confusion ahaha poor rach and brian xD they have a lot to do now with so many little kiddos ahaha but I liked this chapter a lot, as always, and I'm looking forward to the next one ^^
    January 22nd, 2014 at 11:29am
  • heretic.

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    Awwww! Such a cute chapter! I actually did a big sigh at the end haha.

    I'm so glad Addie got through everything without any complications, that could have been awful for her! I love the names she chose for Brian and Rachel too, suits them perfectly! And I love the name she chose for the baby, Nathan is one of my favourite boy names! Brian walking up and down the hallway with Logan was too cute!

    I love the whole family, Brian's sarcasm with Luna is both adorable and funny haha. They make great parents :) Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next!
    January 21st, 2014 at 12:43pm
  • HanerJoy

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    nahh Luna is ok she's on the age on pushing limits :) they are an amazing family and those are perfect names for young grandparents :D
    January 21st, 2014 at 06:08am
  • synystergirl

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    Another great chapter - can't express enough how great of a writer you are - can't wait for the next update!!
    January 21st, 2014 at 06:00am
  • fantasygirltexas

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    Addie handled the c-section very well and seems to be doing great as a teen mommy. I always get so excited when you update this!!!!
    January 21st, 2014 at 03:36am
  • blairanderson

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    Loved it! It's awesome that they're settling into the way thatntheirmfamily is now and that it's all going really smoothly. It makes me wonder if anything is going to happen to mess it up lol I still love the sarcasm that Brian has when dealing with the kids. My four month old is in for so much if that as she grows up. Haha Update soon! I can't wait for the jump in time to see if it's all still going smoothly!
    January 21st, 2014 at 03:08am
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    @ Matthew Sanders;
    Thanks! I literally JUST updated it too LOL. Glad you like it! Thanks for the comment!
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:50am
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    I love this!
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:34am
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    @ rachthebat. @ HanerJoy @ synystergirl @ fantasygirltexas @ blairanderson @ pekigirl

    Thank you guys sooo much for all of the comments! Getting ready to post the next chapter now with Addie's delivery. It's packed with "awww" moments both relating to the birth and not. There's definitely plenty of Brian sarcasm as well. There will be a bit of a time jump between this and the next chapter, so please bear with me. I've decided to continue the sequel vs. making a third installment based on the fact that I'm not sure if I started with a third installment I would have enough to make it worth being separate. I ensure you there will be at least four to five more chapters, if not more.
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:25am
  • heretic.

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    Can I has some cookies too? Haha

    This is my favourite out of all of your stories, I love Brian and Rachel's (still squeal when I see my name haha) relationship, I love the girls, Luna is adorable! I love Brian's sarcasm and just general sexyness! I just love it all!

    I hope Addie's labour doesn't get too complicated or painful for her, hopefully nothing will go wrong!

    More soon please :D
    January 18th, 2014 at 09:06pm
  • HanerJoy

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    She's a teenager in her first pregnancy I don't think she will handle it so well but she has Rachel with her helping her :) and Luna is so adorable :D I think she's donna cause terror in her school soon lol and about Judy I had a bad feeling about her, when she was asking Rachel those questions when Addie got mad.
    January 18th, 2014 at 04:32am
  • synystergirl

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    Another great chapter!! I have a feeling Addie is not going to handle labor very well, but you never can tell!! Can't wait for the next update!!
    January 16th, 2014 at 01:47am
  • fantasygirltexas

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    Brian really is such a great parent. Addie is so not going to handle labor pains well.
    January 16th, 2014 at 01:03am
  • blairanderson

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    First off, yay for cookies!

    Second, the way Brian acts with the kids is just awesome. Sarcasm in every day parenting is the best way to do it.

    Third, Addie is probably gong to lose her shit in labor lol

    Great update! Loved it. I can't wait to read the next chaper!
    January 15th, 2014 at 09:47pm
  • pekigirl

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    aww I just love brian's relationship with addie ahaha they're awesome xD I love how he deals with her and everything. It's really cool :') and abbie is giving birth!!! ahhhh :D can't wait for the chaos to come ahaha
    January 15th, 2014 at 05:54pm
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ synystergirl @ blairanderson @ HanerJoy @ fantasygirltexas @ pekigirl

    Thanks so much for the great comments! You guys are awesome! The big question is whether or not Judy is sincere, and only time will tell Wink

    I'm glad you all enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for your continued support! Next one being posted now!
    January 15th, 2014 at 01:58pm
  • synystergirl

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    Another great chapter - I really hope Judy is being sincere - it would be a shame if she has some kind of ulterior motive. Can't wait for the next update!!
    December 24th, 2013 at 05:45am
  • blairanderson

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    Curious to see if Rachel's mom is sincere or not. I loved this chapter (:
    December 23rd, 2013 at 07:57am
  • HanerJoy

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    I still need to see her involvement with them to see if she's really genuine about her change.
    December 23rd, 2013 at 06:56am