Drowning in Our Own Debris - Comments

I'm so glad they are both safe, that was an intense chapter! I'm glad too that that little bastard, TJ is dead! Good riddance to bad rubbish!

Trust Brian to think of sex, haha! I am very much looking forward to Bora Bora ;)

I think Addie will still want to go, she'll be hesitant but she shouldn't let what happened affect her decision. She needs to move on from him and what better way to do that than a new challenge!

Glad to hear your hubby is home safe, too! :)

Im so glad your hubby is home safe!!!

Brian and Matt are such badasses. They swooped right in and saved the day and now everyone is going to be just fine thank goodness. I don't really know how I feel about her going off alone now. It scares me.

Great chapter - once again!!!! So glad TJ is out of the picture. And I'm very happy that your husband is back safely. Thanks also for the tea and cookies!!!! Looking forward to the next update.

Great chapter - once again!!!! So glad TJ is out of the picture. And I'm very happy that your husband is back safely. Thanks also for the tea and cookies!!!! Looking forward to the next update.

Great chapter - once again!!!! So glad TJ is out of the picture. And I'm very happy that your husband is back safely. Thanks also for the tea and cookies!!!! Looking forward to the next update.

i'm glad you have your husband back :) I'm so glad Addie and Nathan are safe :) Addie might get scared but that guy is dead so she has nothing to be scared about. And hell yeahh I'm excited for Bora Bora :D

I'm so glad that they're safe! Brian and Matt to the rescue! It's good that Matt isn't going to get charged with anything, too. As far as Addie still going to San Francisco, I can see it gong one way or the other. Time will tell how affected she is by everything that happened. I loved this update girl!

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Thanks for all of the wonderful comments!!! Sorry I didn't get to reply to each of them individually, I'll try to be better with it for the next chapter. You guys are awesome and I hope you enjoy the chapter I just posted!!

Oh my god! *panics*

How the hell did TJ manage to get into the house without waking one of them, what is he, a ninja? Haha. I hope Addie and Nathan will be okay! Tj, I suggest you run very far very quickly, cause Brian will kick the ever living shit out of you my friend!

I thought that was what was up with Luna, had a sneaky suspicion! I hope that now she will understand and not go further off the rails. Maybe Rachel and Brian could take her out for some one on one time when they get Addie back. I'm saying when because I don't even want to think about them not getting her back!

Birthday sex! Am I the only huge pervert person that's looking forward to them getting away? Hahaha.

Ugh, I can't stand Judy! I don't think the bickering is over between them either, Brian will keep on and on haha.

Awesome chapter! :D

Holy shit - didn't see that coming at all!!! And I agree that Luna has handled the news wonderfully but I'm sure it won't stay that way! Please hurry with an update - this story just keeps getting better and better!!

Omg. Poor Addie and Nathan. And poor TJ when Brian gets his hands on him.

Luna handed the adoption news a lot better than I thought she would. So far at least. We'll have to see if it lasts.

Fantastic update!

ohhh nooo :( they need to find him!!!!! I'm glad Luna until now has acted relaxed towards the truth :) and I don't have a good feeling about Judy. But I hope they find TJ, with Addie and Nathan soon.

Holy crap. Brian needs to get all the guys together and then hunt that little punk down and kick his ass!

Oh no!!! I hope they find them in time!! Poor Brian & Rachel & I'm sure that Addie & Nathan are going to be okay & they find them in time!

alright big change in this chapter uh daaaamn TJ!!!!
but aww Luna finally figured out she was adopted but I'm glad she took it well :) and I love Brian's relationship with the girls ahaha it's the best!!
loved the chapter as always!! :D

@ rachthebat.
Brian is definitely going to have a hard time letting Addie go.... If she decides to go in light of new events that will be taking place.....

You may be on to something with Luna.... We'll find out more about her in the next chapter and in the future as well.

A bit of sexy time thrown into the next chapter! Will be up in a few minutes. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!

@ HanerJoy
LOL I considered them just bringing a dog home and Brian flipping shit, but I decided against it. The family dynamics will be stirred up soon enough. Luna is definitely a little firecracker and you can tell she's Brian's daughter. Thanks for the comment! New chapter being posted in a few!

@ blairanderson
Glad you enjoy the funny banter! I agree, I think Brian would have a hard time if he misses Addie's call... But there will be bigger obstacles to face before you know it. Bora Bora could definitely be lots of fun! Thanks for the feedback and continuing to read!

@ fantasygirltexas
Luna is definitely changing as she gets older, good theory as to why she's getting even more catty. Brian and Rachel definitely need to get away and have some sexy time without the kids around, but there's something big that will stand in their way. We'll find out more in the next chapter! Thanks for reading and commenting! More up soon!

I think that Addie going off to college will be good for all of them. I'm glad that Brian and Rachel are getting away because they need sexy time. I think Luna is just hitting those horrible teenage years but it's nothing they can't handle.

Brian is going to flip shit at the first missed call he has from Addie after she's gone... lol This chapter was hilarious. The banter that you give these characters is priceless.

Bora Bora = Lotsa sexy time (:

hahahaha omg Luna's 'Anna Coleman (Freaky Friday)' moment lol my jaw dropped and then I started to laugh when she said that to Papa Gates and laughed even harder when Brian said that to him lol that would be something Brian would say publicly just to mess with his dad lol I think is gonna be hard Brian and Rachel when Addie has to go to College, even more for Brian. She's always gonna be their little girl, plus now she has a son to take care off. But I think she will be great :) and I'm excited for Brian and Rachel's vacation to Bora Bora >=D for a moment I thouh uh uh Luna and Addie got a dog from the street and didn't tell him and this is how they are telling him lol I was really waiting for her to say that lol

Awww, another cute chapter! I think Brian is going to take it hard when Addie eventually leaves, it's his little girl after all! Hopefully the trip to Bora Bora will make him better. I can't wait for that chapter!! Haha

Hmm, maybe Luna is just copying Brian's attitude? Or maybe there is something going on with her deep down that she's suppressing? Maybe that she isn't their real daughter or wanting to see her mother? I don't know. Or maybe she's just growing up.

I think Addie will be fine when she leaves, she's already doing really well with Nathan on her own. It'll probably be a shock to the system for her at first, but I think she'll settle down well.

I can't wait for sexy time! Haha