Drowning in Our Own Debris - Comments

@ HanerJoy
OMG ME TOO! Thanks! I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed it! I was definitely aiming for different ends of the spectrum as far as emotions go. TJ needs to stay gone for sure! What a d-bag!

I WANT A BRIAN NOW!!!!!!!!! :( This was beautiful and hot at the same time :D and let me in need pf a cold shower lol I'm glad Brian sent TJ flying. I hope he doesn't comes back.

Aww, thanks!! And yes, Brian is quite cocky.

TJ definitely needed to go! It was about time that Brian put him in his place!

Hahahahaha! Glad you liked the sex scene! That was super fun to write!! Hope to have more posted soon!

PS Just started reading Not Everything Is What It Seems, i'll probably comment every so many chapters! It's really good!

awww that first scene was adorable :) the babies kicking and brian wanting to feel them, too

"sweet for 2.5 seconds and then right back to being cocky" ahahaha I guess that's brian right there xD I love it!

Brian kicking the other guy's ass was really hot! Damn. He just put the guy right in his place. unf. but I'm glad he's gone. He was a dumbass!!

holy. mother. of. fucking. god. That massive sex scene!!!! jeez we don't even have time to recover! I just love the way brian is all sexy and then turns into a mushy, softy brian and just mabagaysgwhakajs love it :D this story... oh my...

@ eli666_
OMG, don't be late for work! LOL I'm glad you loved this one! It was super fun to write! You're too sweet! I love the name Addison too! I think it's a really cute name for a little girl!

I am so late for work right now for reading this, and I don't even care because HOLY SHIT!!!!!! I loved this chapter OMG!!!!!! I wouldn't mind quitting my job just to read this story over and over again. I FREAKING LOVE IT, AND ITS THE BEST STORY EVER WRITTEN. Oh, and by the way, I don't know if I said this before, but I love the name Addison. When I have I kid, I'm pretty sure I'll be naming it like that ;) ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! I'll probably have more posted within the next week!

Ohhh this is sooo good - please hurry and update again!!!

@ Mrs. Shadows
I KNEW YOU WERE GONNA FREAK! HAHAHAHAHA!

Yay for the babies kicking enough for Brian to feel! He’s a happy Daddy now! Poor Rachel’s probably going to have it rough the last couple of months. I’m sure Brian will be there to comfort her

And there goes Brian with the dirty talk again! Rachel is soooo lucky LOL I would totally play the mad card too. If I really was mad I would make him beg for forgiveness first hehehe….. Although if it was him I don’t know if I would have enough will power to resist him!!

I had to start the chapter out with some sexiness. I figured with the way that I finished the last SOMETHING needed to happen here LOL I would be willing to investigate rumors about ALL of the guys if I ever had the opportunity!

Right? I wish the guy I dated in high school and ended up marrying turned into Synyster Gates…. Instead he has a job that keeps him out of the country for almost 11 months out of the year. Writing the smuttiness is what keeps me faithful LOL

The douchebaggery is confirmed once and for all! TJ, you’re done! You done pissed her Daddy off, now you have to pay! You deserve to die you piece of shit! Brian is for sure relieved that Addie wants TJ out of the picture! Although I totally could have written you into the story to knife him

Addie is definitely starting to realize that this is really happening. Life is gonna be crazy with three babies in the house at the same time. Can you imagine how much diapers alone are going to cost? HOLY CRAP!

Yay for Zacky meeting someone new! I hope she works out (not sure if she will or not yet lol). Like Rachel said, he deserves to be happy. And Bella deserves someone who can be good to both her and her Daddy!

Had to put some Luna cuteness in here as always! That’s what I always called spaghetti when I was little…. LOL

I love how Brian is so attracted to her even while she’s pregnant. Apparently this really happens in the real world….some men think it’s hot when women are carrying their babies.

Yes Addie, now is NOT the time for you to fight with your dad. This has been coming to TJ since the day you told your dad you were pregnant and then it just fueled the fire when he turned out to be such a dick. Please understand that he’s not just doing this because he wants to hurt TJ, he’s also doing it to protect you!

GET HIM BRIAN! FUCK HIS ASS UP! YOU BETTER RUN YOU LITTLE TWIT! THAT’S WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU FUCK WITH BRIAN’S DAUGHTER! DADDY’S MONEY CAN’T SAVE YOU NOW EITHER, YOU DONE FUCKED UP BOY! THEN YOU THINK YOU CAN TALK BACK TO BRIAN AND CALL HIS DAUGHTER NAMES TO HIS FACE, YOU IDIOT, HE WAS CLEARLY ALREADY WINNING THIS FIGHT AND NOW YOU JUST GAVE HIM REASON TO KILL YOU! HE SHOULD HAVE JUST DONE YOU IN AND GOT IT OVERWITH!

Ahem…. I shall compose myself now…..



Didn’t work… But anyway….

Yes! I want that backyard and that pool soooooo bad! OMG and there’s a Jacuzzi right there too AND a fireplace! Yes please!

Johnny should have gotten thrown in the pool…. I promise he will the next time there’s a party. It just needs to happen.

Brian teases Rachel all of the time, she’s just letting him know that two can play that game! He totally had that shit coming! OMG and then the Viagra on top of it?!?!?! Brian definitely doesn’t have any problems with stamina….. but you saw how that little blue pill played out

Hahaha, Brian gets all philosophical when he’s drunk and high, just like most people I know LOL Hopefully he and Matt didn’t scare Becca too bad, you never know, they could grow on her.

I TOLD YOU! YES, THE KITCHEN SEX IDEA CAME FROM YOU WITH MY OWN LITTLE TWIST ON IT, BUT I COVERED MOST OF THE REST OF THE HOUSE TOO!!! THIS MIGHT COME UP IN THE NEXT CHAPTER YET IN THE FORM OF COMEDY. OMG I WANT ONE AND I WANT HIM TO TAKE ME OVER AND OVER IN ANY ROOM THAT HE PLEASES OH. MY. GOD. YES!!!!!

I had to put the sweet ending in there too. Brian can be such a dick and they joke around with each other so much but deep down they have a love that’s untouchable

Thanks for commenting, I’m glad I didn’t let you down! I hope to update this over the next week, but we’ll have to see what happens!

OH MY FUCKING GOD! YOU WEREN'T FUCKING LYING! THIS IS SO GOOD!! HOLY SHIT!! JUST ASDFGHJKL; LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER!!!

Ok, now that my mini freak out is over let's get started. Aww, the babies are kicking, that's so darn cute! <3333

“That’s crazy how it went from nothing to both of them kicking up a storm at the same time,” Brian whispered.

“Well, I was moving around a lot trying to keep the house from getting too disorganized and chasing Luna around. They probably slept all freaking day and now they’re awake and energized,” I smirked.

Hahaha awww <333333 That would suck though when I'm trying to sleep. I need my sleep or I'll be cranky all day.

“I can’t believe we’re less than a week away from the halfway point. It feels like just yesterday that I got in my car and found your little gift,” he smiled. “I gotta give it to you though, the bottle on the front seat with the pregnancy test in it and then convincing me to take you out for lunch without the kids was pretty creative.”

“I’m not gonna lie, I Googled that shit,” I laughed and he rolled his eyes with a smirk.

“You need to Google pregnancy sex positions. I’m gonna be all up in that when the kids are gone on Friday night.”

“Oh, you think?” I smirked. “You already have an agenda?” I joked.

“Fuck yeah,” he smirked. “I have every intent of kicking back with the guys and getting a good buzz, smoking a blunt, having a good time with our friends and then christening every room of this house.”

“Is that how you think it’s gonna go?” I said with a small laugh. “So what are all of us pregnant women supposed to do while you’re all getting high without us?”

“I don’t know, fucking cook something. We’ll come and find you once the smoke clears,” he said sarcastically with a smug look on his face.

“You’re such an asshole,” I said as I shook my head and tried to prevent him seeing my amusement while I moved onto my side so he was facing my back.

I chuckled at that first part. Mm, Brian, you're getting me going with your dirty talk, why do you do this to me? lol. Yes, I want sex all over the house, DO IT! DO IT! DO IT! Brian, you asshole lol. Oh she's mad at you now lol (I know she isn't really) but still.

“Come on Babe, I’m joking,” he said softly as he moved up against me and spooned me. “Rach….” He whispered against my ear, “you know you can’t stay mad at me. Besides, I got something for you that I know you want,” he nipped at my neck as he rubbed his growing length against my ass.

“Maybe I’m not in the mood,” I teased.

“We both know you’re full of shit,” he said as he tugged my underwear over my hips, sitting up to slip them off of my legs and presumably kick off his boxers. “You wouldn’t be letting me undress you if you weren’t,” he whispered as laid back down behind me. “You lock that shit down like Fort Knox if you don’t want it.”

“You’re such a dork,” I laughed as I looked over my shoulder at him.

I so would do this too. Pretend I'm mad at him but as soon as he touches me I would be gone. I would try and deny it too but in the end I just wouldn't be able to take it. Mm, you can undress me any day Brian ;) "What was I mad at you for again?" lol. You're in the mood and you know it, I mean my panties would be soaked in a matter of seconds if I felt his raging hard on pressed against his ass and he was pulling off my underwear.

“Yeah Baby, fuck that feels good,” he moaned softly. “Fuck….” He almost growled as his body tensed and his cock throbbed releasing his seed deep inside of me.

“Mmm, fuck Bri,” I whispered as he rode his orgasm out and I started to recover from mine. He stilled inside of me and kissed me deeply before resting his chest against my back and holding me tight.

“Shit Babe, between how fucking wet you are and the load I just dropped we’re going to have to change the sheets,” he laughed and kissed my neck.

“Sweet for 2.5 seconds and then right back to being cocky,” I joked.

“If I remember correctly it was my cockiness that got you into my bed the first time back when we were teenagers,” he smiled as I looked over at him.

“I just wanted to see for myself if all of the rumors about you were true,” I smirked.

Fuck, that first part is so hot. Such a sexy smut scene, I love it! Haha typical Brian, being sweet one moment and the next a cocky bastard. I'm there with you Rachel, I want to sleep with Matt and see if the rumors about his horsecock are true ;)

“Who would have known that 16 years later we’d have a pregnant teenage daughter, a six year old who wants to be a professional ballerina when she grows up and twin boys on the way?”

“I know, right? I should have made a run for it when I still had the chance. Now I’m stuck with you,” I rolled my eyes playfully and he faked a hurt face. “I’m just kidding Babe. Despite the whole pregnant teenage daughter thing I think we’re still doing pretty good,” I smiled and he kissed me.

Yeah, who knew that you would be married and having kids with the cocky bastard that is Synyster Gates haha. Lol I laughed when she said she should've made a run for it and Brian's face was probably priceless haha.

“What’s wrong Sweetie?” I asked sleepily as I sat up and tried to stretch.

“TJ’s not coming. He said that he has something to do at work and he can’t out of it,” she sniffed back her tears. I wasn’t surprised and I knew Brian wouldn’t be either, but I also knew he was going to be pissed.

“Come here Adds,” I told her and she sat down next to me as I wrapped the blanket I was using around her shoulders.

“This sucks,” she said softly as she rested her head on my shoulder and I kissed the top of her head.

“I know, I’m sorry Hun. Did he say why he couldn’t get out of working?”

“He claims he forgot to tell them he needed the day off,” she said sarcastically. “I’m so sick of doing things for him and he doesn’t ever do anything for me.”

“What are you talking about?” I questioned softly.

“Like, even when I feel like crap or I’m not in the mood, if he wants to do things I do it,” she said shyly.

“Wait,” I said as I sat up and looked over at her, “Addie is he forcing you to have sex?” I asked her nervously.

“No not exactly. It’s just easier because if I don’t then he’s pissy all night and I’d rather just get it over with and give him what he wants.”

“Adds you can’t honestly tell me that you’re happy in your relationship with him. How long has this been going on like this?”

Of course he couldn't come, like that's even a fucking surprise. That bastard. Has something to do with work my ass, I bet he's sleeping around with some slut or only god knows what, can I please kill him? Can you please get STDs and die? LOL. I'm going to torture him and kill him slowly, I want to hear him cry in agony and beg for his pathetic life. Just saying. Forgot to tell them off my fucking ass, this lying bastard just smh.

You're just now figuring that out? He doesn't give a fuck about you Addie. Leave the bastard before I come in there and kill him, I'm crazy! OH HELL NO!!! THIS BASTARD, GETTING ALL MAD WHEN SHE DOESN'T HAVE SEX WITH HIM! THAT'S IT! GIVE ME HIS ADDRESS, I'M GOING OVER THERE RIGHT NOW. LET ME GO GET MY KNIFE! LOL.

“Let me ask you a question, and I want you to be honest. Do you love him? I’m not asking if you did, I’m asking if you love him now?” I questioned her and her eyes welled up with tears again and she slowly shook her head.

“No, but I’m afraid that Dad is going to be mad at me if I break up with him because TJ isn’t going to be here for the baby,” she cried.

“Oh Addie,” I sighed as I pulled her into a hug. “Dad is NOT going to be upset if you break up with TJ. I know he flipped out at first but he told me and I know he told you that we were going to get you through this whether or not TJ was a part of it. If you don’t want to be with TJ anymore just break it off.”

“What if he gets upset?”

“Tell him to come over later tonight and then you can sit out back and tell him or something. That way Dad can be right inside if you need him to make TJ leave.”

“Are you sure Dad won’t be mad?” She asked again.

“I thought you would have picked up on this by now, but Dad hates TJ. He hasn’t trusted him from the start of all of this and he would actually prefer that TJ was out of the picture because he doesn’t want to see you get hurt any more than what you have to. We’re on your team Adds, everything that we’ve done and said after we had time to let it sink in has been in your best interest. If you’re not happy, he needs to go. If he shows an interest in the baby once it’s born then we’ll deal with that then, but you’re not tied to him forever because of this,” I told her and she nodded.

YES! BREAK UP WITH THAT BASTARD! BRAIN WILL NOT BE MAD, HE WILL BE FUCKING GLAD TO FINALLY BE RID OF THE BASTARD AND SO WILL I! That's a great idea, break up with him at the house and if he tries anything Brian can kill him and I can gladly watch and cheer! God, I'm so cruel lol.

Aww, Addie's baby!!! And she's due two months after Rachel! They are going to be in for some craziness when that time comes around, taking care of three little babies, just I can't even imagine.

Aww, yay! Zacky's met someone, it's about time. I hope she's good to him. Rachel, you sweet girl. I think Zacky made a good choice in asking Rachel for advice. Good advice Rachel, I hope things go well with them. Gena can go choke on old guy's hairy balls as I said before and Bella doesn't need to know much about her because she's a bitch.

“Daddy you stink like fish!” She said as she pinched her nose.

“I know Baby, that’s why I didn’t want to hug you. I didn’t want you to smell like fish too,” I told her and she scrunched up her face. “Where’s Mommy?”

“She’s in the kitchen making dinner, we’re having paschettis,” she informed me.

“Spaghetti?” I smirked.

“That’s what I said,” she laughed, “paschettis.”

“You’re crazy,” I laughed before heading towards the kitchen.

Omg! This made me laugh so much! Luna is so cute, just gahhh!!!

“Well I’m glad to hear I’m fooling everyone because right now I feel like a whale,” she rolled her eyes and I smirked.

Lol, I know how that feels Rachel.

"Dinner’s ready, but I needed to talk to you about something that Addie told me this morning,” she said and I nodded. “I really need you to try to keep a level head around her because she’s already pretty upset. She told me she doesn’t want to be with TJ anymore.”

“Thank God,” I replied with a sigh.

“Bri, she told me that he gets really mad at her and acts like an asshole if she won’t have sex with him.”

“What?” I said through clenched teeth.

“She said that he doesn’t force her because that was my first question, but she told me that she’s pretty much giving it up to him so she doesn’t have to deal with him being a jerk. She was worried that you would be mad at her because she’d be stuck with the baby all alone. I told her that that wasn’t the case and we would have her back. She was going to tell TJ tonight that it’s over and she’s not sure how he’ll react,” she told me and I literally felt my entire body burn with rage.

“Addie’s not talking to him, I’m going to fucking deal with him my way. What’s to say he won’t do something stupid and threaten to hurt her if she leaves him?”

Amen to that Brian. Thank fucking god haha. YES! LET BRIAN HANDLE IT!! He has a good point, he probably would threaten to hurt her if she tries leaving him and then I'm really going to have to kill him.

“Alright, I’ll handle it,” I told her as I stood and offered her my hand.

“How?” She questioned.

“I’m not 100% sure yet but when he gets here I need you to keep the girls in the house, especially Luna because I don’t want to freak her out.”

I know how he should handle it. By kicking his ass into the ground, just saying.

I got up and started towards the door and Addie looked up at me as she realized that Rachel had told me everything. She tried to tug on my arm to pull me back to no avail. Her next effort was to stand in front of the door and yell for me to stop. I placed my hands on her shoulders and looked her straight in the face.

“Addison, if there was ever a time in your life that you’re going to listen to me, now would be that time,” I told her.

“But Dad…”

“Listen to me Addie. Mom told me everything and I know you want him gone. I have a feeling if you talk to him he’s just going to try to manipulate you more than he already has. He’s now practically raped you in more ways than one and now he’s going to deal with me. Stay inside with your mom and your sister and let me deal with this, alright?” I finished and she took a deep breath before nodding and stepping out of the way.

Shit is about to go down!!! Move out of the way Addison, it's time for your father to kick some ass. I suggest you listen to your father and let him handle it, he'll make sure that bastard is gone for good.

I headed down the long walkway that led out to the driveway and he came through the gate as he messed with his cell phone, stopping dead in his tracks when he saw me coming towards him. He slowly started to back up and I just walked faster. He tried to turn around and I grabbed him by the shirt and pulled him back. He looked me in the eyes and I punched him square in the face.

Haha! I love how he tried to run, he knew what was coming to him. YES! FINALLY BRIAN PUNCHES HIM IN THE FUCKING FACE!! IT'S ON NOW YOU DIRTY BASTARD!

“You had a fair warning you fucking piece of shit, now you’re mine,” I growled as I threw him up against the side of the house and it knocked the wind out of him. “Listen up you stupid little fuck,” I said as I pulled him away from the wall and slammed him back against it again as he tried to fight me. “You are never to come near my daughter again for any reason. You want to see your kid take her to court, I’m sure the judge would love to hear about how you fucking raped her on two different levels.”

“Yeah, well fuck you and your stupid cunt daughter. This is all her fault anyway. I’m glad I’m getting a free pass on this bullshit, she’s not worth my time of day,” he spat back at me as he tried to hit me again. We struggled for a minute before I threw him down on the ground and hit him in the face again as he sat up.

YEAH YOU HAD YOUR WARNING YOU LITTLE SHIT AND NOW BRIAN'S GOING TO DEAL WITH IT AND IT'S NOT GOING TO PRETTY! OH HELL NO! HE DID NOT JUST SAY THAT AND THEN TRY AND HIT HIM! YOU HAVE NO CHANCE! YES! BEAT HIS FUCKING ASS BRIAN, PUT THAT STUPID FUCKER IN HIS PLACE! WOOHOOO!!! TAKE THAT TJ YOU STUPID FUCK!

“Get up you little bitch,” I said as I pulled on his shirt. I hit him a third time and he lost his bearings for a minute. “You think you’re a big bad man now, fucking fight me like a man instead of being such a pussy.”

“Go to hell,” he stated as he hit me right in the ribs. I threw another punch and he stumbled before pulling his phone out of his pocket.

YEAH, GET UP YOU LITTLE PUSSY! YOU'RE SO PATHETIC!

“Please call the cops or your daddy’s lawyer. I’ll gladly spend a couple of nights in county if it means you’ll be locked up for years in state,” I told him and he quickly shoved his phone back in his pocket. I grabbed him by the throat and pushed him through the gate and slammed him against the side of the car.

PLEASE FUCKING DO IT! I FUCKING DARE YOU! YOU CAN'T WIN TJ, BRIAN CAN JUST CHARGE YOU FOR RAPE! IT'S OVER, GET THE FUCK OUT!!


“You’re choking me,” he got out as he gasped for air.

“I catch you near my daughter, my home, or anyone else in my family ever again I’ll fucking finish what I started. You’ve seen first-hand that I have a tendency to follow through with my promises, next time I won’t have any mercy on you, do you fucking understand me?” I asked him and he nodded before I released his throat and he coughed. “Good. Now get out of my sight and off of my fucking property before I add trespassing to the long list of things that I could have you arrested for, and don’t ever fucking come back.”

Yep, I suggest you heed to his warning this time or he will won't go so easy on you next time.

I moved away from him and he quickly got in his car and peeled out of the driveway without taking a second look back.

THAT'S RIGHT YOU FUCKING BITCH YOU BETTER RUN AND DON'T BOTHER COMING BACK OR I'LL KILL YOU MYSELF!!!

Damn, that's a nice backyard, I especially love that pool. Woohooo!! Party time!!

“Holy shit, Dude! No wonder you bought this place, I’d have bought it for just the back yard alone,” he shouted.

“Speak up Johnny, I can’t hear you,” I told him as he got closer.

“Fuck you Bro.”

“Watch yourself Shorty, it’s a brand new pool and it’s begging to have someone thrown in it,” I smirked.

Damn, you better watch it Johnny lol.

“You think Rachel’s gonna be pissed about the pills later?” He asked quietly with a small laugh.

“Rachel’s gonna think it’s fucking hilarious. Those hormones are raging like crazy, she can’t get enough right now,” I smiled.

“Val too, she fucking wears me out sometimes. The minute Ashton falls asleep she’s all over me. Half of the time I end up taking a nap with the kid just to catch up on sleep that I’m not getting throughout the night.”

I remember that. I was constantly horny but I had no one to relieve it for me :( I would be all over him all the time even if I wasn't pregnant ;)

“Trust me Baby, I’m going to take real good care of you tonight.”

“I hope so,” I smirked before turning around to face him and kissing a trail along his jaw and nipping at his earlobe. “I’m so fucking horny my panties are already soaked,” I whispered against his ear before grabbing the dish out of the microwave and heading outside.

“Rach!” He called after me and I just looked back and smirked at him. “You are so going to pay for this later,” he threatened with a small laugh as he adjusted his hard-on before following me outside.

Haha! Rachel you fucking tease! Love it!

“What the fuck did you guys just take?” Lacey demanded.

“I don’t know what you’re talking about Baby,” Johnny replied.

“You’re full of shit. I just saw the bag too Matt,” Val pointed out and Zack slugged Matt in the arm.

“Wait a second? You guys were popping pills?” Kimmy asked and Arin just shrugged his shoulders with a sheepish grin.

“For real, what was it?” I asked as I looked over at Brian.

“Nothing Babe,” he smirked and I gave up and went over to Matt to wrestle the bag out of his pocket with Val’s help. I finally grabbed it and saw two more little blue diamond shaped pills and my jaw dropped.

“You didn’t?” I almost gasped as my lips curved into a small smile.

“I told you she would know what it was,” Brian laughed.

“Are you guys serious right now?” I asked again and they all gave it away that they were all guilty of taking them. “You’re such a dick,” I smirked as I walked over and playfully hit Brian in the arm.

“What is it?” Kimmy asked.

“Word on the street is that it’s the new party drug, we wanted to see what it was all about,” Brian laughed before taking a sip of beer.

“Get real Babe, we both know that the last fucking thing you need to take is Viagra,” I told him and the guys started cracking up while the rest of the girls stood in disbelief.

“Wow, Zack was right. You guys do turn into morons when you get together,” Becca stated and the guys laughed even harder.

“Wait, Viagra?” Kimmy questioned as she realized what the drug was. “That’s the sex pill, right?”

“Yep,” Val laughed.

OMG!!! VIAGRA, REALLY?!!! LMAO!!! I don't see the point in them taking viagra, especially Matt, I mean he already has the horse cock, I don't think it needs to be any bigger than that ;) Johnny probably needs it though. Haha BURN!!! LOL. Just kidding Johnny...maybe

“Good, now maybe Johnny will actually be able to keep up with me before he passes out,” Lacey joked.

DAMN!! DOUBLE BURN! HAHA!

Aww Brian giving relationship advice. Becca seems a little awkward and shy but I'm sure she'll get used to it after spending some more time with if her and Zacky work out. She seems like a sweet lady though.

HOLY FUCK! YOU WEREN'T LYING ABOUT THEM FUCKING ALL OVER THE HOUSE!! FIRST, YOU START WITH KITCHEN SEX (which was my idea ;)) THEN THE LIVING ROOM AND THE FUCKING STAIRS FOR CHRIST'S SAKE! THE SHOWER, THE BED JUST GAHHH!! TOO MUCH HOTNESS! I AM VERY HOT AND BOTHERED AND MUST GO TAKE OF MYSELF AND TAKE A COLD SHOWER!!

Aww, the ending was perfect, that's true love right there <3 Love it!!

God this chapter was just too much. I was overwhelmed by the awesomeness. Well now that my ovaries are gone and my voice is gone, LOL. Great job as always. I love you and your writing Update soon!

@ NeverWakeMeUp
I just realised I didn't reply to your other comment, my memory is the size of a gnat's lately! Haha

If I find one like that, I'll be hoarding him away from everyone! Hahaha. But I'll be sure to clone him and send one your way :D

Viagra parties sound fun! XD

Can't wait! :D

@ RachTheBat

Haha, Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Yes, thank God for TJ being gone! He's a douche and didn't deserve a place in this story! He definitely got what was coming to him.

LOL, the whole Viagra idea makes me laugh every time I hear about it. At the doctor's office I used to work at, the doctors all used to joke about having Viagra parties for fun and say it would be like a "clinical trial" LOL You're right though, Brian definitely didn't need it and I'm sure the other guys didn't either, but it made for a good ending

No shame in being turned on! Hell, I'd take this Brian on behind closed doors any day! If you find one that's available I'll take one too!

Thanks so much for the comments! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Hope to have more up in the next week probably.

WHAT A CHAPTER!!!

I'm just coming back to earth after reading that, that was awesome! God, so much sex! I really love it

Before I get onto the mind blowing sex in this here chapter...I'm so glad that TJ has gone now! The dick! Ugh, I hate guys like that, expecting everything to be done for them and demanding sex whenever they want, regardless of anyone else's feelings. I'm glad Brian kicked his ass!

I laughed so hard when all the guys revealed they'd taken Viagra, but I really don't think Brian needs it, he's like a walking freakin hard on! Hahaha

Now onto the best part.. I think I am slowly falling madly love in with the way you describe Brian in this, goddamn he's irresistable! So cocky and sure of himself one minute, being all damn sexy and shit and then turning into the most sweetest guy in the world the next minute! I'm swooning so hard and maybe a little bit turned on right now, not gonna lie hahaha.

Dude, that sex though! PHEW! Can I get me one of these? Haha. I think the way you ended the chapter was just so beautiful, neither being able to describe the feelings they had in words just falling in love that little bit more, you're making me swoon all over the place!

MORE SOON!! :D

@ Mrs. Shadows

Haha, yeah, the first chapter was pretty long on this one, usually I don’t write that much, but for some reason some of the chapters in this story are too hard for me to break up.

Yes, Addie is now 15 and Luna is friggin adorable! I hope the kids I have in real life have such adorable personalities. AND yes! There are two more on the way!!! Shit is about to get all kinds of crazy!

Addie is a really good big sister and I think Luna will follow in her footsteps. The entire band is on the family path and even though Zack was a little unfortunate there’s still plenty of hope for him to find someone and settle down! OMG! When you said about Gena choking on some old dude’s hairy balls Big Daddy totally popped into my head when Adam Sandler goes to his ex-gf’s apartment and the old guy that cooks at hooters was coming out of the bathroom! LMAO!

Addie and Luna are complete opposites in some aspects. Addie is extroverted and completely outspoken sometimes where Luna is a total introvert and is extremely affectionate and quiet. As you found out later on, IT’S BOYS!!!! YAY!!!

Of course I had to throw in the smut on the first chapter, but trust me, after what I just pulled out of my ass, this is NOTHING! But I’m glad you enjoyed it all the same!

Yeah, little Luna found out first because she noticed the baby bump. I LOVED that interview where Brian gets on his dad’s case. I kind of got that vibe from him all along but that pretty much sealed the deal that he’s pretty cocky and sarcastic sometimes in real life too LOL.

It was weird for me at first to write Addie as a teenager, especially when everything goes down with the pregnancy. Luna busted out the cute card again and of course Brian had to be an ass hahaha!

I know, poor Addie, a little too much too late! TJ is a total douchebag! He’s up to something! Not only is he 18 and sleeping with a 15 year old, BUT HE REALLY DIDN’T HAVE ENOUGH COMMON SENSE TO USE A CONDOM? What an ass! This is going to be such a mess!

15 is super young to get pregnant! I can’t imagine being a teenager and having to tell my parents I was pregnant. It must have been rough for you to go through that! Especially with the sperm donor being such a dick to you now.

Brian was a dick to her, but it was his immediate reaction. In his eyes Addie is still his little girl and it’s hard for him to realize that she’s growing up and now she has to grow up even faster. I don’t think I would ever be able to give up a baby either, regardless of the situation.

Again, TJ’s a douchebag.

Poor Brian was completely devastated. He definitely deserved to go out and get drunk after that one. I’m glad you liked the chapter and it was full of surprises!

Onto the next!

I know, it’s hard for there to be so much tension between Brian and Addie because of how close they are. Her staying back on her own is definitely a bad idea, clearly she’s been up to something that Brian and Rachel had no idea about so her staying back by herself is a total no go. Brian and Addie definitely needed to talk things out and start moving forward.

I can only imagine the banter between Brian and Papa Gates being this fun! I love the whole idea of them being so sarcastic with each other but then Papa Gates is so supportive of him through all of this (unlike Rachel’s parents as you’ve seen) And yes, Brian is one sexy asshole!

TJ is way too cocky for his own good, I agree, Brian should put him in his place. TJ and him are NOTHING alike. Brian has laid it out in black and white, so we’ll see what happens in the future. I’m going to shut up about this now because he infuriates me and I don’t want to give anything away.

I know, who the hell would beat on Arin! He’s so damn cute and irresistible! Of course Rachel had to help fix him, we couldn’t let him suffer!

I feel bad for Addie too. Despite her actions she needs Brian more than ever and he’s starting to pull away. I understand both sides and it’s just sad to see it happen.

TJ does need to watch his back. Brian (or any of the guys really) isn’t the type of person someone should fuck with. They are hardcore dudes and you don’t want to piss them off.

It’s good that Rachel and Brian are talking things through. The only way that they’ll come out of this winning is if they stick together. Of course they had to have some sexy time! You’ll see more about that in the chapter that I just posted (Brian gives someone a speech LOL)

Poor Addie has morning sickness and of course the dumb shit doesn’t do anything for her. Brian should knock him out, I agree completely. Thank God he finally just tells him to leave.

Addie and Brian are finally starting to reconnect and it’s good because like we both said, she needs him right now. My parents always told me they would kick me out if it happened too, but I think it would be hard to follow through with that threat if it was my kid that got pregnant.

Yeah, I had to make Brian face reality with Luna telling him he was old LOL If Rachel gets it dealt to her he deserves it too hehe.

As for Rachel’s parents, more specifically her mom, TOTAL FUCKING PSYCHO! Who degrades their own flesh and blood the way that she does with Addie and Rachel and who accuses a man of hurting his own daughter like that with no solid reason? I started cracking up with this though:

THAT'S IT, LET ME AT HER! LET ME AT THIS BITCH! You are too much! I love you!

Judy definitely deserved to be slapped! And Rachel was the one that deserved to have the enjoyment of being the one to do it! She deserves to be completely cut off after all of the bullshit she’s pulled. I wouldn’t want someone like that around my kids, regardless of what their relation is.

YAY! BOYS! Brian is STOKED to finally be getting his boys! The new house was a must too, especially now that the twins won’t be the only new additions to the family.

I don’t necessarily think that Addie was hiding anything or is up to something, I think TJ’s just being manipulative and telling her what she wants to hear to make think she’s happy.

Ugh, Brian is just so cute, dirty, and funny all wrapped up into the perfect man LOL I wish this man really existed other than in our fantasies haha!

Thanks so much for the comments and spending your time reading this story! I know the next chapter is long, but I think you’ll find it totally worth the time it takes to read it!

HOLY MOLY! SHIT JUST WENT DOWN!!!

Poor Addie, morning sickness is never fun, thankfully I never had it with my daughter so I'm lucky. Of course TJ is just sitting on his ass, typical, like I was expecting anything else. Brian, you should just kick him out already, he obviously doesn't give a shit. I don't even know why he bothers coming around, just grr I want to strangle him.

“I can’t stand that sound, it’s horrible.”

“Maybe you shouldn’t have knocked her up then,” I stated and he shook his head and looked back towards the TV.

Yeah, you shouldn't of gotten her pregnant you dumb fuck. You're flipping 18 years old for god sakes, if you didn't want children you should of used some goddamn protection or better yet, sleep with someone your own age.

“Do you want me to take those up to her?” He asked.

“Nope. Wouldn’t want you to have to move your ass to take care of someone you claim to care so much about.”

Yeah, we wouldn't want to burden you by making you get up and go try and take care of her when you don't give a shit, now get out.

I'm glad Addie and Brian are reconnecting again, they need each other, especially if TJ continues to be a dick.

God, this is making me think about back when I was pregnant. I was so scared about being a parent, the birth, and all this stuff. I kept thinking about how stupid I was for letting this happen because my parents had warned me about it. My baby daddy is a complete dick too...sigh.

I have a feeling TJ is going to back out too. He is not mature enough to handle the responsibility of raising a child and I just don't think he deserves to be in the child's life. I was so scared when I got pregnant that my parents would kick me out too because they always threatened that they would if me or my sisters ever got pregnant.

“If you’re not going to do anything useful for her, go home,” I told him and he sat up and yawned.

“Alright, I guess just let her know I left,” he said as he stood and dug his keys out of his pocket.

Yeah, get the fuck out and how about you don't come back. Gah, I hate him with a fiery passion. He doesn't deserve someone like Addie.

“No cops and robbers?” I smirked.

“No. I don’t even know what that is,” she informed me.

“That’s a game that I played when I was your age.”

“That’s different, you’re really old,” she stated and Rachel bit back a laugh.

“I am?” I gasped playfully and Luna laughed and nodded. “Is Mommy old?”

“No. Mommy’s really pretty,” she replied and Rachel smiled.

Haha, now it's Brian's turn to be called old :D Aww, Luna you're so sweet.

Uh oh, Rachel's parents are here, that's never good news.

I'm glad Brian and her dad are getting along but it looks like Judy is still a bitch.


“Well you look horrible,” Judy almost snapped at her and Addie looked taken aback.

“Mom!” Rachel snapped back and glared as Addie’s eyes started to well up with tears yet again and I mentally cursed as I sat back up in the recliner.

“I know I look horrible!” Addie yelled at her. “I’m freaking pregnant! What do you expect, Nana?” Addie yelled and Luna ran to Rachel. Judy’s jaw dropped as she gasped and stared at her in disbelief before her head snapped over to me.

“This is your fault!” She pointed her finger at me and the last bit of self-control that I had managed to hang onto for the past few weeks completely snapped.

OH SHIT! SHIT IS ABOUT TO GO DOWN. PUNCH THE BITCH! PUNCH THE BITCH!

OH HELL NO! THIS BITCH DID NOT JUST GO THERE! I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE WOULD ACCUSE BRIAN OF TOUCHING HIS OWN DAUGHTER! THAT WENT WAY OVER THE LINE! THAT'S IT, LET ME AT HER! LET ME AT THIS BITCH!

Damn, Rachel slapped her mother in the face, well she deserved it, it's about damn time somebody hit her. And she had the nerve to try and demand that her and the kids leave with her, like seriously just grr this bitch!

Ohhh, double damn she isn't allowed to see the kids anymore and she wants nothing to do with them. I didn't expect this so soon but it was bound to happen and I think it's for the best.

Aww, the poor girls, they shouldn't of had to hear that :(

Now onto something more positive.

YES!!! WOOOOOHOOO!!! THEY'RE HAVING BOYS! THEY'RE HAVING BOYS! *does a happy dance*

I bet Brian is happy about that, being surrounded by girls all the time haha.

Yeah, I think it's a good idea that they get a bigger house since they're family is getting so big. The house looks nice.

They most definitely need to find out more about this TJ kid. I think he's bad news.

Hmm...why is Addie in a good mood? I'm all suspicious now. And why was she all upset about moving? Hmm...I think Addie is up to something or she's hiding something.

NOOO WHY DID YOU LET HER LEAVE WITH THAT BASTARD!! AND HE DOESN'T DESERVE TO STAY BECAUSE HE DOESN'T DO SHIT!!! WHY?! JUST WHY?!

“I hope so,” he said softly as he kneeled down in front of me and kissed my stomach. “How are my boys doing today, huh?” He asked as he placed both hands on it. “Daddy’s so happy to finally be getting the sons he always wanted. I’m going to show you how to get dirty and cause trouble and do all of the stuff that I did when I was growing up. We’re going to make Mommy crazy,” he smirked.

AHH THE CUTENESS IS JUST TOO MUCH!!! I have no doubt that those boys are going to be little troublemakers.

“You were pretty cool about Addie going out tonight. I have to say, I didn’t think you would let her go that easily.”

“Geez Rach, you make it sound like I’m Hitler.”

“Lately you’ve been kind of resembling him a little bit,” I smirked. “Kind of makes me wonder if you have ulterior motives.”

“Mm,” he sighed, “perhaps. I mean, all I’m saying is that I wouldn’t have a problem with it if you wanted to try to get Luna to bed a little early tonight. If you feel the need to use the time we have alone to suck my cock I wouldn’t try to stop you. In fact, I would even be nice enough to repay the favor.”

“Oh, when did you become so romantic?” I groaned with a laugh as I slipped my arms from around him and grabbed my drink.

“Babe, if you want romance I can light you some candles,” he smirked as he tried to bite back his laugh and grabbed his beer off of the counter.

“Watch yourself, Smartass. I might go Ozzy Osbourne on that shit while I’m down there.”

Oh god, not Hilter lol. Brian doesn't even come close to Hitler. That man was a crazy pschopath.

Mmm it's turning dirty ;)

OMG LMAO OZZY OSBOURNE, REALLY? LOL. You are hilarious girl, can I borrow your hilarity please.

I loved this chapter and you need to hurry up and update before I die. This story is so good! Keep up the good work. I want that smuttiness you promised ;) Sorry it took so long for me to finish this, I was distracted but here it is now. I can't wait for your replies.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!

Aww, there's tension between Addie and Brian and it's making me sad because they are usually so close. I can't blame them though, this is hard on both of them but they'll pull through it. Yeah, I don't think it's a good idea for her to stay back by herself. I don't trust this TJ kid and we don't need her sneaking off to see him or any other boys while they're gone, especially since she's pregnant now. I understand her not wanting to go though, her being pregnant and the problems with her father, I would probably want to stay back too. Her and Brian need to talk things out though because it is obviously stressing Rachel and Luna out and themselves as well and all of them don't need that type of streses right now, with both Addie and Rachel being pregnant and Luna being so young and everything.

“Hey Old Man, how’s it hangin,” I joked and he laughed.

“I should have known that if I was a smartass to you your entire life that you’d turn out just like me,” he said sarcastically.

“Which, by the way, my wife really appreciates,” I smirked. “So what’s up?” I asked as I took one last drag from my cigarette before putting it out.

I laughed at this. I bet this exactly how Brian talks to his dad in real life and if it's not it has to be pretty damn close lol. I love those boys <3

“Why do you have to tell him? Why do you think that it’s his business?” She snapped at me.

“You started it by calling them, they know something’s up already. Besides, this isn’t about me telling him your business, it’s about me needing to talk to him and get things off of my chest. The world doesn’t revolve around you Addie, and if you can’t get that through your head right now you’re in for a rude awakening in about eight months,” I told her before leaving the room and pulling the door shut behind me again.

Ohhhh Addie getting some attitude. Brian makes a good point. It's time you grow up Addie and realize that it's not all about you anymore, as soon as that baby is born, you will have to put the baby before yourself, believe me I have come to learn this and it was hard at first but it got easier. No more going out with friends all the time, all that is history once the baby is born.

“At least we know you’re old age isn’t affecting your vision yet,” I remarked and he smirked as he came back over with two glasses and a bottle of scotch.

Haha, Brian you're still an ass but a very sexy ass and I loves you <3

Aww, I thought it was sweet how Brian came to his dad for advice. If I was in Brian's position I would probably do the same, except with my mom since I'm very close to my mom.

“I don’t blame you for being furious. This is a lot different than your situation, you and Rachel had both already graduated from high school and you were both 18, not just you. It makes you wonder about this guy if he’s 18 and the best he can do is a 15 year old.”

Right!!!! That's just sad lol. That already is making a bad impression. I mean seriously, find someone your own age.

“Wow, I wish I knew what to say to you right now, but I’m kind of at a loss,” he told me and I shrugged.

What? Brian Haner Sr. is at a loss? That's impossible lol, come on Papa Gates, show us your wisdom.

Well now that Papa Gates put it that way, maybe it is a good idea for her to stay back. Both of them need to clear their heads and then talk. Plus I trust him and Suzy and Mckenna to watch over her and make sure she stays out of trouble. It might be a good idea Brian and then you can talk to her and resolve these issues.

Alright, here we go, time to meet TJ. I was getting really into this shit, I was passionate and everything, saying things at the screen as if I were there, yeah I'm weird lol.

Ok so I really don't like him. He is a cocky son of a bitch and I cannot stand cocky men, well except Brian because like Rachel said, he does it to be funny and because he's confident and knows who he is and what his responsiblities are, not the thinks he's better than everyone else and knows everything type of cocky, just no. I want to slap those type of guys so bad. Oh, yeah that's definitely not good. You should most definitely not be trying too hard, that just makes him look fake. He probably is fake and it's all just an act, just smh. You really should break his fingers Brian, I want to hear him scream, ok that was mean lol but still. He is not good for Addie, she is just going to get hurt.

“Gotta love this beautiful California weather,” he said sarcastically with a smirk.

Really, just really right now. If I were Brian I would've turned around and punched him right then.

“If you came out here to try to make small talk with me, I’m not interested,” I told him bluntly.

“I guess I’m not very high on your list of favorite people in the world right now, huh?” He questioned and I ignored him. “Addie told me that you were only 19 when she was born, I was wondering if you had any advice.”

No shit dumbass, he hates your fucking guts and I don't blame him. Don't act like you want advice, you don't give a shit. Once the baby is born you'll probably be gone, quit with the act.

“She’s right, I was only 19 when she was born,” I informed him as I finally looked him in the eye. “15 ½ years ago I watched my baby girl come into this world. I was the first one to hold her and quiet her cries after the nurses checked her over. I promised myself that I would never let anything bad happen to her, that I would try to protect her from all of the crazy shit in this world. I was doing pretty fucking good too until you came along,” I took another drag from my cigarette. “I might have only been 18 when Rachel got pregnant with Addie, but that doesn’t mean that you have the right to compare yourself to me.”

Yeah, you tell him Brian.

“What makes us so different?” He questioned.

Did you really just ask that question right now, like seriously? Don't let me come into this story because I'm about ready to hit you myself if Brian doesn't.

“For starters, I sure as hell wasn’t going around fucking 15 year old girls,” I said as I glared.

Exactly, like seriously. Be mature and find someone your own age, you stupid fuck.

“I love Addie,” he told me and I wanted to punch him in the face. “We hung out in the same crowd of people, all in the same age range. I generally didn’t date girls if there was more than a year or two age difference, but there was something about her that made me fall in love with her.”

You love Addie my ass. If you love Addie then I'm a fucking dolphin. Lmao, I just made myself laugh right there. I'm so weird haha.

“If you loved her as much as you say you do, you wouldn’t have put your dick in her without wrapping up first,” I mumbled.

“You must have done the same thing, obviously you didn’t care enough about Rachel to keep her from getting pregnant,” he shot back at me and I almost snapped.

“Stop comparing yourself to me. Rachel was the same age as me, we both had high school diplomas and we were a hell of a lot more mature than you two are. It’s two totally different situations.”

Yeah, stop comparing yourself to Brian because you're nothing like him, could never come close. This dude is so not father material, I know that for a fact.

“First of all, I really don’t think that we’re as different as you say we are. Second, trust me when I say that I’m sorry that all of this happened in the first place, but I really wish you would just give me a chance to prove that I can do this,” he told me with slightly less attitude than he had before. I shook my head and put my cigarette butt out, grabbing my beer off the table and stopping right in his face before I headed back inside.

“You better step the fuck up and take responsibility,” I warned. “You have one fucking chance to get this right. You’ve done enough damage, so if your plan is to make a half-assed effort I suggest you fucking walk away now. I will give you one fighting chance. What I won’t do is sit back and watch you break her heart, especially while she’s so vulnerable. And so help me God if I ever find out that you put your fucking hands on her in any way that’s undesirable, I’ll fucking kill you. Mark my words. Tread lightly my friend, I’m not the type of guy you want to piss off especially when it comes to one of my daughters,” I finished, staring him down for a minute more before going back inside.

You hear that fucker? One fucking chance so I suggest you don't fuck it up. You have a lot of proving to do. You tell him Brian. You better not hurt Addie or put your hands on her in a way that she doesn't want or you're dead, Brian will kill you and then I'll bring you back to life and kill you again myself, you got it bastard? lol. You don't want to mess with Brian, he will fuck you up in a heartbeat and it won't be pretty.

Sorry about all that, like I said I was really passionate during that part.

Anyways, Aww I'm glad Brian tried to show her he was there for her. Hopefully during the tour he can clear his head and things will get better between you guys.

Aww poor Arin. Who the hell beat up cute little Arin, I'm going to kill him. No one hurts my cute little Arin, he's such a sweetheart. I love Arin so much, I just want to squeeze him <3

There goes Rachel, putting her nursing skills to good use. I bet she's had to heal the guys plenty of times because they are always going out and doing crazy shit. Getting those stitches probably had to hurt like hell, poor baby.

Come on Brian, you need to talk to her, you can't avoid her forever, you guys are going to have to talk eventually.

I really feel bad for Addie, I would be so upset if one of my parents didn't talk to me. She's already emotional enough as it is and he's not helping. I know it's hard to accept but he needs to because she needs him right now because pregnancy is pretty tough, I know from experience.

“I wish he’d realize that he was the same age when I was born.”

“Hold up, first of all, you’re a lot younger than he was. TJ might be the same age, but you’re definitely not. Not to mention that you’re a girl, the way parents react changes depending on whether or not it’s a son or daughter that’s in the situation. Nana and Poppy were pretty hard on him when they first found out I was pregnant with you. It’s been 15 years and they still kind of hold a grudge sometimes. Maybe part of Dad’s issue is that he’s been in TJ’s shoes to an extent and he knows how hard it was to have to grow up overnight. He’s also a lot different than TJ in a lot of different ways.”

This is very true.

“Dad said he’s too cocky.”

“He is too cocky,” I agreed.

Yes, he is way too cocky for his own good.

“It’s the way he carries himself. He’s confident; he knows who he is and what matters to him. This is why TJ needs to watch his back. TJ’s more bark than bite, Dad’s the complete opposite. He’ll warn someone if they’re lucky, after that, if they cross whatever line has been laid out for them, he’ll tear them apart.”

“So you think Dad will actually follow through on his threats if TJ messes up?” She questioned.

“TJ is 18, Addie. Dad won’t think twice before putting him in his place if he has to.”

Yep and yep. TJ better watch his back, that's all I'm saying because I know for a fact that Brian will fuck shit up if he does even the slightest thing wrong.

“I know, Baby. Starting tomorrow I’m putting this family back together before it can get any crazier. I’m going to make sure I talk to Addie every day and once we get home things are going to be better. Plus we have the ultrasound a few days after we get back to find out whether the twins are boys or girls and I can’t wait,” he smiled as moved his hand to my belly.

“We’ll pull through this, Babe. I trust you. You’re an amazing husband and an outstanding father and you’re doing as well as any other dad in your position would right now.”

“I couldn’t do it without you. You’ve been keeping things from escalating out of control because you have more patience than I ever could. I’m lucky to have you and you’re the best mom that our kids could ever have,” he said softly and pressed his lips to mine once again.

That's good. They need to talk things out and get the family back together. They can definitely get through this like I said before. They've been through a lot of shit and they've managed to pull through it and they will pull through this as well if they work together.

I quickly straddled him and kissed him hungrily. My body had been craving him since he first came to the door with flowers and I wasn’t in any mood to wait. He slipped his hands under my dress and ran them up my legs as I grinded down against the growing bulge in his jeans and I moaned into the kiss. I untucked his shirt and roughly pulled it open, sending a button or two flying across the room. He slipped one of his hands between my thighs and pushed my black lace thong to the side, groaning as he instantly pushed two of his long fingers inside of me.

“Holy shit, Baby,” he mumbled against my lips as he found me soaking wet.

“I REALLY want to be fucked,” I smirked and he laughed.

“Clearly,” he smiled as he rubbed my g-spot with his finger tips and I started panting.

“Fuck Bri, you’re going to make me come right now if you don’t stop,” I moaned softly as I grinded against his hand.

“Come for me, Rach,” he whispered against my ear as his fingers moved faster and I cried out.

“Feels so good,” I moaned as he palmed my clit.

“Yeah Baby,” he moaned as he worked his belt and his jeans open with his free hand. “Let go, I want that pussy nice and wet when I fuck it.”

“Brian,” I whispered as my hips bucked, my body right on the brink of explosion.

“I got you, Baby,” he said as he rocked his hand just right, creating just the right amount of pressure on my clit and my g-spot and sending me over the edge.

I cried out loudly as my body succumbed to the pleasure and he held me as he worked me with his other hand until my body went limp against his.

HOLY FUCK! THIS REALLY HAD ME GOING! SO FUCKING HOT. I felt like I was watching porn while I was reading this lol. Mm, Brian and those skilled fingers, just ugh. I love me some good smut, great way to end the chapter lol ;)

Another amazing chapter written by you my lovely lady. Only one chapter to go and then onto Changing Tides. I really should be writing but I want to finish doing this first. Alright, I'm done babbling...for now hehe :D

Ok, I finally got done with the first chapter, I was kind of distracted. Alright now it's freak out time so get ready.

OH MY FUCKING GOD!! ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME!! ALREADY YOU'RE DOING THIS TO ME!!! AHHH, I CAN'T TAKE IT!!!! Alright I'll save the rest of the freaking out for later, let's start from the beginning.

First thing I noticed was the chapter was longer than the chapters in the prequel. I swear you're trying to kill me with your writing length haha.

Here we go, Addie is now a teen, this should be good lol. Aww, Luna is so cute, I just wanna squeeze her <3

Ok, here comes the first set of freaking out, you have been warned.

OH MY FUCKING GOD! HOLY FRIED JOHNNY CHRIST BALLS! Omg I just cracked myself up right there. Anyways, MORE KIDS!!! LIKE IT ISN'T HARD ENOUGH HAVING TWO, NOW THEY ARE HAVING NOT ONE BUT TWO MORE!!!! THIS FAMILY IS GROWING WAY TOO FAST!! I JUST, I CAN'T RIGHT NOW! *takes a moment to calm down*

I can't imagine having twins, that's going to be pretty tough and I'm sure the birth process is going to be all the harder, just no I don't know if I could deal with having twins. On the other hand, I'm happy for them and they are all going to be one big happy family with a whole lot of craziness I just know it lol because their family is bat shit crazy lol. Ok, so that was a big surprise for me there that caught me off guard.

Moving on. I'm sure the girls will take it well. Addie is doing a good job at being a big sister to Luna so far which is good. Aww, all the guys are settling down and having kids as well, that's good. Poor Zacky, having to be a single dad, the poor man :/ but he has plenty of people to help him out if he needs it and he seems to be doing well so who needs that bitch anyways, she can go choke on some old dude's hairy balls lol. I don't know what's wrong with my mind today lol.

Anyways, Addie and Luna are very different but that's what makes things interesting. I think it would be cool if they were alike and they finished each other's sentences for some reason I think that would be kind of funny but maybe it's just me.

I think it will be interesting if they have boys, please let them be boys lol.

Mmm sexual tension, it's time to get it on! lol ;)

Yummy delicious smut as always. I think your senses are heightened during pregnancy. I swear you have my emotions all over the place haha.

So much for telling Addie first haha. Aww, cute little curious Luna. Again you explained the whole where do babies come from thing really well, I need to start thinking about how I'm going to explain that but I'm probably not getting pregnant again anytime soon.

“You trying to say I’m fat?” Rachel asked jokingly and Luna giggled and shook her head.

I could totally see myself saying this if I was in Rachel's situation lol.

“Wow, you’re a dick,” Rachel said with a laugh and I shrugged my shoulders.

“I can’t help it. You met the man that raised me, blame him,” I joked and she laughed and shook her head before standing up and going over to change her shirt. “You just put that shirt on, why are you changing it?”

Brian really is a dick but in a funny way. This made me think of that interview and Brian getting on his own father, that made me laugh so hard. I love Brian and him and Jimmy together=crazy motherfuckers.

“You’re the sexiest fucking cow I’ve ever seen,” I mumbled and she hit me lightly on the shoulder.

“You’re such an asshole,” she laughed.

“You’ve known this since before I knocked you up the first time, don’t act like this is new information,” I joked and she rolled her eyes.

I don't know if if I should be complimented about that or offended haha. With any other guy than Brian I would probably be offended or Matt lol.

“She was laughing so hard she almost peed her pants,” she said with a laugh and I rolled my eyes.

“Thanks, didn’t need to know that,” I said as I looked back down at Luna. “You want to tell her?” I asked her and she nodded and I set her down and she went running to Addie who picked her up and balanced her on her hip.

“What’s up, Chica?” Addie asked her.

“Mommy’s having babies!” Luna exclaimed and Addie looked over at us in shock, her eyes falling on Rachel as she realized that she was wearing a fitted shirt that showed off her blatant baby bump.

“Wait, how did you get that pregnant overnight?” Addie looked at her questioningly.

“I work fast,” I told her with a laugh and Rachel hit me again as Addie made a gagging noise.

For some reason this part made me think of Addie as the little girl she was again I don't know why. It's going to take some getting used to of her being a teenager lol. Aww, I love how Luna said, "Mommy's having babies," that made me smile and chuckle. And oh my fucking god! That last part had me dying, really Brian lmao. Then the typical teenager making the gagging noise haha.

“If you’re the chefs then I’m going with Bisquick,” I smirked and Addie stuck her tongue out at me.

“If they’re cooking, I’m going out for breakfast,” Rachel smirked.

“Mom! You’re so mean!” Addie laughed.

“I’m just kidding,” Rachel laughed. “If it’s that bad I’ll just eat cereal.”

“Mom….” Addie whined and Rachel and I laughed again.

Lol, Brian and Rachel are so mean.

I'm glad Addie is getting birth control, that is the smart thing to do at an early age.

“Are you already having sex?” I asked her calmly.

“Kind of, a few times,” she admitted.

“Did you use a condom?” I questioned and she shrugged her shoulders.

“Sometimes,” she mumbled.

“Adds,” I sighed, “we went over this how many times? I’ve been trying to drill it into your head for years.”

“It was only once or twice, the rest of the time we used one.”

“When are you due for your period?” I asked her and she shrugged her shoulders. “Addie, I told you before, it only takes once. How do you think I got pregnant with you?”

I started to get a bad feeling here. Please don't be pregnant that's the last thing we need to happen right now. This is making me think of myself just a few years ago before I got pregnant. There's Rachel being the overprotective mom, in this case it's good.

OH HELL NO!!! HE'S 18, NOW I KNOW THIS SHIT CAN'T BE GOOD. And of course she's at age 15 still naive, thinking that boys care about her when they really don't they just want sex and to take advantage of you, especially older guys. They won't hesitate to take advantage of a younger, naive girl. I understand though, I used to hangout with older boys a lot around that age which was a bad idea but I didn't have sex with any of them thankfully. I've dated a couple older guys but they always ended up leaving :( Anyways, I already don't trust this TJ kid, I don't like him and I haven't even met him.

Alright, get ready for the fireworks because it's major freak out time. The majority of this will be in all caps. Here we go.

ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME RIGHT NOW!!! ADDIE IS FUCKING PREGNANT! JUST ASDFGHJKL; HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN, IT'S HARD ENOUGH AS IT IS! RACHEL IS FUCKING PREGNANT WITH TWINS FOR CHRIST SAKE SHE SHOULDN'T HAVE TO DEAL WITH THIS STRESS! BRIAN IS FUCKING GOING TO FLIP SHIT THIS ISN'T GOOD, WHAT'S IS SHE GOING TO DO? 15 IS MUCH TOO YOUNG TO BE HAVING A CHILD! SHE'S STILL A KID!! JUST GAHHH!!!

Alright I'm done now.

This is exactly how my parents were when they found out I was pregnant, they were pissed and disappointed, gosh you're just trying to make me think about my past. At least I didn't get pregnant at fifteen, I can't even imagine that I was 17.

Here we go, here come the fireworks, time to tell Brian. God, if I were Addie I would be so scared. I couldn't even tell my parents, they had to find out for themselves which made everything worse.

I think Brian was a little tough on her but I don't blame him for his reaction. The last thing he wanted, the last thing either one of them wanted was their daughter to get pregnant so soon. I know I was a crying mess when my parents found out and my family was calling and yelling at me so I kind of feel for Addie since I went through the same thing. Oh what will her decision be. I had no idea what I was going to do when I was pregnant I considered abortion, adoption, all of it but in the end I couldn't get rid of my little girl but at 15 I don't even want to think about that.

Yeah, we'll see if he follows through with it. I don't like nor trust this TJ guy and I don't think he 's going to follow through with it, especially since she's only 15 and he could go to jail and all this stuff, just nope don't trust him. I may be jumping to conclusions but I guess we'll see.

Aww poor Brian, come here baby and give me a big ol hug you guys will get through this, I know it. You guys have been through plenty of bumps in the road and this one is no different, I believe in you guys.

It's ok Brian, go out and get some drinks, you could really use it right now. I probably would need to too because if my daughter got pregnant just ugh, yeah it wouldn't be pretty.

Hmm TJ wants to meet them huh, I wonder how this will go. I hope that I'm not going to have to come in there and kill him haha.

Wow, this chapter so good! I loved this even though you had my emotions all over the place. This is a great little introduction and you're already surprising me. This is going to be just as good as the prequel I can just feel it. I feel that there was more that I needed to say but I can't think of it at the moment. Oh well, I'll stop now. I'm going to go eat lunch and maybe continue on because I need to know what happens next.

@ RachTheBat
Aww, well thanks! Trust me I know what it’s like to be super busy and not have time to sit and read! I still need to get caught up on a few stories that I started reading and have been updated recently!

I know, Addie getting pregnant was really hard on both of them and it was heartbreaking to write some of it. I can’t imagine having to go through that as a parent. I had to throw drunk Brian in there to lighten up the mood a little bit after all of the drama went down, plus, what dad wouldn’t get drunk after all that?

Glad you like the background! I know, he looks absolutely DELISH in that picture! I want him!

I felt like I needed to have Brian and Addie reconnect in some form before the tour started. Otherwise I was afraid that the gap would be too big for what I have planned over the next few chapters. Leave it to Papa Gates to provide the words of wisdom! I love him too!

I know, poor Arin! He’s like the most defenseless of them all! And yes, I am a nursing student, so I love this type of stuff and I enjoy researching certain things! Not all of it is 100% accurate, I’m sure. But at least I make it sound good (I hope LOL) This would be why I’m so busy!

TJ is suspicious. To be honest, I don’t know what it is about him exactly yet either, but when I figure it out you guys will shortly after LOL. OMG YES! Cocky Brian is sexy as f*ck!

I’m glad you like the sex and the smuttiness in the story so far, I assure you, it only gets better and it will either be the next chapter or the one after that is going to be exploding with it! (no pun intended hehehehe)

Brian is too sweet with the girls! I feel like with him being a father in this story I need to put some mushy Daddy/Daughter moments in here to balance out all of the raw, animalistic craziness that goes on behind closed doors! Plus I have a tendency to write in certain things like smoking pot and stuff and I don’t necessarily think that smoking a joint once in a while when your kids aren’t around makes you a bad parent.

I know! Judy is such a Bitch! She totally deserved the slap that Rachel gave her. She’s had it coming for quite a while now! Unfortunately I grew up with someone who is very judgmental and would totally peg someone who was a little rough around the edges and covered in tattoos as the type of person that would do such horrible things. I guess I have a mini motive to try to go against that in everything that I do because it’s so not true!

Yay for mini Brians! It’s going to be so fun to write stuff in about them if this story continues out that far (or who knows, maybe a third installment lol) I have so many ideas that my brain wants to explode with excitement!

I know, Brian was so cutsie talking to Rachel’s belly, but then I thought it got too cute so it had to be balanced back out again! I don’t want Brian ruining his reputation throughout this series! The rough, crazy sex is here to stay!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment! Hope to have more posted soon, but we’ll see where life takes me over the weekend LOL

Finally found some time to sit down and read!

I'm loving the first chapter of this, I laughed, I swooned, I cried with them both when they found out about Addie's pregnancy, I laughed some more at drunk Brian, oh the emotions! I love how in tune they are with each other as a couple, the lovely sexy time where he said my name again

I felt so bad for Brian, feeling that he had failed Addie in some way, wanting to protect his baby girl, so heart warming! Also, that background is yummy! XD

Now onto chapter two!

I'm so glad that Addie and Brian worked it out, for now anyway haha. That talk with his father really helped him to see more clearly, go papa gates! I love the banter in this, Brian's cockiness, his little jokes, they're perfect! God, he's so adorable and sexy all at once! How anyone would dare hit my little baby Arin! quick question, do you work as a nurse or something? You really seem to know what you're talking about when it comes to the medical side, or maybe you just love research? LOL

I don't like TJ either, there's something about him I just don't like. Maybe it's the cockiness, I don't know but I have a feeling he's not going to be sticking around much longer. Can Brian get any cockier? It's seriously hot though

“Let go, I want that pussy nice and wet when I fuck it.” Jesus fucking christ, *dead* I love how much sex is in this story already

I'm glad Brian has his head screwed on right, pointing the finger and trying to blame each other won't help Addie at all, it'll just create more conflict for them all. He really is such an awesome father, this isn't the first time I've had tears in my eyes reading this.

Can I just say that I really freakin hate Rachel's parents! Especially her mom, can she go and face plant a concrete wall? Blaming Brian, how is it Brian's fault? He's been the best possible father he can be! They really boil my blood haha. Oh wow, now she really has sunk lower than low, accusing Brian of touching his own daughter?! That's inexcusable!! Rachel was right to give her a slap and Brian was right to throw them out of his house! Go Team Brian! I loved his little speech!

Awwww! Little baby boys, little mini Brian's running about the place, I'm so excited! haha

I'm awwing again haha. Brian talking to her belly was SO CUTE! Omg, I'm in danger of losing an internal organ if he carries on being this sweet! Oh wow, Brian, you're such a romantic bastard! It's kinda sexy though haha!

I'm really loving this story so far, can't wait for more! :D

@ synystergirl
Thanks so much for reading! I'm really glad that you're enjoying this story! That must be a rough situation for you to be in as a parent, I can't imagine what it would really be like to have a daughter go through this. Thanks so much for the compliments too! I'm trying my best! Brian is really sweet to Addie, he loves her like crazy but he's really struggling with this. We'll see what happens in the future between them! Judy sure did deserve what she got! She's deserved it since the beginning, but she finally crossed the line and got bat shit crazy LOL Thanks so much for reading and commenting!