Drowning in Our Own Debris - Comments

  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ HanerJoy
    Awww. thanks! I can't help it, I have a soft spot for Daddies talking to bellies LOL! We'll definitely find out what's going on with TJ in the near future. The gap between Addie and Brian seems to be closing, though we may come to a few bumps in the road. Thanks so much for reading/commenting! Hope to have more posted soon!!
    October 10th, 2013 at 10:17pm
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    @ eli666_
    Trust me, I'm SO not annoyed!! I'm really glad that you're still enjoying this! Thanks so much for continuing to read and comment!
    October 10th, 2013 at 10:15pm
  • synystergirl

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    So glad I found this story!! Just read the last chapter of the prequel and so glad to see you've done the sequel. I can relate to this story very well because my 17 year old daughter is pregnant and the boyfriend is 21. You are an awesome writer and a great storyteller. The things that Brian says are really great and I wish my daughters dad would talk to her like that. And I can't believe what Judy said about Brian. That bitch deserved a good slap for sure. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
    October 6th, 2013 at 06:26am
  • HanerJoy

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    Her parents are dicks I can't believe she said that >=( and I have a bad feeling about that TJ too, they better investigate. I'm glad things between Addie and Brian are better :) and I hope they get even better :) it was so cute when he was talking to her belly :D
    October 4th, 2013 at 03:25pm
  • eli666_

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    Wow. That was so intense! And it felt as long as ever, don't worry. Jesus, I know I must be annoying saying this everytime you publish a new chapter, but I freaking love this story!!!! Everything about it is perfect. Great fucking Job!!! ;)
    October 4th, 2013 at 10:55am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ eli666_

    I'm glad you're still into it! I was kind of afraid with such a drastic change that I might lose some people, but so far it seems like people are still enjoying it. Thanks for your feedback, hope to have another posted by tonight/tomorrow!
    October 3rd, 2013 at 10:38pm
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    @ pekigirl

    Aww, thank you! I'm glad to hear that you were touched when Brian hugged Addie and sat with her, that's what I was going for! Thanks for reading and sticking with me! More to come hopefully by tonight/tomorrow!
    October 3rd, 2013 at 10:37pm
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    @ HanerJoy

    Thanks so much! TJ is definitely a total D-Bag! Glad you liked the part where Brian talked to Addie and enjoyed the ending! Hope to have the next chapter posted by tonight or tomorrow!
    October 3rd, 2013 at 10:34pm
  • eli666_

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    AMAZING. I can't get enough of this story. I totally love it!
    October 3rd, 2013 at 12:29am
  • eli666_

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    Jesus fucking Christ, I forgot to subscribe to this story!!!!! Geez, I'm so stupid... Good thing I remember huh? Let me read the second part now, yay!!!!! :3
    October 2nd, 2013 at 11:48pm
  • pekigirl

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    yeeeey I just saw this chapter now because I forgot to subscribe to the sequel xD silly me! but I've read the second chapter and awwww I loved it! When brian was on the couch with rachel and then Addie appeared and he told her to sit with him.. and he hugged her and she started crying oh my god.. I had a lump on my throat on that part. It was really emotional and realistic you know? damn I loved it :) hopefully things will be fine now! great chapter as always and no need to thank me for the helping you out with the decision about the sequel :) I love your stories so yeaah! I'll keep reading everything you write ^^
    October 2nd, 2013 at 09:41pm
  • HanerJoy

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    I loooooved it so much :D I'm glad Brian showed Addie he loves her and he's trying :) and that TJ better watch his back, I'm not a fan of him. And I might need to take a cold with that last part :P it was hot :P
    October 2nd, 2013 at 05:09am
  • HopelesslyIntrigued

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    @ eli666_

    Thank you soooo much! I'm so glad you like it! Next chapter just posted now!!

    @ MrsChristX

    Hopefully Brian and Addie will come around soon! They've got a tough road ahead of them! Thanks for commenting!!
    October 1st, 2013 at 06:21pm
  • MrsChristX

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    Ahh! Loved it! Feel for addie! Hope she and brian get back on good terms soon! Cant wait for next update :) x
    September 30th, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • eli666_

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    OMG, I never thought it would be this dramatic from the very beginning! Well fucking done, as always!!! I loved it, and I'm sure I'll love it till the end. Poor/stupid Addie, though. I mean, 15 years old?!!! Jesus Christ, se should've known better. I can't wait for the next update, yeeii!!!! :D
    September 30th, 2013 at 09:13am
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    @ Foos922
    Thanks for letting me know! More to come soon!
    September 30th, 2013 at 04:31am
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    @ HanerJoy
    Thanks sooo much!! Yeah, this ones going to have a lot of WTF? moments along the way, I can assure you! Addie is definitely in a rough situation, as far as the guy sticking around, only time will tell. Hope to have more up over the next couple of days, thanks for your feedback!
    September 30th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • Foos922

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    I like it :)
    September 30th, 2013 at 01:48am
  • HanerJoy

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    I LOOOVED IT!!!!! Drama from the beginning :D Poor Addie :/ in what she got into :( with just being 15 :( I hope that guy really sticks with his word and doesn't leave her alone. Update soon!!!
    September 29th, 2013 at 11:15pm