The Black Parade - Comments

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You have to make it a good ending your storyhas already made me cry twice I dont want 14 to be the enddd T.T Update please!!!!!

awesome update! :D

I can't believe it.
I nearly freakin' cried during that chapter.
Amazing.
I cannot wait for the next post.
I'm gonna miss this story, when it goes.
xoxo

Did no one ever tell Gerard that going around grinning knowingly all the time doesn't make him look intelligent, it makes him look like a twat? I think he thinks he looks cool.

Someone really should have done, y'know?

I think it's partly the dress and partly the mental age, when it comes to Frank and Nevaeh. But that's just my educated guess. I could always be wrong.

“All right then, Mr Smarty Pants,” Frank snapped, “we'll sign it from Jesus instead.”
Love love love love love. Frank was buried with his brain! He's just special, okay? Okay?!

Oh, God, yeah, we decided Gerard sent back all the mourning little teenies who killed themselves when he did! I remember that! *beams*

Was it deliberate that the only members of MCR you can see on your background are Mikey and Ray lol?

Butbutbut Mikey's dying :-(

Lol. Another long time no talk senerio. I honestly, love updates. Personally, I like House of Wolves the best. But, recently, I was sitting here (at my computer in the most disgusting shade of purple chair [it's uncomfortable, too]) reading and listening to Disenchanted. Well, Famous Last Words decided to come on right after (shocker!) and I got the sudden vision of Gwen singing to Gerard while MIkey was dying. It seemed fitting. And I had to share.

<3 Nv.

I really liked this chapter :D

this is really good. chapter 4 made me cry. ='] i love it i love it i love it. actually, i've written something similar to it, and i 've posted it on mibba. ironically, it's also called the black parade, but it's the "narrative" version of it. here's the link, if you want to read it.
http://www.mibba.com/story/_69177/_111988/

Ha! I remember writing this chapter with you! The Frankie bits! I actually remember the conversations we had about it lol. And it still made me giggle when I read it.

I've started redrafting A Child Called Innocent. Would you like to see the prologue? It's very different.

woow....great take on the song teenagers!
more soons, cuz this story actually has me lmao!!!
:D

please please update soon because i want to know what happens next

can't wait for more, please update soon

Okay, I haven't commented in ages, and sadly I need to sleep (Irony much?) so this comment won't be long.

I liked that chapter. It confused the fuck out of me, but I liked it.

More soon?

I have only started reading and it's amazing. It makes me laugh and it makes me sad, your so good at manipulating your readers emotions. (Y)

I like the 'I don't love you' chapter. Brill. (: Update soon.

xoxo

Yayynesss.....sorry I haven't commented very much. Don,t get on very much. >,<
I liked this chapter. Sleep is one of my favorite songs.

i love the latest chapter sleep
but i did not get it at all lol

Wow! That was really amazing! I absolutely love the angle yu have took on this story. There is a really confusing lol, yet brilliant storyline, adn still all that sexiness in the mix! Cant wait for more xD

You gotta update soon!!!
Please?!
Loves this story :D

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i loveee this story lots!!!
gerard is so funny hehe
what a perv

It's an amazing song and an amazing chapter and I really understood it. Some italiced parts are screwed up. 2 of them so I'd look over that but your work is amazing, please continue

O.o
All I remember is Gerard turning orgasmic at the end of this song last year.
Wow, it's the anniversary of that gig at the o2 in, like, 9 days!!!
Wow.
That's just.
Wow.
:shock:
This story is amazing.