The Black Parade - Comments

Great story! My favorite so far is the Mama chapter.

holy shit. that was amazing, best chapter so far in my opinion.

BEEEE-UUUUUUUTIFUL Dahling. Please continue and send Gwen my regards. :-D

WOW, This is the first story in a LONG time that i have gotten into!!
True, the idea has been used, but you make it your own; i love how it can contain houmour and seriousness at the same time; and gerard is very sexy in his acts of molestation.
I look forward to the next update!! xD
I DO. I DO.

I love this story. Frank is so awesome. Ahaha, "Random girl!"
Great update. :]

Cyanide!YouDrank:

One thing that kind of annoyed me was that Nevaeh started laughing during Cancer. I know that some lines in the song are kind of random, but it took me out of the story to read that. It seemed insensitive to Gerard that she laughed, even though she does find him odd.

I resent that. She might just find the lines funny. You can't take Gerard seriously, even Mikey knows that, and he's dying!

“Frankie!” Nevaeh yelled.

“Random girl!” Frank mimicked, running over, picking her up and spinning her around. Okay, not good in his defence for actually being buried with his brain. He finally put her down, dusted off his clothes and spoke, “do I know you?”

“No, not really,” Nevaeh answered.

“Cool,” Frank nodded.

That still cracks me up. My Lord this brings back memories! Sitting in your room discussing hugging Frank and declaring the coolness of Bob and running away from Gerard... oh my, isn't time a horrible thing? I miss those conversations so...

And Mikey's last line! I thought that up! We should so become a crime fighting duo! With capes! SUPERHEROES! I think we'd rule. Or minds combine and wonderful things happen.

Cancer was awesome. You can't help but love Mikey, though. I can't wait until he actually dies to see what happens.

One thing that kind of annoyed me was that Nevaeh started laughing during Cancer. I know that some lines in the song are kind of random, but it took me out of the story to read that. It seemed insensitive to Gerard that she laughed, even though she does find him odd.

It was a wonderful chapter anyway. Update when you can.

Awesome update and totally awesome song too! xD
Update soon please!

*squeals*
god, i luffles this story sooo much. i just randomly found it, so i suscribed & ive just read through it.....& i have to say that its the best portrayal of the black parade that ive read yet. (& believe me, ive read some pretty weird stuff)
i really really really need u to update soon, or else life will not be worth living
*dramatic pose*
:D

S-I-N-I-S-I-N. I think we all all know I sin. How about you? Lol. Anyways, long time no talk. Hope your doing well. Updates are god-like.

<3 Nv.

Now I want to know why Gerard died, seeing as HE SET HIMSELF ON FIRE!!! Yes, because that is a perfectly normal thing to do. The delivery, though, was the best.

I was wondering when some poor innocent MCR fan would get sucked into this story. I guess I have my answer. I love the reaction that Nevaeh had to him and then, of course, gets scared (not to death, cause that would be odd) by the same man.

The sexual manipulation that Gerard caused was priceless. I guess it's all sexual because the only other dance that he can do is the chicken dance and that would get a bit embarrassing.

I'm glad that someone else noticed the random "r" rolling in House of Wolves. How can you roll an "r" in a word with none? Gotta love Gee's awesomeness.

I look forward to Cancer (Mikey-related, yes?) when you can get it up. Or whatever you decide to write next.

Gerard is such a friggin oddball. ^^
I'm pretty sure it was either this version of Gerard or the Gerard's Game version that made me start fancying him- I never liked him until I started reading you and Squizum/Princess Sylvie's fics.

“I set myself alight.”

YES. YES YOU DID. BECAUSE YOU ARE STUPID. VERY VERY STUPID.

And possibly a pyromaniac.

My God that man makes me feel violent.

You need to watch Gwen's musings. They're funny, but sometimes you can't see the logical follow-on from the previous sentence. It's like me going "it's raining... I like tomatoes" I'd need a bit of explanation as to how tomatoes were relevant to rain, wouldn't I?

Nevaeh is not prettiest when she's quiet. Her wit is incredible, and he's going to be very sorry and miss it a lot.

Gerard is scaring me and its not even real :-( “I suppose you like bad men, don’t you, sugar?” Gerard slipped right back into his usual self as he approached Nevaeh, invading her personal space terribly. “Real bad men?” No. Go home. Get a hobby. Piss off.

This is bad. I need to get out more. And listen to this song a few times. How could I forget the sexiness of it?

You can't randomly insert your opinion about what part of the song is the sexy part Lissa! Especially when you're wrong!

:-P

"Yeah, I've scared myself too. That made me laugh, well done lol. And how the fuck does he manage to roll his 'r' in the word 'ashes' which has no 'r' in it? Spooky.

Amazing story.
I love it <3
I can't wait for the next chapter :D

I don't even know what to say when reviewing this story. So many authors have tried to write a story based off of The Black Parade, but this is definitely the best I have read out of them. I mean, death is this huge musical that is absolutely random. How could it get better than that?

I really love how you fit each song into the chapter. I especially loved Welcome to the Black Parade, when Gerard was just kind of assuring the drifter that it was okay to move on because he wouldn't be forgotten and The Sharpest Lives. The party setting and the song definitely fit into the bitterness and anger that you had Gerard feeling. I listened to each song with its chapter and I have to say you pulled everything out of those songs that you could possibly and put them into the chapter.

You could have made Gwen this hugely annoying (not unlike Gerard thus far) Mary Sue, but instead, I root for her to learn the ropes of this highly confusing world. The sarcasm is also just the best. The band is perfectly portrayed (except for the fact that they are still alive, but whatever). Reading about Gerard watching Mikey in his hospital bed and Ray watching his ex-wife die was amazing as far as the emotion. The story of their deaths was hilarious, especially Frank's. I love the fact that he was not at all bothered that he was torn apart on the train tracks. Now it makes me curious to know how and why Gerard killed himself.

I'm sorry that I have rambled through this review, but your story is seriously amazing. I don't think that I could find one thing that I would have changed anywhere. Update soon!

nyehhhhhh....i want an update...

*pokes screen*

genius.

absolute genius.

MORE.

Now.

cant wait for the next chapter :]