What I was going to say before my comment spazzed on me was that I love Veronica's personality. It cracks me up. And I love how you formed Ray's angry side, because he is the last person I expect to act like that. But it fits very well. Maybe we'll see how Veronica's faring in hell soon...?
I reallllllllllllllly love this story. Yeah, it's true. I like this one the best. But, shhhh, don't tell anyone. And while I was waiting for an update I made you something!
Reading that chapter sort of made me like the song more. Your fault. You see, some of the lyrics aren't too bad. And I wouldn't have noticed that if it wasn't for you.
“Miss Jones?” I stopped suddenly and turned. “Welcome to The Black Parade.”
That line made me crack up the last time I read it, and somehow age has only made it funnier. I just have a thing for dramatic irony, I suppose.
I really, really, really want you to hurry up with House of Wolves. I like that one muchly, I do I do.
That's all I can freaking say. I feel so bad for him.
I really have nothing better to say than amazing chapter. It's rare that you can find a story told in on person's point of view, but you can feel the hurt and pain of another person. Did that make since? Well, none the less, great chapter.
I was already cracking up just by reading the summary!
(not much then, because I'm probably as funny as a squid. But what do you know? Squids could have great senses of humor, and perhaps starfish have excellent sex drives, only heaven knows, perhaps God, too.) :lmfao
A bleached blonde guy sitting at the end of my bed dressed like a reject from the Sergeant Peppers Lonely Hearts Club band singing.
I’ve lost it, completely utterly mentally insane.
“Now come one come all to this tragic affair.” You know he wasn’t half-bad at this singing thing, for a figment of my fucking imagination.
Do you have any idea how much that made me laugh?
“I know... everything.” He said in a dreamy sort of way, but he ruined the whole mysterious thing by laughing his head off. Whatever this guy was he was giving it a bad name. “And, in answer to the second bit, you’re really not funny, sugar.”
My sense of humor is about the same as yours, so I guess Sergeant Pepper guy doesn’t like our senses of humor. He obviously sucks at life. Or in this case death…
I wonder about this Gerard, I seriously do. Yeah…I tend to wonder about the real one as well…
Bob nodded; he seemed to do a lot of that. You got their personalities about right.
Franks death made me bust out into uncontrollable laughter. Is that bad? Ray’s death was sad. Bob’s way of dying was interesting. For some reason I imagined my friend Allie on the plane with him, her surviving and going into some serious emotional breakdown…Meh.
I wanna know how Gerard died. :cheese:
And yes, your ways of killing them off were quite eventful. I liked Frank’s the best.