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THIS STORY IS AMAZING. OFF TO THE SEQUEL!

MY HEART IS BROKEN
THE ONLY CURE IS FINNICK AND LANA IN TIGHT SPACES
COUGH SEX COUGH

yeah well okay this is just pure awesomeness and i'm moving along with the sequel now..
still haven't gotten around to reading the books- have others still to read AND my oldest brothers wife borrowed them soooo.. hahah but I don't care still gonna read you story because reasons

That end though
If you wrote your own book I would read it in a heartbeat
You have talent maaaaayn
BUT THE SEQUEL UGH cannot wait!

This was so perfect I can't even begin to explain. You are amazing and the sequel is going to be amazing I can't wait. :))

They took Cain AND Mags
Nah brah
Not cool, Capitol, not cool...

and now you made me want to cry!
they took cain i'm sooo sad right now!! and mags too!
holy moly!

I don't even..... I can't even... Just wow. Amazing! Update soon!! Ah man the wait is gonna kill me... ;)

I don't even..... I can't even... Just wow. Amazing! Update soon!! Ah man the wait is gonna kill me... ;)

she...i...what the fuck man.
stupid.
give cain back.
i'm starting a riot.

I'M IN A GLASS CASE OF EMOTION
UP AND DOWN AND UP AND DOWN AND I'M DEAD OKAY
THIS BROKE MY HEART AND I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW
NOELLE, I CAN'T EVEN RIGHT NOW
Finnick is forever perfect and I don't know how to handle it.
Ugh poor sweet baby Cain. My heart is shattered for him and I just ugh. Cain.
I wanna hug Lana. Poor gal. So much sad.

This story is literally the best story I've ever read, revolving around The Hunger Games, I couldn't put it down hahaha. You're such an amazing writer!! I'd love a sequel but I understand what you mean about how the story ends (: I just wanna read more of your writing!! It's brilliant :D update again whenever you can!!

OMG FINNICK YOU PERFECT MAN UGHHHHH
SO HAPPY THEY SAFE BUT MY POOR BBY PEETA
Also, yes, Coin sucked major butthole.
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL SHE SEES HER BROTHER!

well holy.. I do not like president coin.. what a bitch..
got all three books but haven't read them yet..

Yes! I finally got around to reading your update! If you end the story in the second book I'm not going to complain because i really don't want to live through book three again :'[ Now I'm going to go back through this story and reread it again because it's been awhile.

AMAZING AS USUAL
I SWEAR TO GOD YOUR DESCRIPTIONS THOUGH...
UPDATE V V V SOON!

OMG THE INTENSITY I AM HAVING ANXIETY
WHY IS FINNICK SO PERFECT

aawe! damn that's got to hurt like a mother......!!
buuuut they got to the tree!
can't wait to find out what happens next!

This story is absolutely amazing, and I can easily say that it's the best Finnick Odair story on here! Can't wait for your next update!

This story is absolutely amazing, and I can easily say that it's the best Finnick Odair story on here! Can't wait for your next update!