Impavid - Comments

I'm obsessed with this story. I start screaming everytime I see an update.
But Finnick...sighhhh angry Finnick is so sexy. I understand both sides. Finnick wants Lana to be safe. And with Lana because Mags is an amazing women who means to much to her.
So much!
Can't wait for the next one.

I'm obsessed with this story. I start screaming everytime I see an update.
But Finnick...sighhhh angry Finnick is so sexy. I understand both sides. Finnick wants Lana to be safe. And with Lana because Mags is an amazing women who means to much to her.
So much!
Can't wait for the next one.

Aw wah Cain is just adorable! And Lana loves him so much and that moment before she left... *tears*
Update again! I wanna see the action

Oh my gosh, poor little Cain. He is so cute!
And angry Finnick is sexy. Just sayin'. He can shout at me all he wants as long as we have hot makeup sex haha.
Have I told you lately how much I freaking LOOOOOOVE this story?
Because I'm obsessed.

ah! they kissed! they kissed! they kissed!

so even though I knew how the reaping would go I was still fighting that nauseated *oh no something bad is going to happen* feeling

ahh

finnick is pissssseddd! and that kiss was some juicy shit!

Gahhh! That kiss.
Woo. (Fans myself)
And boy is he pissed. I seriously will check my subscriptions every second now until this updates. Lmao

The subtitle is very fitting
Ah wow go Lana
AND THAT KISS AHG PLEASE
MORE!

OH MY GOD FREAKING FINALLY SO MUCH TENSION
BUILD ME UP TO SMASH ME DOWN. Though I always knew she'd be going in with him.

BOY IS HE PISSED. That wouldn't stop me, Finnick. Be mad all you want. it's sexy.

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL YET HEARTBREAKING AT THE SAME TIME OH MY GOD SO AMAZING.

they just need to do it. so much sexual tention it's not even funny!

They need the frick frack
Update soon, I can't stand it any longer!!

They need the frick frack
Update soon, I can't stand it any longer!!

So. Beyond. Obsessed. These two ... they just get to me like no other.
I'm so scared for the next chapter yet so excited.
UGH SO GOOD

Oh gosh the end was just precious I'm so scared for the reaping!

I totally fell for Finnick in catching fire. I loooovvveee this story.

Yay Cain! He's adorable!

I love this shift in perception she has! That she's ready to take herself back from the games. Can't wait for more (:

Oh my gosh Cain being the tough drill sergeant was so freaking cute!
Finnick can pin me ANY TIME.

I LOVE THIS STORY IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!! And I love Lana she is really great and I love her and Finnick I can't wait for them to really get together but I like the pace you have set for that!! :) I usually don't beg, but please please please update soon!

AHHHH absolutely adore this!

I noticed a few minor things that could be fixed, like point of view (you switch from first person point of view to third person sometimes) and homonyms (won, not one. accepted, not excepted. etc!) but other than that, it was great :)

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