December 28th, 2008 at 04:37am
You Are The One - Comments
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she get's back with Zack right??December 28th, 2008 at 12:43am
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i'm sad it's going to be over soon but i'm looking forward to the sequel!!
it's so sad though. i hope they'll get a happy end.
merry christmas. :)December 25th, 2008 at 12:20am -
Right then Zack, get your fucking act together and stop pissing and moaning. Do something! Attempt to stop the whole "I - wanna - bite - you - so - bad" thing, and start to woo her again. Right from the whole first date idea. Do it all properly, with roses on her porch, secret presents left in her locker. Do it all - and sign it with your name, a kiss, and some love. You can win her back; she hasn't lost love for you - she can't do that. All she's lost is the strength to wait for you, so you gotta get your act together and DO shit. Not just piss and moan.
More soon??December 17th, 2008 at 04:28pm -
Loved it.December 17th, 2008 at 07:41am
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soooooo!
were gunna finish this 1 off on a sad note?December 17th, 2008 at 03:15am -
soooooo!
were gunna finish this 1 off on a sad note?December 17th, 2008 at 03:15am -
ohmygosh
it just keeps getting better andbetterDecember 17th, 2008 at 01:44am -
*falls off chair in shock* WHAT THE FUCK DID SHE JUST DO?!! I think I just misread the chapter completely... she didn't just dump him, did she??
More soon??December 15th, 2008 at 08:24pm -
WORSE?!
Bugger.December 15th, 2008 at 07:34am -
le gasp!
ebony!
honestly, ebony needs to go bulk up on some fighting strategies.
thad b hott!
thaz right two "t"sDecember 15th, 2008 at 06:08am -
wow
this is amaaazing!
everyday i look to see if its updated =)
amaaaazing =)December 15th, 2008 at 06:04am -
HOLY SHIT!!!
but i am glad ebony wants to live....it might seem selfish but she needs to before she gives her life
but i hope she doesnt age that much or else she would look older than zackDecember 15th, 2008 at 12:11am -
hihi are is that eventually better stuff for this story or are we gonna have to wait for the sequel..'cause damn you can make paranoid in the characters place XPDecember 14th, 2008 at 11:41pm
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awww, so sad. i want a happy end though. *pouts* update soon!!December 14th, 2008 at 08:03pm
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this story is soooo awsome...i havnt actually read Twilight coz EVERYONE is reading it...im not one to follow the crowds!!..my sister has..but it makes me wanna read it!! awsome awsome story...i give congrats to you on it!!! KEEP GOING!!! lol
BrittxxxDecember 11th, 2008 at 04:23am -
update soon??December 6th, 2008 at 01:47am
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i want them back together for good and the last few chapters were sooo sad. :(December 5th, 2008 at 06:58pm
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Zack - get off your pansy ass and get over there to apologise. Leave her little recorded messages about how sorry you are. Leave her notes that tell her you're sorry. Buy her shit like little teddies with "I'm Sorry" written on them. Buy her her favourite flowers and leave them at her house. Don't just sit at home and cry - even if you are crying blood. GET THE FUCK OFF YOUR ASS AND STOP FUCKING WALLOWING. DO something. Trying involves action - you're doing jack shit.
Ebony - stop being quite so sensitive, grow a thick skin and some bollocks. Get over to his house and shout at him. Force him to face you - tell him how you're feeling. If you can't do that leave him a letter with how you're feeling in it.
Anyways - more soon??December 2nd, 2008 at 08:30pm -
so um, hey, am a new reader :)
i have to say, this is the first vampire story i've read, but i really like your style and ideas :) i hope you update soonDecember 2nd, 2008 at 08:11pm
u only have four chapter left?
why not just post them all?
and then you can start the squel and be done with it!!!
that may sound really bitchy
sorry
i just wanna keep reading.