You Are The One - Comments

YOU DID WHAT!! How could you do that to them?! Why? Zack's gonna appear right, and make it all ok? He's not going to spend the next story moping about and being all sad because his girlfriend died due to wierdo freak attacker? It's all going to be ok, yeah? TELL ME IT'S ALL GOING TO BE OK!
more soon??

ok so i never excepted that

holy shit

i can't wait till tomorrow!

WHAT???? She got shot?????
Where the fuck is Zack, he should have known......god damn it.....
ok i'm done being angry. lol.
I can't wait for more.....er.... the last one :(
hurry hurry :D

OMG! Really? You are really leaving us there to wait for tomorrow. -sigh- I know, I know, I started reading late and I didn't post a comment til now. But your story is amazing and while it is twlight-ish, it is not. I love it. And I want to read the next one now. :-(

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh, no!

UPDATE.

zacky better come in and save her. turn her or something! or someone else for that matter. all i know is that one was tear-worthy haha.

Hey! I'm a new reader.

I just spent over an hour and a half reading all forty-something chapters. My eyes hurt. :weird.

Anyway, I love the story concept. It's really really unique. I'll be waiting for the next update. Awesome work. :)

Take care.

Loved ittt

ohmygosh
i cant wait to see what her decision is!

OOoh shit... I don't think Ebony likes being a possession Zack...
More soon??

hey, I'm loving this story, its way, way better than anything I write )= but I cant wait until the end, and then for the sequal!! (=

update soon pleasE??

hell yeah, he's fighting for her now.

update soon!! :)

Oi I love this story, been subscirbed since forty-four, i know, late in the game But I'm sitting going. ooooooow! I want more! So a nice update and I'll be a happy subscriber =D

Im looking forward to more.

Its getting intense.

How can you be so good at writing?! I'm jealous, lol. Your stories are absolutely amazing I must say. :)

xx.

:O as if you let her find someone else.....lol.
She needs to be with Zack. :(
Can't wait to read more and see what else is gonna happen *does a happy dance cuz I like this story* lol.
More soon???? pwease???

you know i was about to tell you to make a new boy character for ebony but you already have, this just what i wanted, another guy that truly loves ebony 'cause he isn't a jerk, he does love her right???????

ahhhh i love the name tom=Dno more like i love tom=DD

:O zack has to win her back ... soon !
x

where did this 'Tom' character come from?! i scoff at him for that little kissing stint. heeelloooo? they just met!

we just need for Zack to swarm in and sweep her off her feet and they can live forever and ever. the end.

:D