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  • illyria

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    And then there was an update Clap
    what i really liked about this chapter was the part about Harry, he was like there own movie data base, i thought that was awesome XD

    Can't wait for your next update

    OT: i love The Walking Dead
    November 4th, 2014 at 05:32pm
  • illyria

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    Thanks for letting me know about Dead & Sick.
    I can't believe how much it's like 'Mistakes are what we're made of' (at least that's what i thought was the first ones name), yet it's still different. I really liked that all the names are the same even the kidnappers name were the same, but what i liked the most was that we learned a bit more about Audrey's background. In 'Mistakes' i found that part a bit rushed, they went to a party, got kidnapped and then boom sigmund's(?) manor. But in this one we got to learn a bit about her parents and how the kids got there nicknames and stuff and i really appreciated that, it's slower paced and i like that.

    I've always liked Audrey's character and my favorite well i'm waiting patiently for him Smile
    I don't think i have to tell you who i'm waiting for Razz
    And even though Daniel wasn't my favorite, i'm kind of hoping that when comes in the picture he gets a bit more progress because i always got the feeling his character got a bit rushed. Does that make sense? or am i saying something strange?

    btw: Congratz on your engagement and soon to be wedding
    October 29th, 2014 at 01:16pm
  • MissyPrissy

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    I hope you update soon! I can't wait to read what happens...
    October 23rd, 2014 at 04:17am
  • Sims3_109

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    By the by the end of it I was in tears... :'( update soon please
    October 21st, 2014 at 01:40am
  • Sims3_109

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    Hey I really like where this story is going XD it's super long though... my advice is to shorten your chapters even if it means having more. However in saying that it is the opening chapter and the opening chapter should do the plot and characters justice. Which this chapter certainly did. Congrats btw, on your engagement and upcoming wedding :) I hope you and your partner live a long and prosperous life together XDXD update soon please :)
    October 18th, 2014 at 02:31pm