Broken Pieces - Comments

@ Waking-The-Fallen
Yay, my favorite part of updating! Recieving one of your comments! You leave the best ones! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it and I know it was emotional for the characters. Those are my favorite to write, no matter the emotion, I love writing intense scenes! I'm glad I did well enough to make you want more! And as far as where everyone goes from here, keep reading and see! Thanks so much again for being such a faithful reader and always leaving comments that actually tell me what you thought of the chapter. You are the best! Mwah!

@ Dancing.With.Myself
You had me wanting more the moment I finished the last chapter. Oh my! A emotional chapter for everyone involved and glad they both got to say what they had too. Just leaves me wondering where everyone goes from here. I hope she will be alright after everything and she will need Bruno's support after all this. Great chapter and can't wait for another chapter. :D

@Waking-The-Fallen
Hahha I'm sorry! I only have time to write a little at a time and I like to leave them on cliff hangers so the reader will be eager to read the next chapter!

Your killing me with the tension and cliffhanger! :D

@ Waking-The-Fallen
You leave the best comments. You're so awesome! And yes it is definitely good Bruno is in her life while she deals with it. Who knows if she could without him there for support! I hope you are still enjoying the story. Thank you so much for reading and commenting so faithfully you are loved!!

I'm happy Bruno was there when all this was happening. Talking to him may be the right thing for her but after everything I don't think he should just be allowed to be back in her life. Too much time and things have happened and I hope she gets what she needs from this meeting.

@ Waking-The-Fallen
Aw I hope I did not trigger anything! Thank you so much for your comment and I hope whatever she chooses to do you will still enjoy reading the story. And darn it! I hate when it does that. Thanks for the heads up!! You are loved!!!

Ok this chapter hits a little too close to home for me. I completely understand were she coming from and kinda hope she doesn't forgive her father because so much time has past ( and personal reason come into play here) but whatever happens I hope she can start moving on from everything and move pass everything. :)
Also, the chapter posted twice.

@ Waking-The-Fallen
Yay a comment! And actually talking about the story!! You're the greatest!!
And we will see!

What! WTF! Can't they caught a break?! Let's hope this doesn't cause trouble for them. I'm happy that they both are doing something they love and that Bruno is getting his life back. I really do love your characters. :)

@ jaylon1134
Thank you so much for the comment! I try my best,though I know I make a lot of mistakes that I don't catch, so it is relieving to know it isn't that bad. Hahah. I am so glad you are enjoying it and I hope you continue to do so! Thank you again for commenting I love comments and no one ever really comments on stories anymore for some reason, even though it always makes the writer's day

This story is great. I love a good story with understandable grammar and wonderful characters

@ McLover
Thank you for commenting! I know it's been FOREVER. I just haven't been finding the time to do much writing unfortunately. But I'm so glad I still have some readers! Hahahah. Hopefully I will find more time now!

It's been a long time! Wow...that was crazy. I got a little startled by the chapter, but it was really good. Thanks for the update

LOL

@ dmc1991
I FINALLY UPDATED!! Hope you enjoy:)

@ dmc1991
I'm sorry!! Soon I hope. Haha. I will try to asap.

So...when are you updating? Got me hooked lol

@ McLover
This comment made my day! Thank you so much! It means a lot. I have been worried about people liking this because it's not really something you see when someone is writing a love story. But I really wanted to try something different.
I have a finished Bruno story as well if you wanted to check that out, too.
Thanks so much again for commenting and all the awesome praises.

I stumbled across this last night and I don't find a lot of good Bruno Mars fiction, but this...THIS!! This is really well written and instead of rushing into the change in relationship dynamic you are taking your time. I appreciate that. I also like how you have written Bruno. Keep up the good work.